Tujh bin main kuch bhi nahin !!!

by Talat on March 03, 2007, 02:14:05 AM
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ranjana
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«Reply #15 on: March 06, 2007, 07:23:38 AM »
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bahut khoob talat ...wonderful job ... Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #16 on: March 06, 2007, 06:09:55 PM »
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Ankur, Paani and Ranju...aap ka tah-e-dil se shukriya meri poem pasand karne ke liye Usual Smile
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #17 on: March 07, 2007, 06:06:59 AM »
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jalta hua aashiyaan hun main
par tujh bin main kuch bhi nahi

ak chaman ki khusbu hun main
par tujh bin main kuch bhi nahi.

kahte hai log mujhe teri mehbooba
par yea mehboba tujh bin kuch bhi nahi..

shama hi main mad mast shamo ki
par tujh bin main kuch bhi nahi

utthi lehro ki dhadkan hun main,,,
par tujh bin main kuch bi nahi
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Talat
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«Reply #18 on: March 07, 2007, 11:40:08 AM »
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Very good Divya, really nice one. Thank you for writing here ! Usual Smile
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #19 on: March 07, 2007, 11:57:49 AM »
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Its my pleasure.. but aap jesa nahi likh sakti....
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Pooja
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«Reply #20 on: March 07, 2007, 03:11:49 PM »
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bahoot ache Divya!!

Meri her ada hai tujhse
Tere karan hi masat jaati hu

Jab bhi hote ho tum khush
Mehak mai khud main jaati hu

Karati hu tumse ladai
Tere payar ,aon bigardi jaati hu

Tu nahi to kuch bhi nahi
Tere bin Bejaan main ho jaati hu !!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #21 on: March 07, 2007, 10:51:04 PM »
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Very nice Pooja...aap humare thread main aayin, yahan ki raunaq barh gayi :D

...and Divya, aap bohot achcha likhti hain :D
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Pooja
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«Reply #22 on: March 08, 2007, 01:54:18 AM »
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kaya baat kah di apne Talat ji... Yoindia ki her thread meri apni he hai Usual Smile

her pal ek ahat ki aass rahti hai
tere ahsaas main teri hi payaas rahti hai
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ALONE BAD
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«Reply #23 on: March 08, 2007, 10:30:00 AM »
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Khuda kabhi bhi woh din na dikhaaye
Tum aur main jab Hum reh na jaayen

Bohot pathreeli hain yeh ulfat ki raahain
Chalte chalte kahin aable parh na jaayen

Saja to liye khwaab aankhon main lekin
Bikhar kar ye palkon par hi reh na jaayen

Main tera aaeena hoon, hai tu aks mera
Yeh sach ek jhoota bharam ban na jaaye

Yeh kaisi tadap uth rahi hai aaj dil main
Tujhe yaad karte, mera dam nikal na jaaye





bahoot khuub Talat ji... bahoot aacha likha hai aapne....  :razz:

daad kubul kijiyae....
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Dr.Saira999
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«Reply #24 on: March 08, 2007, 01:18:45 PM »
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kaya baat kah di apne Talat ji... Yoindia ki her thread meri apni he hai Usual Smile

her pal ek ahat ki aass rahti hai
tere ahsaas main teri hi payaas rahti hai


Kya shayari likhi aapne Pooji ji.
Bahut accha laga padh kar Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #25 on: March 08, 2007, 10:40:19 PM »
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Waah Pooja...do lines main kya baat kahi hai ! Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #26 on: March 08, 2007, 10:41:09 PM »
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Khuda kabhi bhi woh din na dikhaaye
Tum aur main jab Hum reh na jaayen

Bohot pathreeli hain yeh ulfat ki raahain
Chalte chalte kahin aable parh na jaayen

Saja to liye khwaab aankhon main lekin
Bikhar kar ye palkon par hi reh na jaayen

Main tera aaeena hoon, hai tu aks mera
Yeh sach ek jhoota bharam ban na jaaye

Yeh kaisi tadap uth rahi hai aaj dil main
Tujhe yaad karte, mera dam nikal na jaaye





bahoot khuub Talat ji... bahoot aacha likha hai aapne....  :razz:

daad kubul kijiyae....




Bohot bohot shukriya Alone Usual Smile
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javedarshad
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«Reply #27 on: March 10, 2007, 04:17:30 AM »
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Hi Talat
Mashallah se kafi taraqqi nazar aa rahi hai

Yun hi dheere dheere khuwab jawan hute hain


keep it up nice one
kh
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anjani_si
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«Reply #28 on: March 10, 2007, 04:31:10 AM »
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Khuda kabhi bhi woh din na dikhaaye
Tum aur main jab Hum reh na jaayen

Bohot pathreeli hain yeh ulfat ki raahain
Chalte chalte kahin aable parh na jaayen

Saja to liye khwaab aankhon main lekin
Bikhar kar ye palkon par hi reh na jaayen

Main tera aaeena hoon, hai tu aks mera
Yeh sach ek jhoota bharam ban na jaaye

Yeh kaisi tadap uth rahi hai aaj dil main
Tujhe yaad karte, mera dam nikal na jaaye


toooooo gud appiiiiiiiiiii
MASHALLAH-MASHALLAH!!! :D
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«Reply #29 on: March 10, 2007, 09:27:56 AM »
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Quote from: "Talat"
Khuda kabhi bhi woh din na dikhaaye
Tum aur main jab Hum reh na jaayen

Bohot pathreeli hain yeh ulfat ki raahain
Chalte chalte kahin aable parh na jaayen

Saja to liye khwaab aankhon main lekin
Bikhar kar ye palkon par hi reh na jaayen

Main tera aaeena hoon, hai tu aks mera
Yeh sach ek jhoota bharam ban na jaaye

Yeh kaisi tadap uth rahi hai aaj dil main
Tujhe yaad karte, mera dam nikal na jaaye


toooooo gud appiiiiiiiiiii
MASHALLAH-MASHALLAH!!! :D


Badh gayee hain dooriyan ab aur  mujhe sada na de
Tere bagair main jee sakoon mujhe aisi  koi  dua  de

Tumhari  kami to  rahegi ta-umar  meri  zindagi mein
main bhool jaon har baat  koi  aisi  mujhe koi dawa de

tumhari yaadein  har shaam mere dil ko jala jaati hain
jo  sukoon  de  mujhe  koi  aisi  mujhe koi hawa de

muddaton  se  soya  nahi main aankhon bahot jalan hai
ek sab  so  sakoon   main  mujhe aisi koi rida  de........
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