Tum Bin Zindagi

by AVTAR RAYAT on October 22, 2009, 09:14:15 AM

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AVTAR RAYAT

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Tum Bin Zindagi Jeena Mazboori Ci lagti hai,
Har Pal Mujhko Ye Adhoori Ci Lagti Hai,
Ab To Meri Saanso Ko Apni Saanso Se Zod Lo,
Warna Maut Se Kuch Pal Ki Doori Ci Lagti Hai…


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madhuwesh

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Re: ***Tum Bin Zindagi***

«Reply #1 on: October 23, 2009, 01:34:35 AM »

Wah bahut khoob Avtar ji,very touching and marvelous creation.excellent icon_thumleft


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Roja

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Re: ***Tum Bin Zindagi***

«Reply #2 on: October 24, 2009, 03:01:30 AM »

Quote from: AVTAR RAYAT on October 22, 2009, 09:14:15 AM

Tum Bin Zindagi Jeena Mazboori Ci lagti hai,
Har Pal Mujhko Ye Adhoori Ci Lagti Hai,
Ab To Meri Saanso Ko Apni Saanso Se Zod Lo,
Warna Maut Se Kuch Pal Ki Doori Ci Lagti Hai…

First two lines jo share kiya usmein aapka apna do line milaya hai. Bahut accha laga padkar