Tum Aaoge.. Charan..

by lovely_charan on December 06, 2013, 01:55:49 AM
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Suraj ki laali se, chand ki chandni tak..
Kitni baar yeh socha maine, tum aaoge!!
Diye ki baati se, patange ki roshni tak..
Har ek se yeh pujha maine, tum aaoge??

Na aana tha jo tumko toh keh diya hota..
Hawaa ke haatho, dil ko sandesh diya hota..

Arey..

Udhti huyi badli se, hawa ke bawander tak..
Kitni baar yeh bujha maine, tum aaoge??
Ghar ke darwaje se, shehar ki dehleej tak..
Har raasta bhi dekha maine.. ki tum aaoge...

Chalo na aao.. par dil ka haal bata do ab bhi..
Kaise ho? kahan ho? tabiyat ka pata do ab bhi..

Kahin..

Tum yeh na sochna ki main pagal hun koi..
Jo har baat, be-baat pe kehti hun.. tum aaoge...
Main toh raah mein baithi hun pyaar lekar apna,.
Aur sochti hun bas ki pyar lekar hi tum aaoge..
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«Reply #1 on: December 06, 2013, 02:04:38 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause  Applause bhut khub ....!
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«Reply #2 on: December 06, 2013, 02:11:25 AM »
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bahut  bahut shukriya aapka rajan jee Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: December 06, 2013, 02:28:09 AM »
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aha bahut umda... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: December 06, 2013, 02:30:29 AM »
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aha bahut umda... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


thank you so so so soooooo much suman jee Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: December 06, 2013, 03:05:22 AM »
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bht hi khoob tareeke se aapne Prem vedna ko shabdo m vayakt Kia h..
daad daad

khush rahie
aate rahie

wse bht din bad aai h aap yhan..sab khairiyat to hai?
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«Reply #6 on: December 06, 2013, 03:11:00 AM »
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bilkul khairiyat se hain sarfira jee Usual Smile Usual Smile

kya hai ki zung lag gayi thi kalam ko hamari hehehe.. abhi saaf ki hai toh socha likhne ki koshish hi kar lein shayad gurujaon ko pasand aa jaye Usual Smile Usual Smile


thank u soooo much for your reply and mujhe yaad rakhne ka dil se dhanyawaad..
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«Reply #7 on: December 06, 2013, 09:10:24 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: December 06, 2013, 09:11:06 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: December 06, 2013, 05:56:57 PM »
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Lovely creation , Lovely ji . Congrats !!
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«Reply #10 on: December 06, 2013, 07:09:46 PM »
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thank u saini sir Usual Smile nand bahu jee and siddiqui sir..  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: December 06, 2013, 07:18:25 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: December 06, 2013, 08:00:14 PM »
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thank u saman jee Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: December 07, 2013, 02:22:11 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause...

Khooooobsurat peshkash charan... bahut achcha likhi ho... dheron dheron daaaaaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #14 on: December 07, 2013, 03:26:32 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause...

Khooooobsurat peshkash charan... bahut achcha likhi ho... dheron dheron daaaaaaaaaaaad...

bahut bahut shukriya aqqsh aapka Usual Smile
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