Tujhe Rab Kahu........(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on February 16, 2009, 07:46:49 AM
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Dedicating this light hearted song to the beautiful surpise i got this morning.....usually yeh mera style nahi kahi galti hui ho to mafi chahta hu.

Tujhe rab kahu ya na kahu
Tu bata tujhe main kya kahu
Meri jaan tu iman tu
Mera dil kahe tujhe sab kahu

Tu meri ham_nashee meri jan-e-jaa.n
Tujhse hain raushan mera jaha.n
Mujhe chedte hain sab yaha
Tujhe dilruba jab jab kahu

Main geet likhu ya ghazal nayee
Tujhse hi mehke meri shayri
Main bhala likhu ya bura likhu
Main khaak hu par tujhe aasma.n likhu

Meri bato ka tu karle yaqeen
Main bura magar dil bura nahi
Ghayel hain thoda shayer bura
Tu kahe to kisi aur ka kalam kahu

-Sajid Ghayel-


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«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2009, 07:51:53 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 16, 2009, 07:46:49 AM
Dedicating this light hearted song to the beautiful surpise i got this morning.....usually yeh mera style nahi kahi galti hui ho to mafi chahta hu.

Tujhe rab kahu ya na kahu
Tu bata tujhe main kya kahu
Meri jaan tu iman tu
Mera dil kahe tujhe sab kahu

Tu meri ham_nashee meri jan-e-jaa.n
Tujhse se hain raushan mera jaha.n
Mujhe chedte hain sab yaha
Tujhe dilruba jab jab kahu

Main geet likhu ya ghazal nayee
Tujhse hi mehke meri shayri
Main bhala likhu ya bura likhu
Main khaak hu par tujhe aasma.n likhu

Meri bato ka tu karle yaqeen
Main bura magar dil bura nahi
Ghayel hain thoda shayer bura
Tu kahe to kisi aur ka kalam kahu

-Sajid Ghayel-



Wah bahut khoob likha hai aapne Sajid ji..Galatiyan aapka likhe pe kuch kahu itna mujhe gyaan nahi ..Very well writtern and expressive lines.
I liked it.
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2009, 08:50:18 AM »
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Very nice Creation Sajid ji.
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«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2009, 01:10:43 PM »
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wah janab...........cha gaye mahsallah kia baat hai sajid sahab bhut khoob..........kaash ke aisi sifat hame bhi hasil ho

jeene ki har tarhan se tamanna haseen hai
har shur ke baawajood ye duniya haseen hai

sehra ka har sukoot darata rhe to kia
jangal ko kaatta hua rasta haseen hai

dil dehlaye laakh ghatao.n ki ghan garaj
mitti pe jo gira hai wo qatra haseen hai

dehshat dila rahi hain chatanain to kia hua
patthar mi jo sanam hai wo kitna haseen hai(a poetry by jaanisaar akhtar)
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«Reply #4 on: February 16, 2009, 01:22:04 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 16, 2009, 07:46:49 AM
Dedicating this light hearted song to the beautiful surpise i got this morning.....usually yeh mera style nahi kahi galti hui ho to mafi chahta hu.

Tujhe rab kahu ya na kahu
Tu bata tujhe main kya kahu
Meri jaan tu iman tu
Mera dil kahe tujhe sab kahu

Tu meri ham_nashee meri jan-e-jaa.n
Tujhse hain raushan mera jaha.n
Mujhe chedte hain sab yaha
Tujhe dilruba jab jab kahu

Main geet likhu ya ghazal nayee
Tujhse hi mehke meri shayri
Main bhala likhu ya bura likhu
Main khaak hu par tujhe aasma.n likhu

Meri bato ka tu karle yaqeen
Main bura magar dil bura nahi
Ghayel hain thoda shayer bura
Tu kahe to kisi aur ka kalam kahu

-Sajid Ghayel-



This is one of your most lovely creations Sajid Ji
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: February 16, 2009, 01:22:43 PM »
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Nice Sharing by you Aaina Ji
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chitralsony
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«Reply #6 on: February 16, 2009, 07:53:11 PM »
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chahay geet likhay ya ghazal likhay
tu hamesha wo bara pur aser likhay
tu hr  giz nahi  hay shayer  bura
tu nay saray lafaz hi mutaber likhay

i dedicate my this sher to ghayel ji
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«Reply #7 on: February 17, 2009, 09:19:41 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 16, 2009, 07:51:53 AM
Wah bahut khoob likha hai aapne Sajid ji..Galatiyan aapka likhe pe kuch kahu itna mujhe gyaan nahi ..Very well writtern and expressive lines.
I liked it.

Arey tumhare Gyaan ki gehraiee me jana padega ek din  DOH Thank for encouragement Roja.

Quote from: @kaash on February 16, 2009, 08:21:32 AM
waah ..Sajid bhai...bahut hi achha likha hai aur
nayaab tarah se jazbaaton ko pesh kia hai aapne...  Clapping Smiley

wonderful post...too nice... Clapping Smiley

Bohat bohat shukriyaan Kaash..

Quote from: Sophi on February 16, 2009, 08:50:18 AM
Very nice Creation Sajid ji.

Thank You Sophie....

Quote from: aaina on February 16, 2009, 01:10:43 PM
wah janab...........cha gaye mahsallah kia baat hai sajid sahab bhut khoob..........kaash ke aisi sifat hame bhi hasil ho

jeene ki har tarhan se tamanna haseen hai
har shur ke baawajood ye duniya haseen hai

sehra ka har sukoot darata rhe to kia
jangal ko kaatta hua rasta haseen hai

dil dehlaye laakh ghatao.n ki ghan garaj
mitti pe jo gira hai wo qatra haseen hai

dehshat dila rahi hain chatanain to kia hua
patthar mi jo sanam hai wo kitna haseen hai(a poetry by jaanisaar akhtar)

Aray Aslam q sharminda karte ho yaar tumhari sifat to maine bohat pehle pehchaan li thi, Ghayel se kaiee guna behtar likhte ho tum  DOH and thank you for sharing this beautiful work.

Quote from: Celmira on February 16, 2009, 01:22:04 PM
This is one of your most lovely creations Sajid Ji

Tumhari yeh Dad Hamesha yaad rahegi aur koshish karuga ke is dad se behtar dad do tum muje matlab isse better kalam likhu. Thank You so much....

Quote from: chitralsony on February 16, 2009, 07:53:11 PM
chahay geet likhay ya ghazal likhay
tu hamesha wo bara pur aser likhay
tu hr  giz nahi  hay shayer  bura
tu nay saray lafaz hi mutaber likhay

i dedicate my this sher to ghayel ji

Wah ab laga ke tumne mera kalam padha Bohat shukriya Chitral for this beautiful dedication, God Bless You...
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«Reply #8 on: February 17, 2009, 10:24:36 AM »
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Very nice sajid ji Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: April 08, 2009, 09:39:03 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on February 17, 2009, 10:24:36 AM
Very nice sajid ji Clapping Smiley

Thank You Salma.....
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Roja
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«Reply #10 on: April 08, 2009, 10:12:32 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on February 16, 2009, 01:10:43 PM
wah janab...........cha gaye mahsallah kia baat hai sajid sahab bhut khoob..........kaash ke aisi sifat hame bhi hasil ho

jeene ki har tarhan se tamanna haseen hai
har shur ke baawajood ye duniya haseen hai

sehra ka har sukoot darata rhe to kia
jangal ko kaatta hua rasta haseen hai

dil dehlaye laakh ghatao.n ki ghan garaj
mitti pe jo gira hai wo qatra haseen hai

dehshat dila rahi hain chatanain to kia hua
patthar mi jo sanam hai wo kitna haseen hai(a poetry by jaanisaar akhtar)

Wah kitna accha shayri aapne share ki Aslam ji.
Thanks for sharing this wonderful shayri. Usual Smile
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