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by klaskar on September 23, 2010, 08:52:46 AM
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«Reply #15 on: September 23, 2010, 08:49:12 PM »
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samajh gaya ji... Usual Smile

Quote from: neelgold on September 23, 2010, 08:44:40 PM

aree aise maat udne do apne dil ko ..

samze....
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«Reply #16 on: September 24, 2010, 03:57:36 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on September 23, 2010, 08:52:46 AM


meri zindagi me yun tum bahaar banke aaye ho,
jaise mera bhoola hua tum pyaar banke aaye ho,

raahe zindagi mein kai humsafar mile, kai bichhde,
tum zindagi bhar ke liye mera humsafar banke aaye ho,

pehle miley ajnabi ke jaise, mujhse tum anjaan banke,
ab meri is zindagi me tum koi khumaar banke aaye ho,

zindagi thi sooni meri, na dost na koi humdum hi tha,
tum to meri zindagi me meri zindagi hi banke aaye ho,

zindagi mein ghum hi tha, na muskuraane ki koi wajah thi,
tum to meri zindagi mein jaise koi muskaan banke aaye ho,

meri zindagi me yun tum bahaar banke aaye ho,
jaise mera bhoola hua tum pyaar banke aaye ho,

tum to meri zindagi me mera aetbaar banke aaye ho,
tum to meri zindagi me pyaar beshumaar banke aaye ho,

aur ab...

lagta hai aisa har pal mujhe ki tum nahi to kuch nahi,
bheed me bhi lagta hoon tanha, tum nahi to kuch bhi nahi,

phool bhi gulaab ka ye kehta hai mujhse kabhi,
haath me uske na pahuchu to wajood mera bhi nahi,

kaanton se ghira hua hoon, chubhte hain mujhe subha shaam,
saath uska na mila to zindagi to meri zindagi nahi,

kuch is tarha ki kahaani kamal bhi kehta hai mujhse,
kichad me dooba hua hoon, mera koi astitwa nahi,

chhoo le wo agar ek baar, aa jaaye mujhpe bahaar,
kichad ka hoon, kichad me hoon, wo nahi to main kuch nahi,

phoolon ka main kya kahun, kuch kahaani yun meri bhi hai,
tanha hoon main bin tumhaare, tum nahi to main bhi nahi,

khoya rehta hoon main har pal, yaadon mein bas tumhaare,
saath ek pal ka na mile, kho jaata hoon main jaane kahi,

sach....

raahe zindagi mein kai humsafar mile, kai bichhde,
tum zindagi bhar ke liye mera humsafar banke aaye ho,

meri zindagi me yun tum bahaar banke aaye ho,
jaise mera bhoola hua tum pyaar banke aaye ho,

meri zindagi me yun tum bahaar banke aaye ho...


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Bahut achchhi peshkash hai Kapil
Daad kabool kijiye
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«Reply #17 on: September 24, 2010, 07:57:25 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on September 24, 2010, 03:57:36 AM
Bahut achchhi peshkash hai Kapil
Daad kabool kijiye
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«Reply #18 on: September 24, 2010, 08:01:35 AM »
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Wow... So beautiful Kapil ji.. MashAllah Kya kahun.. Kamal ka likha hai.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob !!
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«Reply #19 on: September 24, 2010, 08:05:18 AM »
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Kapil Bhai.. Kabhi Kabhi Aap Kamaal Kar jate Ho.. Aur Is baar Kamaal hi Kiya hai aapke Likhe Alfaazon Ne.. ek Bahut Hi Khubsoorat Ehasaas Ko Lafzon Diye Hain aapne.. Bahut Hi Umda aur Jabardast peshkash Hai.. Applause Applause

Dil se Daad Kubool Karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley




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«Reply #20 on: September 24, 2010, 09:07:32 AM »
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main aapka tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon Divya ji jo aapne ise padha aur itna pasand kiya... bahut bahut shukriya...!!!

Quote from: Sophi on September 24, 2010, 08:01:35 AM
Wow... So beautiful Kapil ji.. MashAllah Kya kahun.. Kamal ka likha hai.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob !!
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«Reply #21 on: September 24, 2010, 09:08:26 AM »
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main aapka tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon Mann ji jo aapne ise padha aur itna pasand kiya... bahut bahut shukriya...!!!

Quote from: Mann on September 24, 2010, 08:05:18 AM
Kapil Bhai.. Kabhi Kabhi Aap Kamaal Kar jate Ho.. Aur Is baar Kamaal hi Kiya hai aapke Likhe Alfaazon Ne.. ek Bahut Hi Khubsoorat Ehasaas Ko Lafzon Diye Hain aapne.. Bahut Hi Umda aur Jabardast peshkash Hai.. Applause Applause

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«Reply #22 on: September 24, 2010, 10:20:00 AM »
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Bahut khoob kapil ji...mujhe apki kavita ka pehle pehelu khaas pasand aaya...koyal bahut khoob reply kiya hai..keep it up both of u..Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: September 24, 2010, 07:56:11 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji...!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on September 24, 2010, 10:20:00 AM

Bahut khoob kapil ji...mujhe apki kavita ka pehle pehelu khaas pasand aaya...koyal bahut khoob reply kiya hai..keep it up both of u..Usual Smile
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Quote from: madhuwesh on September 23, 2010, 07:02:52 PM
Wah wah Kapil ji ,bahut khoobsurti se apne ehsaaso ko likha aapne aur  Koyal sis ne bhi khoob saath diya.great creation.excellent icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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