Tum bikhrao julfon ko

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Tum bikhrao julfon ko apani aur mai so jaau
Karo madhosh yese ki mai tum main kho jaau
Na din ka ho pata fir na raat ki ho khabar
Tumhare chehare pe ho meri har nazar
Hole se chhu ke mujhe ek chubhan de do
Apani jalti sanson se ek aganm de do
Fir main ho jaau umar bhar ke liye tumhara
Trumhare bin ab na hota mera guzara
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«Reply #1 on: June 28, 2007, 03:48:44 AM »
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Nice one !
Accha likha hai !
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«Reply #2 on: June 28, 2007, 04:35:36 AM »
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Thnakyou so much RICKY Ji once again
kaafi dino baad aap se mulkaaat huyi, kaya haal chal hain aapke??
main jaldi hi aapki koi new poem read karana chahata hoo pls. meri umeedeon main khara utaro aur jaldi se ek achchai si poem post kar do
please
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«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2007, 05:25:11 AM »
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Well, I am here always just sometimes unable to respond on posts even after seeing them.
Poems comes on their own, let me have some inspiration.. I will sure post !
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2007, 04:41:57 PM »
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Tum bikhrao julfon ko apani aur mai so jaau
Karo madhosh yese ki mai tum main kho jaau
Na din ka ho pata fir na raat ki ho khabar
Tumhare chehare pe ho meri har nazar
Hole se chhu ke mujhe ek chubhan de do
Apani jalti sanson se ek aganm de do
Fir main ho jaau umar bhar ke liye tumhara
Trumhare bin ab na hota mera guzara
Sameer
very nice smeer ji..... gud

[/i][/b]haan julfe hum apni bikharaayenge,
tumhaara dil khone se pehele,
bas tum mein hi kho jaayenge,
ye subaha hone se pehele.

nazaro ka nazaro se vaar hoga,
kuchh kehene se pehele,
yu ishq ka khumaar hoga,
baaho mein aane se pehele.

humko chhipa lena nazaro mein,
humaare simat jaane se pehele,
is chaand ko bhi apne chhipa lena kahin,
humaari in julfo ko bikhraane se pehele.....

*************************************jiya ......
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2007, 04:44:54 PM »
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very nice Poem143s n Jiya g..
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«Reply #6 on: June 29, 2007, 03:47:24 AM »
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Tum bikhrao julfon ko apani aur mai so jaau
Karo madhosh yese ki mai tum main kho jaau
Na din ka ho pata fir na raat ki ho khabar
Tumhare chehare pe ho meri har nazar
Hole se chhu ke mujhe ek chubhan de do
Apani jalti sanson se ek aganm de do
Fir main ho jaau umar bhar ke liye tumhara
Trumhare bin ab na hota mera guzara
Sameer
very nice smeer ji..... gud

[/i][/b]haan julfe hum apni bikharaayenge,
tumhaara dil khone se pehele,
bas tum mein hi kho jaayenge,
ye subaha hone se pehele.

nazaro ka nazaro se vaar hoga,
kuchh kehene se pehele,
yu ishq ka khumaar hoga,
baaho mein aane se pehele.

humko chhipa lena nazaro mein,
humaare simat jaane se pehele,
is chaand ko bhi apne chhipa lena kahin,
humaari in julfo ko bikhraane se pehele.....

*************************************jiya ......


Sun ri <EDIT> Tumne yesa kaya kiya
Do line likh kar mera <EDIT> dharka diya
Dil main ab laddu se footne lage
Nazron se kar vaar tum dil mera lootne lage
Ho gaya kyoun baichen bahon main aane se
Sab kuch paa liya tumhare paane se

Jiya ji bahut bahut sukriya aapne khubsurat sa jabab diya aur us jabab ka jabab nahi wo lajabab hai bahut khoob, maine kaafi poem read kiyi aapki aur wo saari poem mere <EDIT>(dil) ko chhuyi hai

Bye TC
Sameeer
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«Reply #7 on: June 29, 2007, 05:36:09 AM »
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Good One... Sameer.... =D>
and a very Beautiful Reply... Jiya... =D> Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: June 29, 2007, 07:36:02 AM »
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Shikha ji Sukriya,dhanwaad,thankyou
Dekha aapne mera SMS milte hi bhagwan ne kal delhi main barish kara diyi, ab to aapke cooler ac band ho gaye honge aur haan apana electricity ka bill mujhe bhej dena aur saath main paise bhi main deposit kara dunga haa ha
galat section main reply de raha hoo ye reply mera aapki funny poem ke uper hona chahiye
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«Reply #9 on: June 29, 2007, 09:35:36 AM »
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thanx shikha ji, nikki ji . aur bohot bohot shukriya sameer ji ki aapko meri poems achhi lagi..... thanx.
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«Reply #10 on: July 02, 2007, 08:46:46 AM »
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Tum bikhrao julfon ko apani aur mai so jaau
Karo madhosh yese ki mai tum main kho jaau
Na din ka ho pata fir na raat ki ho khabar
Tumhare chehare pe ho meri har nazar
Hole se chhu ke mujhe ek chubhan de do
Apani jalti sanson se ek aganm de do
Fir main ho jaau umar bhar ke liye tumhara
Trumhare bin ab na hota mera guzara
Sameer
very nice smeer ji..... gud

[/i][/b]haan julfe hum apni bikharaayenge,
tumhaara dil khone se pehele,
bas tum mein hi kho jaayenge,
ye subaha hone se pehele.

nazaro ka nazaro se vaar hoga,
kuchh kehene se pehele,
yu ishq ka khumaar hoga,
baaho mein aane se pehele.

humko chhipa lena nazaro mein,
humaare simat jaane se pehele,
is chaand ko bhi apne chhipa lena kahin,
humaari in julfo ko bikhraane se pehele.....

*************************************jiya ......


Sun ri <EDIT> Tumne yesa kaya kiya
Do line likh kar mera <EDIT> dharka diya
Dil main ab laddu se footne lage
Nazron se kar vaar tum dil mera lootne lage
Ho gaya kyoun baichen bahon main aane se
Sab kuch paa liya tumhare paane se

Jiya ji bahut bahut sukriya aapne khubsurat sa jabab diya aur us jabab ka jabab nahi wo lajabab hai bahut khoob, maine kaafi poem read kiyi aapki aur wo saari poem mere <EDIT>(dil) ko chhuyi hai

Bye TC
Sameeer


ji bohot 2 shukriya smeer ji....... waise aap bhi kafi achha likhte hain ...

kyun dhadka ye dil tumhaara,
aisa kya humne kar diya,
hogi tumhaari hi sharaarat koi,
aur naam humaara laga diya,

pehele churaaya tumne humaaara dil,
phir use kabze mein apne kar liya,
aur jab humne apna dil lena chaha,
to hume chor karaar kar diya.

***************************** jiya ....
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«Reply #11 on: July 03, 2007, 03:13:14 AM »
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Hum ne samjha dil sirf chori hamara hi huwa hai
Ye haal to <EDIT> tumhara bhi huwa hai
Ye sararat hamari hi nahi  tumhari bhi hai
Tumne bhi chupke se mere <EDIT> (dil) ko chhuwa hai
Suno jara!! tum chor nahi mere dil ki raani ho
Tumse hi meri duniya,meri hashti, tum hi zindgani ho
Gujarish hai aap se ye sararat barkarar rahe
Janmon janmon tak tera mera pyar rahe

Jiya aap jo bhi likhte ho na bilkul <EDIT> DIL se likhte ho aur tumhari har likhi line mere <EDIT> DIL ko chhuti hai sach main <EDIT> DIL bahut khoob <EDIT>. jiya sachchi main aap bahut achcha likhte hai aur bhagwan se meri gujarish hai ki <EDIT> jiya ka ye likhne ka silsila umara bhar chalta rahe..



Tum pari ho jannat ki tumhen jannat se utara hai
Har roop nakas tumhara khuda ne khud sawara hai
Ab to tumhare bina zindagi adhoori si lagati hai
Tumhare bin ab kaha apana guzara hai

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«Reply #12 on: July 04, 2007, 04:59:28 PM »
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Hum ne samjha dil sirf chori hamara hi huwa hai
Ye haal to <EDIT> tumhara bhi huwa hai
Ye sararat hamari hi nahi  tumhari bhi hai
Tumne bhi chupke se mere <EDIT> (dil) ko chhuwa hai
Suno jara!! tum chor nahi mere dil ki raani ho
Tumse hi meri duniya,meri hashti, tum hi zindgani ho
Gujarish hai aap se ye sararat barkarar rahe
Janmon janmon tak tera mera pyar rahe



Tum pari ho jannat ki tumhen jannat se utara hai
Har roop nakas tumhara khuda ne khud sawara hai
Ab to tumhare bina zindagi adhoori si lagati hai
Tumhare bin ab kaha apana guzara hai

TC Sameer
thanks sameer ji ki aapko meri likhi poems pasand aate hain ,,, par aap kuchh jyaada hi taarif kar rahe hain ,,,, likh leti hun bas thoda bohot......

aur bohot hi khubsurat javaab diya hai aapne,, Usual Smile


har andaaj tumhaara kamaal hai, par,
dil churaane ki tumhaari adaa bhi kya kamaal thi,
koi dekhe is chehere ki taraf nazare utha kar,
varna dil churaane ki kiski mazaal thi.

ab ye dil hai aashiyaana humaara,
aur is aashiyaane ki main raani hun,
savaan mein chhati hai jo kaali ghata,
us ghata se barasta hua main paani hun,

jo shuru ho chuki hai aur khatm na hogi ab,
main aisi tumhaari kahaani hun,
har lamhaa hi saath rahoge tum mere,
ab main jo tumhaari zindgani hun.


********************************** jiya ....
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«Reply #13 on: July 05, 2007, 03:40:35 AM »
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Jiya oh my god, kaya reply diya aapne sach main, mai 15 times read kar chuka hoo aapke reply ko, sachchi main bahut khubsurat likhte aap, jiya  please aap se gujarish hai ki mere naam ke baad  ji na likha karen sirf sameer, agar sameer ji..  likhan hi hai to fir YA bhi lagaya karen HAHAHAHAH sorry


Dil mera khud churaye baithe ho
Ilzaam chori ka hamare sar lagaye baithe ho
Humne to kah diyi dil ki baaten tumse
Aur tum ho ki ab tak hum se chhupaye baithe ho

Jab se dekha tumahri aankhon ka kaajal hai
Hum machal uthe yese jaise koi awara baadal hai
Tum barsi ho yese aaj jaise paani saavan mai
Youn hi barste rahana tum sadaa mere aagan main

Kahani to kahani hai itihas ke panno main kho jayegi
Tum nahi miloge to JIYA aankh meri ro jayegi
Wada karo hum se you roj milne ka
Varna barbaad meri zindagi ho jayegi

TC
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