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by klaskar on September 23, 2010, 08:52:46 AM
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meri zindagi me yun tum bahaar banke aaye ho,
jaise mera bhoola hua tum pyaar banke aaye ho,

raahe zindagi mein kai humsafar mile, kai bichhde,
tum zindagi bhar ke liye mera humsafar banke aaye ho,

pehle miley ajnabi ke jaise, mujhse tum anjaan banke,
ab meri is zindagi me tum koi khumaar banke aaye ho,

zindagi thi sooni meri, na dost na koi humdum hi tha,
tum to meri zindagi me meri zindagi hi banke aaye ho,

zindagi mein ghum hi tha, na muskuraane ki koi wajah thi,
tum to meri zindagi mein jaise koi muskaan banke aaye ho,

meri zindagi me yun tum bahaar banke aaye ho,
jaise mera bhoola hua tum pyaar banke aaye ho,

tum to meri zindagi me mera aetbaar banke aaye ho,
tum to meri zindagi me pyaar beshumaar banke aaye ho,

aur ab...

lagta hai aisa har pal mujhe ki tum nahi to kuch nahi,
bheed me bhi lagta hoon tanha, tum nahi to kuch bhi nahi,

phool bhi gulaab ka ye kehta hai mujhse kabhi,
haath me uske na pahuchu to wajood mera bhi nahi,

kaanton se ghira hua hoon, chubhte hain mujhe subha shaam,
saath uska na mila to zindagi to meri zindagi nahi,

kuch is tarha ki kahaani kamal bhi kehta hai mujhse,
kichad me dooba hua hoon, mera koi astitwa nahi,

chhoo le wo agar ek baar, aa jaaye mujhpe bahaar,
kichad ka hoon, kichad me hoon, wo nahi to main kuch nahi,

phoolon ka main kya kahun, kuch kahaani yun meri bhi hai,
tanha hoon main bin tumhaare, tum nahi to main bhi nahi,

khoya rehta hoon main har pal, yaadon mein bas tumhaare,
saath ek pal ka na mile, kho jaata hoon main jaane kahi,

sach....

raahe zindagi mein kai humsafar mile, kai bichhde,
tum zindagi bhar ke liye mera humsafar banke aaye ho,

meri zindagi me yun tum bahaar banke aaye ho,
jaise mera bhoola hua tum pyaar banke aaye ho,

meri zindagi me yun tum bahaar banke aaye ho...


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«Reply #1 on: September 23, 2010, 09:02:38 AM »
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kapil jii dil se daad..hazir hee..bahut sundar peshkash he!
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«Reply #2 on: September 23, 2010, 09:11:14 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Abhi ji....!!!

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 23, 2010, 09:02:38 AM
kapil jii dil se daad..hazir hee..bahut sundar peshkash he!
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«Reply #3 on: September 23, 2010, 09:26:52 AM »
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Nice hai
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«Reply #4 on: September 23, 2010, 10:05:46 AM »
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Kapil mast mast massssssssssssssstam reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Yehh safar-naama apney jeevan ka tumne bayaan kar diya
Mere aane k pehle meri kami k ehsaas ka elaan kar diya

Mein kya hu tere liye ek ehsaas se jayaada kuchh bhi nahi
Tu maanta aaftaab,mein ek kiran se jayaada kuchh bhi nahi

Hu gulaab kabhi kamal ya bas ek mehakti khshboo hoon mein
Behti hawaka jhonkha banke aayi teri jeevan bagiya me mein

Murjha raha tha tere pyaar ka paudha,jab mausame patjhar me
Ban ke tera bhoola huaa pyaar, liye khumaar aayee hoon mein




Quote from: klaskar on September 23, 2010, 08:52:46 AM


meri zindagi me yun tum bahaar banke aaye ho,
jaise mera bhoola hua tum pyaar banke aaye ho,

raahe zindagi mein kai humsafar mile, kai bichhde,
tum zindagi bhar ke liye mera humsafar banke aaye ho,

pehle miley ajnabi ke jaise, mujhse tum anjaan banke,
ab meri is zindagi me tum koi khumaar banke aaye ho,

zindagi thi sooni meri, na dost na koi humdum hi tha,
tum to meri zindagi me meri zindagi hi banke aaye ho,

zindagi mein ghum hi tha, na muskuraane ki koi wajah thi,
tum to meri zindagi mein jaise koi muskaan banke aaye ho,

meri zindagi me yun tum bahaar banke aaye ho,
jaise mera bhoola hua tum pyaar banke aaye ho,

tum to meri zindagi me mera aetbaar banke aaye ho,
tum to meri zindagi me pyaar beshumaar banke aaye ho,

aur ab...

lagta hai aisa har pal mujhe ki tum nahi to kuch nahi,
bheed me bhi lagta hoon tanha, tum nahi to kuch bhi nahi,

phool bhi gulaab ka ye kehta hai mujhse kabhi,
haath me uske na pahuchu to wajood mera bhi nahi,

kaanton se ghira hua hoon, chubhte hain mujhe subha shaam,
saath uska na mila to zindagi to meri zindagi nahi,

kuch is tarha ki kahaani kamal bhi kehta hai mujhse,
kichad me dooba hua hoon, mera koi astitwa nahi,

chhoo le wo agar ek baar, aa jaaye mujhpe bahaar,
kichad ka hoon, kichad me hoon, wo nahi to main kuch nahi,

phoolon ka main kya kahun, kuch kahaani yun meri bhi hai,
tanha hoon main bin tumhaare, tum nahi to main bhi nahi,

khoya rehta hoon main har pal, yaadon mein bas tumhaare,
saath ek pal ka na mile, kho jaata hoon main jaane kahi,

sach....

raahe zindagi mein kai humsafar mile, kai bichhde,
tum zindagi bhar ke liye mera humsafar banke aaye ho,

meri zindagi me yun tum bahaar banke aaye ho,
jaise mera bhoola hua tum pyaar banke aaye ho,

meri zindagi me yun tum bahaar banke aaye ho...


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«Reply #5 on: September 23, 2010, 02:02:03 PM »
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Thanks a lot hai ji...!!!

Quote from: Fivester on September 23, 2010, 09:26:52 AM
Nice hai
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«Reply #6 on: September 23, 2010, 04:21:36 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Koyal... aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai... thanks for the sweet sweet reply... abhi kuch bana nahi mujhse... bante hi aapka reply karunga main...!!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on September 23, 2010, 10:05:46 AM
Kapil mast mast massssssssssssssstam reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Yehh safar-naama apney jeevan ka tumne bayaan kar diya
Mere aane k pehle meri kami k ehsaas ka elaan kar diya

Mein kya hu tere liye ek ehsaas se jayaada kuchh bhi nahi
Tu maanta aaftaab,mein ek kiran se jayaada kuchh bhi nahi

Hu gulaab kabhi kamal ya bas ek mehakti khshboo hoon mein
Behti hawaka jhonkha banke aayi teri jeevan bagiya me mein

Murjha raha tha tere pyaar ka paudha,jab mausame patjhar me
Ban ke tera bhoola huaa pyaar, liye khumaar aayee hoon mein
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«Reply #7 on: September 23, 2010, 06:57:31 PM »
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main aapka tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon Shihab ji... bahut bahut shukriya ...!!!

Quote from: Shihab on September 23, 2010, 10:11:59 AM
Dil Ke Ehsaasaat Ko Lafzon Mein Pirone Ki
Aapne Bahut Achchi Koshish Hai Klaskar Ji.
Bahut Khoobsurat Ehsasa Hain.Good Job.
Aur Koyal Sis Aapne Bhi Achcha Saath Diya Hai
Bahut Khub...

Khush Rahiye...


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Wah wah Kapil ji ,bahut khoobsurti se apne ehsaaso ko likha aapne aur  Koyal sis ne bhi khoob saath diya.great creation.excellent icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: September 23, 2010, 07:12:43 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on September 23, 2010, 07:02:52 PM
Wah wah Kapil ji ,bahut khoobsurti se apne ehsaaso ko likha aapne aur  Koyal sis ne bhi khoob saath diya.great creation.excellent icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: September 23, 2010, 08:26:20 PM »
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Vah vah vah!!!!!!!!!!

Bhut hi khoobsoorat ehsas.......beautiful feelings...

Ab ki baar is bhahar ko youn basa lena
Rok lena kuch aise ki ab isse jane na dena....
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«Reply #11 on: September 23, 2010, 08:36:40 PM »
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yahi to problem hai Neel ji... isko baandh ke nahi rakh sakta .... aur thank you so much for your sweet compliments....!!!

 
Quote from: neelgold on September 23, 2010, 08:26:20 PM
Vah vah vah!!!!!!!!!!

Bhut hi khoobsoorat ehsas.......beautiful feelings...

Ab ki baar is bhahar ko youn basa lena
Rok lena kuch aise ki ab isse jane na dena....
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«Reply #12 on: September 23, 2010, 08:38:19 PM »
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Kisse band karna hai ?

didnt get u ..

Quote from: klaskar on September 23, 2010, 08:36:40 PM
yahi to problem hai Neel ji... isko baandh ke nahi rakh sakta .... aur thank you so much for your sweet compliments....!!!

 
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«Reply #13 on: September 23, 2010, 08:41:16 PM »
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apne dil ko... kab, kahaan , kispe aa jaaye kuch nahi pata ...!!!

Quote from: neelgold on September 23, 2010, 08:38:19 PM
Kisse band karna hai ?

didnt get u ..
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aree aise maat udne do apne dil ko ..

samze....

Quote from: klaskar on September 23, 2010, 08:41:16 PM
apne dil ko... kab, kahaan , kispe aa jaaye kuch nahi pata ...!!!
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