Tum chhoolo jaraa bas ounthhoun sey!

by abdbundeli on June 06, 2012, 03:29:45 AM
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Tum chhoolo jaraa bas ounthhoun sey,
Phooloun ko nashaa aa jaayegaa!
Bharpoor jawaanee koundheygee,
Zarrah-zarrah itraayegaa!!

            - abd bundeli (Ram Prakash Garg)
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«Reply #1 on: June 06, 2012, 04:18:40 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: June 06, 2012, 06:27:52 AM »
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boht khoob sir ....

chota mu badi bat kar rha hun .. agar aap likhe k "SHRAB KO BHI NASHA AA JAYE"

to shayri ka mza aa jata....

par boht khoob likha hai jnaab Winking Winking
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«Reply #3 on: June 06, 2012, 09:08:41 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on June 06, 2012, 04:18:40 AM
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Dhanyawaad!
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«Reply #4 on: June 06, 2012, 09:10:27 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Adil saheb.
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Quote from: roy on June 06, 2012, 06:27:52 AM
boht khoob sir ....

chota mu badi bat kar rha hun .. agar aap likhe k "SHRAB KO BHI NASHA AA JAYE"

to shayri ka mza aa jata....

par boht khoob likha hai jnaab Winking Winking

Shukriyah! Badee achchhee salaah dee hai aapney! Par jo likh gayaa so likh gayaa! Aagey kabhee kuchh aisaa hee likhaa, to koshish karoongaa!  
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«Reply #6 on: June 06, 2012, 09:17:54 AM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on June 06, 2012, 09:10:27 AM
Bahut Khoob Adil saheb.

SHUKRIYAH! Par, janaab, main 'abd bundeli' huun; Adil naheen!
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«Reply #7 on: June 06, 2012, 11:00:11 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 06, 2012, 03:29:45 AM
Tum chhoolo jaraa bas ounthhoun sey,
Phooloun ko nashaa aa jaayegaa!
Bharpoor jawaanee koundheygee,
Zarrah-zarrah itraayegaa!!

            - abd bundeli (Ram Prakash Garg)

BAHUT KHUB ABD JI MASTI BHARI PESKASH 1 RAU BHI LIJIYE
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«Reply #8 on: June 06, 2012, 12:06:38 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Abd ji....!!!
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«Reply #9 on: June 06, 2012, 12:49:25 PM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on June 06, 2012, 11:00:11 AM
BAHUT KHUB ABD JI MASTI BHARI PESKASH 1 RAU BHI LIJIYE

Shukriyah, Pankaj ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on June 06, 2012, 12:06:38 PM
Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Abd ji....!!!

Shukriyah, 'Hriday' ji!
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«Reply #11 on: June 06, 2012, 03:22:11 PM »
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My My.. Kya baat hai ABD ji.. Full romantic sher likha hai Bahoot Bahoot !!! :CLAP: :CLAP: :CLAP: :CLAP:
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My My.. Kya baat hai ABD ji.. Full romantic sher likha hai Bahoot Bahoot !!! :CLAP: :CLAP: :CLAP: :CLAP:

Nyshaji,aapko achchhaa lagaa: shukraguzaar huun!
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