-----/// Tum hamaare ho gaye ///----- Hriday

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tumhaare  aate   hi  khoobsurat  se  ye  nazaare ho  gaye
chhuwaa yun tum ne humein ki  hum tumhaare  ho  gaye

duriyaan  kam huwi  dono  ke  darmiyaan   kuch  is  tarha
lab  khaamosh  rahe , magar  nazar   se  ishaare  ho gaye

tumse  hi  din  shuru  aur  tum  pe  hi  din  khatam meraa
aadat kuch  yun padi,  hum  tumhaare  sahaare  ho  gaye

kisi kaa saath nahi ,  koi  humdum   bhi   na  thaa  meraa
doobti  kashti  thi   zindagi , tum   mere  kinaare ho gaye

ab  tak  har  khwaab  ko kaanch  ki tarhaa tut_te dekhaa
khwaab ye dekhaa na thaa, magar tum hamaare ho gaye

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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2013, 04:17:41 AM »
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ab tak har khwaab ko kaanch ki tarhaa tut_te dekhaa
khwaab ye dekhaa na thaa, magar tum hamaare ho gaye
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2013, 04:26:47 AM »
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bahut  bahut sunder dheron daad kapil keep itup
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2013, 04:39:03 AM »
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Laajwaab, bahut hi umda, dheron daad aur mubaarakbaad Hriday Ji
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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2013, 06:22:04 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2013, 06:58:43 AM »
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wah wah wah wah
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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2013, 08:24:11 AM »
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bahut khoob. pahle 2 sher khaas taur se bahut achhe hain. mubarak ho, hriday ji.
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«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2013, 08:30:18 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: January 18, 2013, 01:43:55 PM »
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hriday jee badi pyaari kalam rahi aapki.dheron daad qubool kare
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«Reply #9 on: January 20, 2013, 04:21:46 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Heer ji.....!!!

ab tak har khwaab ko kaanch ki tarhaa tut_te dekhaa
khwaab ye dekhaa na thaa, magar tum hamaare ho gaye
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«Reply #10 on: January 20, 2013, 09:01:06 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji.....!!!

bahut  bahut sunder dheron daad kapil keep itup
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«Reply #11 on: January 21, 2013, 04:58:34 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Amit ji.....!!!

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«Reply #12 on: January 21, 2013, 05:14:18 PM »
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tumhaare  aate   hi  khoobsurat  se  ye  nazaare ho  gaye
chhuwaa yun tum ne humein ki  hum tumhaare  ho  gaye

duriyaan  kam huwi  dono  ke  darmiyaan   kuch  is  tarha
lab  khaamosh  rahe , magar  nazar   se  ishaare  ho gaye

tumse  hi  din  shuru  aur  tum  pe  hi  din  khatam meraa
aadat kuch  yun padi,  hum  tumhaare  sahaare  ho  gaye

kisi kaa saath nahi ,  koi  humdum   bhi   na  thaa  meraa
doobti  kashti  thi   zindagi , tum   mere  kinaare ho gaye

ab  tak  har  khwaab  ko kaanch  ki tarhaa tut_te dekhaa
khwaab ye dekhaa na thaa, magar tum hamaare ho gaye

*****HRIDAY*****





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«Reply #13 on: January 23, 2013, 02:57:33 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Mishra ji.....!!!

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«Reply #14 on: January 24, 2013, 02:37:23 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Prashad ji.....!!!

wah wah wah wah
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