Tum abra nahin ho: aao to!

by abdbundeli on July 22, 2012, 12:42:47 PM
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Tum abra nahin ho: aao to!
Jaaogey kahaan, bataao to?

Lagtaa hai, paanee barsaa hai,
Mashriqee jawoun mein door kaheen!
Purwaiyaa mein soundhaapan hai,
Barsaa hogee bharpoor kaheen!!

Aankhoun sey ras chhalkaao to!
Tum abra nahin ho: aao to!

Balkhaatee khiltee tarhit-chhataa
Jab baadal mein markat bhar dey;
Bheegaa paridhaan, tumhaarey tan
Key laawanya ko prakat kar dey:

Antas mein, suhrud, samaao to!
Tum abra nahin ho: aao to!!

       - Ramwatiya / abd bundeli        
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«Reply #1 on: July 22, 2012, 12:47:16 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne Ramwatiya jee
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«Reply #2 on: July 22, 2012, 01:09:27 PM »
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badaa hee sunder badhaai
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«Reply #3 on: July 22, 2012, 04:35:18 PM »
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kya baat hai ABD sir bahut hi umda likha apne........ Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: July 22, 2012, 04:58:57 PM »
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NICE
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«Reply #5 on: July 22, 2012, 08:31:56 PM »
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Abd Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob..... badi khoob kavita ko
janam diya hai.... ati sundar, kavyatmak upmaye aur
varsha ka sundar vivran raha... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad is sundar kavita par ...

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
SHaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                 
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«Reply #6 on: July 23, 2012, 07:46:50 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on July 22, 2012, 12:47:16 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne Ramwatiya jee

Suman ji, dhanyawaad!
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«Reply #7 on: July 23, 2012, 07:47:50 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on July 22, 2012, 01:09:27 PM
badaa hee sunder badhaai

Dhanyawaad, saini ji!
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«Reply #8 on: July 23, 2012, 07:49:06 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on July 22, 2012, 04:35:18 PM
kya baat hai ABD sir bahut hi umda likha apne........ Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriyah, 'Soudagar' ji!
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«Reply #9 on: July 23, 2012, 07:49:54 AM »
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Quote from: BANSI DHAMEJA on July 22, 2012, 04:58:57 PM
NICE

Thanks, Dhameja ji!
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«Reply #10 on: July 23, 2012, 07:51:29 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on July 22, 2012, 08:31:56 PM
Abd Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob..... badi khoob kavita ko
janam diya hai.... ati sundar, kavyatmak upmaye aur
varsha ka sundar vivran raha... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad is sundar kavita par ...

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
SHaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                 


Namaskaar ParwaaZ ji! Dhanyawaad!
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«Reply #11 on: July 23, 2012, 08:12:25 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 22, 2012, 12:42:47 PM

Tum abra nahin ho: aao to!
Jaaogey kahaan, bataao to?

Lagtaa hai, paanee barsaa hai,
Mashriqee jawoun mein door kaheen!
Purwaiyaa mein soundhaapan hai,
Barsaa hogee bharpoor kaheen!!

Aankhoun sey ras chhalkaao to!
Tum abra nahin ho: aao to!

Balkhaatee khiltee tarhit-chhataa
Jab baadal mein markat bhar dey;
Bheegaa paridhaan, tumhaarey tan
Key laawanya ko prakat kar dey:

Antas mein, suhrud, samaao to!
Tum abra nahin ho: aao to!!

       - Ramwatiya / abd bundeli        

Bahut bahut khub abd ji bahut acchi peshkash hai ye aapki .... daad qabool kariye..
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«Reply #12 on: July 23, 2012, 12:51:33 PM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on July 23, 2012, 08:12:25 AM
Bahut bahut khub abd ji bahut acchi peshkash hai ye aapki .... daad qabool kariye..

Dhanyawaad Pankaj ji!
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