tum ate gae

by mrigank on May 03, 2009, 10:11:59 AM
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tum ate gaye dharkane badhne lagi dil ki,
khatm ho gai ab tishnagi jindagi bhar ki.

(tishnagi=pyas)

mere hatho me jaise hath aa gyi tera,
pas aa gai khoi hui har rah manjil ki,

bago me jo tor ke bhaga tha gul ko,
dhua ho gai sari sanjidgi dil ki.

(dhua=smoke sanjidgi=deliquesy)
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«Reply #2 on: May 03, 2009, 10:25:03 AM »
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Waah Kya Khoob Khaa Gank Ji,.
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«Reply #3 on: May 03, 2009, 12:20:41 PM »
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bahaut khoob....MRIGANG
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nice post mrigank.. welcome..
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Bohat khoob mrigank ji,, Applause
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