..~~Tujhey Pukare~~..

by HumTum is back on January 04, 2006, 01:23:15 PM
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Dedicated to Meena[/b][/u]

Baad mud’dat ke aaye hai iss bazm mein goya
Dekha kiye hai rahey teri narzroon ko saware

Surkhi gulaaboon ki sjau tere nazuk laboo pe
Kadmoon mien bicha du chamakte huye sitare

Tera hi jalwa rhey nazaroon mein subho shaam
Jab se judey hai yeh pyaar ke silsile hamare

Tere bina iss dil key yeh halaat to dekh
Sunii hai zindgii suney suney hai nazare

Ho gyi ab to hadd bhi tere intzaar ki “Meena”
Ab aa bhi ja ke tera “HumTum” tujhey pukare !!

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«Reply #1 on: January 04, 2006, 01:37:45 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai hum tum
can't stop myself appreciating the work
wanted to write few words in reply
but i think you desrve the reply from the one,
this is dedicated to..
cheers!
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«Reply #2 on: January 04, 2006, 03:02:08 PM »
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AAMEEN!!!


WOW TOOOOOOOOO GOOD !!!

HAI DIL SE DUAA KI TUMKO _MILE KARAAR
HAI JINSE ITNI MOHABBAT_ MILE UNKA PYAAR
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«Reply #3 on: January 04, 2006, 05:52:11 PM »
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wowwwwww, bohot ache janab! itni der baad aye aur aate hi itni pyari shayari  :oops:

apne hume pukara aur hum aa gaye,
phir se is mehefil me khud ko raja gaye,
shayari kya hai humne malum to nahin,
par paya jabse apko, hum ek aur ghazal bana gaye!

 :D
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«Reply #4 on: January 04, 2006, 06:34:21 PM »
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wah wah wah kya baat hai meena ji and hum tum aata hee chaa gayaa ........good work u both like always
aap  bhi kuch kaam nahi tanhachand....
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«Reply #5 on: January 04, 2006, 06:35:15 PM »
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vry nice meenaji



tujhe bhulane ki tu door
hum tu tumhari yaadoin ko bhi na bhula sakhe…
tujhe bhulane ki tu door
hum tu tumhara dia huwa khaat bi na jhala sakhe
tujhe bhulane ki tu door
hum tu kisi aur ki hone ki baat bi na sun sakhe
tujhe maarne ki tu door
hum khud na maar sakhe
tumhare marne se pehla hum khud ko bi na bhacha sakhenge
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«Reply #6 on: January 04, 2006, 06:47:37 PM »
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aapko dekh kar sharma jana
Appse nazarein  milakar nazar ko chora jana
Tum na mila tu ghabharahat mein bimaar ho jana
Appse takrakar dhadkhan ka thaaz ho jana
appse milkar humhe pyar ho jana
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anjani_si
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«Reply #7 on: January 04, 2006, 06:48:09 PM »
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abhi naayee naayee hoon.........so plz dont hate
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anjani_si
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«Reply #8 on: January 04, 2006, 06:49:26 PM »
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Kaise kahoon tumse pyar hai
Akhar pehli baar hai
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: January 04, 2006, 09:00:17 PM »
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good going humtum and meena!!!!

good job anjani_si!!!!
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Qutubuddin
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«Reply #10 on: January 04, 2006, 10:23:38 PM »
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Great and good ..

Ques...
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«Reply #11 on: January 06, 2006, 12:46:15 PM »
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Quote from: "tinda"
bahut khoob likha hai hum tum
can't stop myself appreciating the work
wanted to write few words in reply
but i think you desrve the reply from the one,
this is dedicated to..
cheers!


Thanks a Million Tinda !!! now i would expect some nice poetry from your side as well .. as you see now i got reply from her to whom the poem was dedicated Winking


uski ankhoon mein dekhi hai zanaat ki roshni
uske agosh mein meieny sara jahan paya hai
duur hai ankhoon se lekin paas hai dil ke woh
mere sath hamesha cla uska hi to sayaa hai !!  
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«Reply #12 on: January 06, 2006, 12:49:11 PM »
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Quote from: "tanhachand"
AAMEEN!!!


WOW TOOOOOOOOO GOOD !!!

HAI DIL SE DUAA KI TUMKO _MILE KARAAR
HAI JINSE ITNI MOHABBAT_ MILE UNKA PYAAR


Thanks Tanhaa chaand !!

"Tanha chand" dundey hai chandni apni
uske bina ik pal bhi dil ko iske chain nhi
na kiya ho uske daar pe sajda isne
asisa koi din nhi assi koi raiin nhi !!!

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«Reply #13 on: January 06, 2006, 12:56:12 PM »
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wowwwwww, bohot ache janab! itni der baad aye aur aate hi itni pyari shayari  :oops:

apne hume pukara aur hum aa gaye,
phir se is mehefil me khud ko raja gaye,
shayari kya hai humne malum to nahin,
par paya jabse apko, hum ek aur ghazal bana gaye!

 :D


 oye hoye ... aa gaye oo soneyo  :D   haye mashaalaah kya farmaya hai ... as usaual ..... jaan le li aap ki shayri ne !!!  kuch arz hai gaur farmayiga !!

Teri iss gazal ko hum apne hotoon se gungunayegey
kiya hai jo wadda pyaar ka 'taa umr hum nibayegey
bsa ke rakheygey tumko hamesha apne dil mein hum
ik pyara sa tere dil mein apna hum ashiyaan sjayegey !!

kidda ji :D

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«Reply #14 on: January 06, 2006, 12:58:44 PM »
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wah wah wah kya baat hai meena ji and hum tum aata hee chaa gayaa ........good work you both like always
aap  bhi kuch kaam nahi tanhachand....


Thanks very much Gitthi !!!

tu bhi kuch farma zra shayarana andaaz mein
chaar shayar mile mehfil mein to baat bane  :D

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