Tum Ghazal meri........( Ghayel ):Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

Sajid_Ghayel

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Dosto ko salaam......aap logho ne Rafi saheb ka woh mash_hoor gana suna hoga.....Aaj mausam bada baieemaan hai bada................bas usi gane me jo beech me bandh hai.....Aye mere yaar aye husn wale.........bas usi tarz par yeh geet likha hai isey usi tarz me gaaye ummeed hai bada maza aayega.

Tumne chaha yeh mera muqaddar
Lagta humko nahi ab koi dar
Baho me yeh har shaam guzre
Meri aakhe rahe bas tumhi par

Kya ho tum yeh main kaise bata du
Cheer ke apna dil yeh dikha du
Meri chahat pe jo na yaqee.N ho
Apni hasti main khud hi meeta du

Meri har baat hoti hain pyaari
Baat hoti hai jab who tumhari
Mujhse jalte hai sab duniya wale
Sabko maloom ho tum hamari

Itna ehsan tum hum pe karna
Sath jeena mere sath marna
Maine tumko bohat hain sataya
Ho sake to mujhe maaf karna
Koi dil me nahi bas tumhi ho
Meri saso me bhi tum basi ho
Pyaar humko jatana na aaya
Par yeh sach hai ke tum zindagi ho

Main hu jhankaar tum meri payel
Tum ghazal tumko likhta hai Ghayel

Sajid Ghayel


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nirala

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Re: Tum Ghazal meri........( Ghayel )

«Reply #1 on: December 25, 2010, 04:18:54 PM »

Ghayal kar gaya aapka ye Ghajal
shayad aapka dil hai bahot hi nirmal
"
umda ghajal
"


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Re: Tum Ghazal meri........( Ghayel )

«Reply #2 on: December 25, 2010, 06:07:32 PM »

wah bhai bahooooooooooooot khoooob geet likha hai aapne gunguna ke aannd aa gaya


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Sajid_Ghayel

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Re: Tum Ghazal meri........( Ghayel )

«Reply #3 on: December 25, 2010, 06:25:38 PM »

Quote from: nirala on December 25, 2010, 04:18:54 PM

Ghayal kar gaya aapka ye Ghajal
shayad aapka dil hai bahot hi nirmal
"
umda ghajal
"

Thanks for your time and comment Nirala Jee... Usual Smile


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Re: Tum Ghazal meri........( Ghayel )

«Reply #4 on: December 25, 2010, 06:27:24 PM »

Quote from: bekarar on December 25, 2010, 06:07:32 PM

wah bhai bahooooooooooooot khoooob geet likha hai aapne gunguna ke aannd aa gaya

Kya yaar akayle akayle gunguna rahe ho kya, zara apni surili aawaz me kisi apne ko ga kar sunao tab jaker to Ghayel ki mehnat wasool hogi.... Usual Smile


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Re: Tum Ghazal meri........( Ghayel )

«Reply #5 on: December 25, 2010, 06:49:12 PM »

yehi to hum keh rahe the sajid ji..kaash ise aapne apni awaaz me post kiya hota maza aajata sunne ka...mujhse to gungunaya hi nahin gaya....ab pura maza kaise aayega...
aap ise post kijiye na audio form me....maza aajaye sunkar


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Sajid_Ghayel

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Re: Tum Ghazal meri........( Ghayel )

«Reply #6 on: December 25, 2010, 06:53:09 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 25, 2010, 06:49:12 PM

Tum abhi ke abhi mera ek kaam karo woh gana nikalo aur jaisa maine kaha hai woh jo beech ki bandh hai........Aye mere yaar aye husn wale.............bas same usi tune me poora kalam gaa dalo........phir dekho maza shayri ka aur khud bhi thoda bohat likh dalo usi tune me.......its a homework for u samjhi karna hi hoga.


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madhuwesh

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Re: Tum Ghazal meri........( Ghayel )

«Reply #7 on: December 25, 2010, 06:55:06 PM »

Bahut hi khoob Ghayel ji,great creation,beautiful gazal.hats off icon_thumleft


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Noorafza

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Re: Tum Ghazal meri........( Ghayel )

«Reply #8 on: December 25, 2010, 07:12:56 PM »

WAh kya baat hai!!! Subah subah aapka yeh kalam padh kar man prasann ho gaya!!! LZikhte rahiye. Last sher bahut pasand aaya!


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dead heart

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Re: Tum Ghazal meri........( Ghayel )

«Reply #9 on: December 25, 2010, 07:21:08 PM »

Bahaut bahaut khoob..
Applause


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Tum Ghazal meri........( Ghayel )

«Reply #10 on: December 25, 2010, 08:02:31 PM »

Janab Ghayaal Sahaab Aadaab!

Kia baat hai.... Aapko apne hi ghar meiN aane ki dawaat deni padi..
Jab jaakar aap aaye hai..... Kamaal hai..
Khair der aaye durust aaye..

Kia khoob nagma likha hai janab... Waah behad dilkash aur dilfareb andaaz e bayaaN raha..

Is romani nagme per dil ki gehrai se daad kabool kijiye...
Aur Maqta to waqaai tareef e kabil hai jee...

Likhate rahiye,
Aate rahiye...
Khush O aabad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.....


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: Tum Ghazal meri........( Ghayel )

«Reply #11 on: December 26, 2010, 10:09:15 AM »

Bahut Khub Sajid Bhai Applause


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Re: Tum Ghazal meri........( Ghayel )

«Reply #12 on: December 26, 2010, 10:11:12 AM »

Bahut Khoob Sajid Bhai


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Tum Ghazal meri........( Ghayel )

«Reply #13 on: December 27, 2010, 04:27:52 AM »

Bahut umda peshkash hai Ghayel Ji


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