Tujhko paya to ...

by rajguru on December 04, 2009, 04:37:27 PM
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Tere aane se mahfil main noor chaya hai,
jaise ki chand jameen pe utar aaya hai.
Teri batoon main kamsin si khanak is tarah,
jaise shabnam ne koi geet gungunaya hai.
Hum to the khaak-e-nazar ab se pahle,
Tujhko paya to sanam hamne falak paya hai.
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«Reply #1 on: December 04, 2009, 04:59:00 PM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaooooooooowwwwwwww raj ji to gud..bahut hi badhiya likha hai...Applause Applause  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: December 05, 2009, 03:11:07 AM »
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Wah lovely creation Rajguru ji,bahoot khoob. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: December 06, 2009, 08:12:09 AM »
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Nice creation Applause
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«Reply #4 on: December 06, 2009, 08:17:16 AM »
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Good one Rajguru Ji
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«Reply #5 on: December 07, 2009, 05:44:31 PM »
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Rajguru Ji aapne to kamal ki poem likhi. Nice and excellent creation. Thanks for sharing.
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«Reply #6 on: December 08, 2009, 04:11:58 AM »
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Thank you very much..
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«Reply #7 on: December 08, 2009, 06:44:49 AM »
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KABILE DAAD Kalaam hai aapka Rajguruji....
Shabdo ka chayan aur gathan sahi dhang se huaa hai... Applause Applause Applause Applause

Mehfil mai aa hi gayee hu tou arj hai....

Teri mahfil ki rangeeniye khich layee hain yahan mujhko
Jalti huyee shama hu main,Mehtaab ka khitab n de mujhko
Koyal naam hai mera,madhur geet gane ki aadat hai mujhko
Jami se falak tak,mere geeto ki jhanak sunaye degi tujhko


Quote from: rajguru on December 04, 2009, 04:37:27 PM
Tere aane se mahfil main noor chaya hai,
jaise ki chand jameen pe utar aaya hai.
Teri batoon main kamsin si khanak is tarah,
jaise shabnam ne koi geet gungunaya hai.
Hum to the khaak-e-nazar ab se pahle,
Tujhko paya to sanam hamne falak paya hai.
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #8 on: December 08, 2009, 07:06:51 AM »
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Wow Koyal dear kiya khoob likha aapne bhi.lovely lines.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #9 on: December 08, 2009, 07:42:56 AM »
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Thank you madhu-di...aapne padha aur saraha...lines krathyaarth huyee.... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower angel11

Quote from: madhuwesh on December 08, 2009, 07:06:51 AM
Wow Koyal dear kiya khoob likha aapne bhi.lovely lines.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: December 08, 2009, 07:50:28 AM »
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bahot aa6a likha he.
aap dono ne..
very nice....... Thumbs UP  Clapping Smiley

Quote from: KOYAL46 on December 08, 2009, 06:44:49 AM
KABILE DAAD Kalaam hai aapka Rajguruji....
Shabdo ka chayan aur gathan sahi dhang se huaa hai... Applause Applause Applause Applause

Mehfil mai aa hi gayee hu tou arj hai....

Teri mahfil ki rangeeniye khich layee hain yahan mujhko
Jalti huyee shama hu main,Mehtaab ka khitab n de mujhko
Koyal naam hai mera,madhur geet gane ki aadat hai mujhko
Jami se falak tak,mere geeto ki jhanak sunaye degi tujhko


Quote from: rajguru on December 04, 2009, 04:37:27 PM
Tere aane se mahfil main noor chaya hai,
jaise ki chand jameen pe utar aaya hai.
Teri batoon main kamsin si khanak is tarah,
jaise shabnam ne koi geet gungunaya hai.
Hum to the khaak-e-nazar ab se pahle,
Tujhko paya to sanam hamne falak paya hai.
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«Reply #11 on: December 08, 2009, 08:46:27 AM »
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Tane gamyu ne bas...mehnat safal.. thanks Devangi-di(mohti-ben)

Quote from: thinkhattk on December 08, 2009, 07:50:28 AM
bahot aa6a likha he.
aap dono ne..
very nice....... Thumbs UP  Clapping Smiley
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