Tujh ko kyaa shama’a jalaaney mein bhi dar lagtaa hai?

by abdbundeli on April 22, 2009, 01:23:50 PM
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Aap key roo-b-roo aaney mein bhi dar lagtaa hai!
Aankh sey aankh milaaney mein bhi dar lagtaa hai!!

Baam par aaye, na aaye: sanam ki marzee hai:
Minnateyn kar key bulaaney mein bhi dar lagtaa hai!

Jo sataatey hain subah-shaam shab-o-roz hamain:
Unhain nazar sey sataaney mein bhi dar lagtaa hai!

Huzoor-e-noor key charchey rawaan hain koochoun mein;
Hamain to, sunaney-sunaaney mein bhi dar lagtaa hai!

Tamaam raat jaagtey hain:  baam ho roshan!
Khwaab mein un ko jagaaney mein bhi dar lagtaa hai!!

Sunaa hai, muntazir hain woh, ki, maah ug aaye!
Koochah-e-yaar hai: jaaney mein bhi dar lagtaa hai!!

Un kee tanhaaiyoun kaa, ab to, shukra kar dey adaa!
Dour-e-khalwat ko bhunaaney mein bhi dar lagtaa hai?

Raat taareek hai: koyee, ‘abd’, dagar mein hai!
Tujh ko kyaa shama’a jalaaney mein bhi dar lagtaa hai?

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«Reply #1 on: April 22, 2009, 01:27:46 PM »
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Very beautiful....very nice....Bohot hi achcha Babu ji
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«Reply #2 on: April 22, 2009, 02:59:39 PM »
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Wah bhai wahhhhhhhhhh samajh me nahi aa raha kis andaz me dad du, ek bohat hi nayaab Tohfa diya hain aapne Yoindians ko. Kitna maza aaya bayaan nahi kar sakta.....Is kalam ke aage likhne ki jurrat hi nahi ho rahi par aadat se majboor jo hu  DOH

Unko apna man chuke to ek muddat hui hain ABD
Bazm-e-mehfil q unhe phir apna pukarne se dar lagta hain

Baat aisi nahi ke mujhme iqrar-e-mohabbat ka hausla nahi
Bas ek us mehjabeen ke inkaar se dar lagta hain

GHAYEL ke samne hum unka charcha nahi karte
Aashiqi ke mamle me uske hunar se dar lagta hain

-SG-
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«Reply #3 on: April 22, 2009, 03:01:55 PM »
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Aap key roo-b-roo aaney mein bhi dar lagtaa hai!
Aankh sey aankh milaaney mein bhi dar lagtaa hai!!

Baam par aaye, na aaye: sanam ki marzee hai:
Minnateyn kar key bulaaney mein bhi dar lagtaa hai!

Jo sataatey hain subah-shaam shab-o-roz hamain:
Unhain nazar sey sataaney mein bhi dar lagtaa hai!

Huzoor-e-noor key charchey rawaan hain koochoun mein;
Hamain to, sunaney-sunaaney mein bhi dar lagtaa hai!

Tamaam raat jaagtey hain:  baam ho roshan!
Khwaab mein un ko jagaaney mein bhi dar lagtaa hai!!

Sunaa hai, muntazir hain woh, ki, maah ug aaye!
Koochah-e-yaar hai: jaaney mein bhi dar lagtaa hai!!

Un kee tanhaaiyoun kaa, ab to, shukra kar dey adaa!
Dour-e-khalwat ko bhunaaney mein bhi dar lagtaa hai?

Raat taareek hai: koyee, ‘abd’, dagar mein hai!
Tujh ko kyaa shama’a jalaaney mein bhi dar lagtaa hai?

                                        - abd bundeli



Superb Job Abd Bhaiya, Kamaal ki Ghazal Hai Mashallah,.
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«Reply #4 on: April 22, 2009, 04:59:57 PM »
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Computer kholen aur aapki ghazalen na paane main bhi dar lagata hai
Kya baat hai Bulandi sahib, wonderful.
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #5 on: April 22, 2009, 05:22:43 PM »
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bahoot khoob Abd ji and nice reply Sajid!!
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«Reply #6 on: April 23, 2009, 04:01:48 AM »
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Very beautiful....very nice....Bohot hi achcha Babu ji
Thanks a lot, bitia Celmira!
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«Reply #7 on: April 23, 2009, 04:11:35 AM »
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Wah bhai wahhhhhhhhhh samajh me nahi aa raha kis andaz me dad du, ek bohat hi nayaab Tohfa diya hain aapne Yoindians ko. Kitna maza aaya bayaan nahi kar sakta.....Is kalam ke aage likhne ki jurrat hi nahi ho rahi par aadat se majboor jo hu  DOH


Unko apna man chuke to ek muddat hui hain ABD
Bazm-e-mehfil q unhe phir apna pukarne se dar lagta hain

Baat aisi nahi ke mujhme iqrar-e-mohabbat ka hausla nahi
Bas ek us mehjabeen ke inkaar se dar lagta hain

GHAYEL ke samne hum unka charcha nahi karte
Aashiqi ke mamle me uske hunar se dar lagta hain

-SG-
SG bhai! Lots of thanks for your kind views and feelings!
 
Kaantey ugey gulaab mein,
Nayan huye bey-chain!
Gunchah eik chhupaa dikhaa:
Kaatey katey na rain!!

           - abd bundeli
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«Reply #8 on: April 23, 2009, 04:16:37 AM »
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Superb Job Abd Bhaiya, Kamaal ki Ghazal Hai Mashallah,.

Thanks a lot, bhai Jaanasheen ji!
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«Reply #9 on: April 23, 2009, 04:18:13 AM »
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Computer kholen aur aapki ghazalen na paane main bhi dar lagata hai
Kya baat hai Bulandi sahib, wonderful.
SARVESH RASTOGI

Thanks a lot, SARVESH RASTOGI ji!
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«Reply #10 on: April 23, 2009, 04:19:26 AM »
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bahoot khoob Abd ji and nice reply Sajid!!
Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Pooja ji!
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«Reply #11 on: April 23, 2009, 05:29:11 AM »
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Wah bhai wahhhhhhhhhh samajh me nahi aa raha kis andaz me dad du, ek bohat hi nayaab Tohfa diya hain aapne Yoindians ko. Kitna maza aaya bayaan nahi kar sakta.....Is kalam ke aage likhne ki jurrat hi nahi ho rahi par aadat se majboor jo hu  DOH

Unko apna man chuke to ek muddat hui hain ABD
Bazm-e-mehfil q unhe phir apna pukarne se dar lagta hain

Baat aisi nahi ke mujhme iqrar-e-mohabbat ka hausla nahi
Bas ek us mehjabeen ke inkaar se dar lagta hain

GHAYEL ke samne hum unka charcha nahi karte
Aashiqi ke mamle me uske hunar se dar lagta hain

-SG-


WAAH WAAH WAAH WAAH......  SUBHAN ALLAH SUBHAN ALLAH... YAAR FILMON MAIN KUCH CONTRIBUTION DO ..!!!
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«Reply #12 on: April 23, 2009, 05:32:35 AM »
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   KYA AIHTARAAM HAI MOHABBAT MAIN...Abd.....zordaar...!!

  bahut hi sanjidgi sey sajaaye huey alfaaz hain... SUBHAN ALLAH
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«Reply #13 on: April 23, 2009, 06:40:49 AM »
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   KYA AIHTARAAM HAI MOHABBAT MAIN...Abd.....zordaar...!!

  bahut hi sanjidgi sey sajaaye huey alfaaz hain... SUBHAN ALLAH

Thanks a lot, khamosh_aawaaz ji!
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