+++TUM JAB PAAS AATE HO+++

by punam on February 02, 2008, 08:41:28 AM
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«Reply #30 on: February 06, 2008, 07:57:11 PM »
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bahut khoob pooja..baadal
nice one honey...

sab ne bahut acha likha hai...
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«Reply #31 on: February 06, 2008, 08:09:07 PM »
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Shukriya khwaish ji..Usual Smile
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«Reply #32 on: February 06, 2008, 08:12:30 PM »
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woh lamha jiske liye
umar bhar taraste rahe
jo beete tumhare paas
ab bhi hai mere paas...

tumhare lafzon ne humpe
kar diya kuch jadu aisa
tumhare paas bite pal
aankhon me yun theher gaya...

woh ek lamha jis ko
hum bhulana paye
jo beete tumhare pass
un lamho ke ehsash
ab bhi hai mere paas...


bahut khoob punam..aapke jawaab mein kuch likhne ki koshish..

Intezaar mein din raat kat the hai
kab miloge yeh bata  to do..

jo yeh pal tadapte hue guzarte hai mere
unka koi hisaab to do...

jab pyaar hota hai to darr kis baat ka
kuch to yeh sawaalo ka jawaab to do...

TUM JAB PAAS AATE HO.....

to dil ko mere sukoon milta hai
yeh kehne ke liye sach mein paas aakar
woh ehsaas to do...

jo na keh sake te hum kabhi ruswai ke darr se
woh baat kehne ka adhikaar to do..

hum jaante hai waade aksar toot jaate hai
par saath nibhaoge mera har kadam par
kabhi dil se  haan ka iraada to do...


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«Reply #33 on: February 06, 2008, 08:26:40 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob khwaish and punam
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«Reply #34 on: February 07, 2008, 07:17:08 AM »
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Jab tum mere pass aate ho,
Apne hansi se mujhe jindgee de jaate ho,

Har lamhe ko jaise,
Wahi thahra jaate ho,

Dekhte rehte ho aankho mai mere,
Jaane kya talash.te rehte ho,

Lag ke sine se,
Saara jaha paana chah.te ho,

Jab tum mere pass aate ho,
Apne hansi se mujhe jindgee de jaate ho!!!!!



Baadal


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«Reply #35 on: February 07, 2008, 07:27:25 AM »
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Pooja di ..Honey di...Baadal ji... and khwaish ji sab ek se badh ke ek likhe...
thanx sab ko....
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«Reply #36 on: February 07, 2008, 07:28:56 AM »
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jab bhi tum mere paas aate ho
keh to do ke tum "punam" ki khamoshi samjte ho..

tere mehek se tan mann mehek uthta hai
hazaron khwaishen dil me jaag uthti hai..

sar-e-sam koi saaya sa mere dil me utar jata hai
dil ke andheron me koi tara nazar aata hai..

mera dil kuch kehe na kahe phir bhi kuch kehta hai
sara zamana hai iss dil se hi..yeh kehna chahta hai...

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«Reply #37 on: February 07, 2008, 08:46:00 AM »
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kyun mere humraaz tune dil ki halat pooch li
tujhko bhi rona pada mujhe bhula dene ke baad
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«Reply #38 on: February 07, 2008, 09:15:37 AM »
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jab bhi tum mere paas aate ho
keh to do ke tum "punam" ki khamoshi samjte ho..

tere mehek se tan mann mehek uthta hai
hazaron khwaishen dil me jaag uthti hai..

sar-e-sam koi saaya sa mere dil me utar jata hai
dil ke andheron me koi tara nazar aata hai..

mera dil kuch kehe na kahe phir bhi kuch kehta hai
sara zamana hai iss dil se hi..yeh kehna chahta hai...



Bohat khoob likha hai punam dear..

Dil hi dil mein unse mohabatt hone laghe..
Tum jab paas aate ho toh ek aag se jalne laghe..
Paas ahkar bhi unse dur rahe ney laghe..
Aapko hum sapno mein pah ney laghe...
Aapke bina iss zindagi mein na humhe jeena..
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«Reply #39 on: February 07, 2008, 10:03:09 AM »
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jab bhi tum mere paas aate ho
keh to do ke tum "punam" ki khamoshi samjte ho..

tere mehek se tan mann mehek uthta hai
hazaron khwaishen dil me jaag uthti hai..

sar-e-sam koi saaya sa mere dil me utar jata hai
dil ke andheron me koi tara nazar aata hai..

mera dil kuch kehe na kahe phir bhi kuch kehta hai
sara zamana hai iss dil se hi..yeh kehna chahta hai...



BAHUT KHOOB PUNAM..BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA HAI AAPNE...

BAHUT ACHE BAADAL,DIYA, HONEY..
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«Reply #40 on: February 07, 2008, 05:09:58 PM »
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bahoot khoob Punam, Khwaish, baadal ji, and Honey!!! ek se bard kar ek likh rahe hai sab...

bahoot waqat baad Khumar-e-ishaq mai itani ronak dekhi hai!!! Good work all!!

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«Reply #41 on: February 07, 2008, 06:02:11 PM »
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jab tum paas nahi hote ho
shab-e-hijer bada tadpati hai
intezaar me mann bekarar hota hai
magar issme bhi pyar chupa hota hai..

jab se hum tumhe dekha hai
khud ko bhula baitha hai
ab dil jale ya daaman
hum to khud ko jalaye baithe hai..





Wah ji wah.. Kya baat hai Punam.. bahut bahut khooob Likha hai aapne..!!! Usual Smile Usual Smile

Mohabbat me Agar Leni Hai, To Lelo meri Jaan Tum,
par Pyaasi Meri Aankhon Ko, Yun Tarsaaya Na Karo...

Bikhri Is Chaandni Me, Raat Karte Hain Intzaar Tera,
Baadlon ke Aagosh me E-chaand Mere, Chup jaya Na Karo...
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«Reply #42 on: February 07, 2008, 06:12:59 PM »
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pyaar mein ab kabhi khud ka na yuh tanha paata hoon
mehfilo mein bhi teri yaadon ko apne saath le jaata hoon

suna tha humne ke ishq ki tadap jaan bhi le leti hai
par main to ab tere soch ke saath jeeta hoon
tanhai ke aalam  mein bhi muskurata hoon...

aapse kabhi milenge  is umeed mein jeeta hoon aur
kabhi-kabhi aapke deedar ke liye tadap jaata hoon

na mujhe kisi jaam ki talab hai na kisi sahare ki umeed
bas tere zulfein ki aad mein jeena chahta hoon

sun kar dil ki baat kahin woh muskurayenge
aaj kehta hoon main uss shaks se..

ishq mein unke jeeta hoon
ishq mein unke mar jaata hoon...
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«Reply #43 on: February 07, 2008, 06:15:19 PM »
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Bahot khoob kittu ji...and vicky ji..
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«Reply #44 on: February 07, 2008, 06:40:09 PM »
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wah bahoot khoob Vicky ji and khwaish!!
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