Tum Jahan Chaho Waheen

by waheed_rose2004 on November 19, 2004, 05:37:05 PM
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Tum jahaan chaho waheen rah badal saktey ho
Phir bhi kuch duur merey saath chal saktey ho

Abhi *muSkaan* ban ker ankhoon mein chupe ho lekin
Ashkk ban ker kaheen ankhoon se oobal saktey ho

Aik pathar ki terhaan tum per asar kuch na hoaa
Hum ne souchaa tha k aahoon se pigal saktey ho

Meri qismat ki siyahi se ager dartey ho
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«Reply #1 on: November 19, 2004, 05:37:36 PM »
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wah!!! waheed_rose!!! bahoot khoob!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: November 19, 2004, 08:12:28 PM »
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Tum jahaan chaho waheen rah badal saktey ho
Phir bhi kuch duur merey saath chal saktey ho

Abhi *muSkaan* ban ker ankhoon mein chupe ho lekin
Ashkk ban ker kaheen ankhoon se oobal saktey ho

Aik pathar ki terhaan tum per asar kuch na hoaa
Hum ne souchaa tha k aahoon se pigal saktey ho

Meri qismat ki siyahi se ager dartey ho


Wow !! Superb!!!! gazab!! Waheed Bhai!!!


Ashkon ke dhundhalke mein bhi jo dekh le Mohabbat,
Aisi Woh Ashiq ki nazar Chahiye!

Jhuk to Jaata hai yeh Zamana bade aaraam se lekin,
Jo Kat sake Ishq mein, Woh ashiq ka sar Chahiye,

Patthar to Kya hai faulad bhi pighal sakta hai Mom ki Manind,
Magar aahon mein ashiq ki asar Chaahiye!
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: November 19, 2004, 08:50:37 PM »
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wah!!!
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immi
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«Reply #4 on: November 19, 2004, 09:18:37 PM »
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Nice Waheed & Arun !!!
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #5 on: November 20, 2004, 06:06:02 AM »
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Thanx Pooja ji! & Immi ji!
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Meena
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«Reply #6 on: November 20, 2004, 12:00:21 PM »
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beautifullllllllll!

"Aik pathar ki terhaan tum per asar kuch na hoaa
Hum ne souchaa tha k aahoon se pigal saktey ho "
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«Reply #7 on: November 20, 2004, 12:40:22 PM »
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wah all
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«Reply #8 on: November 20, 2004, 03:22:32 PM »
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Tum jahaan chaho waheen rah badal saktey ho
Phir bhi kuch duur merey saath chal saktey ho

Abhi *muSkaan* ban ker ankhoon mein chupe ho lekin
Ashkk ban ker kaheen ankhoon se oobal saktey ho

Aik pathar ki terhaan tum per asar kuch na hoaa
Hum ne souchaa tha k aahoon se pigal saktey ho

Meri qismat ki siyahi se ager dartey ho


Wow !! Superb!!!! gazab!! Waheed Bhai!!!


Ashkon ke dhundhalke mein bhi jo dekh le Mohabbat,
Aisi Woh Ashiq ki nazar Chahiye!

Jhuk to Jaata hai yeh Zamana bade aaraam se lekin,
Jo Kat sake Ishq mein, Woh ashiq ka sar Chahiye,

Patthar to Kya hai faulad bhi pighal sakta hai Mom ki Manind,
Magar aahon mein ashiq ki asar Chaahiye!


thanx arun bhia..... bahot bahot khoob surat aap dono ne likha hai....meena ji.....bahot touching words aap ne likha hai meena ji ....bahot khoob................

hum bhi kuch likhte hain..............

youn zindagi kay saath dauda tha
jism pahna tha; jism odha tha
tishanagi ki ye halat na poochoo
maine  pathar ko bhi nichoda tha..............
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«Reply #9 on: November 20, 2004, 06:26:51 PM »
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Shukriya Meena ji Nishita ji & waheed Bhai!!!
Very Nice written Waheed Bhai!!
Kamaal ka likha hai aapne!Superb!!!!!
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«Reply #10 on: November 20, 2004, 07:23:09 PM »
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maine to yaha kuch nahin likha  :?
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«Reply #11 on: November 21, 2004, 05:32:25 AM »
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Thanx Arun Bhai.........bahot bahot shukriya...........iss sher mein to aap ke bhi sher ki reply hai.........kuch to likhiye...........
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«Reply #12 on: November 21, 2004, 10:23:35 AM »
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Tum jahaan chaho waheen rah badal saktey ho
Phir bhi kuch duur merey saath chal saktey ho

Abhi *muSkaan* ban ker ankhoon mein chupe ho lekin
Ashkk ban ker kaheen ankhoon se oobal saktey ho

Aik pathar ki terhaan tum per asar kuch na hoaa
Hum ne souchaa tha k aahoon se pigal saktey ho

Meri qismat ki siyahi se ager dartey ho


Wow !! Superb!!!! gazab!! Waheed Bhai!!!


Ashkon ke dhundhalke mein bhi jo dekh le Mohabbat,
Aisi Woh Ashiq ki nazar Chahiye!

Jhuk to Jaata hai yeh Zamana bade aaraam se lekin,
Jo Kat sake Ishq mein, Woh ashiq ka sar Chahiye,

Patthar to Kya hai faulad bhi pighal sakta hai Mom ki Manind,
Magar aahon mein ashiq ki asar Chaahiye!


thanx arun bhia..... bahot bahot khoob surat aap dono ne likha hai....meena ji.....bahot touching words aap ne likha hai meena ji ....bahot khoob................

hum bhi kuch likhte hain..............

youn zindagi kay saath dauda tha
jism pahna tha; jism odha tha
tishanagi ki ye halat na poochoo
maine  pathar ko bhi nichoda tha..............


Wah Bahut achchhe waheed Bhai!

Maza Na Jism mein uske na jaan mein Kuchh tha!
Dil-o-dimaag mein kuchh aur Zabaan mein kuchh tha!

Taraashtaa tha har ek Lams nit naye paikar,
Kayaas toot rahe the Gumaan mein kuchh tha!

Kadam-Kadam pe Mukaabil hawa ke beeharh the,
Safar mein Nuks nahin Tha, Udaan mein kuchh tha!

(NM)
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«Reply #13 on: November 21, 2004, 10:36:01 AM »
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Thanx Arun Bhai.........bahot bahot shukriya...........iss sher mein to aap ke bhi sher ki reply hai.........kuch to likhiye...........


Lijiye waheed bhai aap ka aadesh par... koshish kar raha hoon..!

Usko Kisi ke waaste Betaab dekhte!
Hum bhi Kabhi yeh manzar-e-Nayaab dekhte!

Sahil ki Ret ne humko waapis Bulaa liya,
Warna Zaroor Hulak-e-Gardaab Dekhte!

Raaton ko Jaagne ke siva aur kya kiya,
Aankhen agar milin theen koi Kwaab dekhte!

Aati kisi ko raas Shahadat hussain ki,
Duniya mein hum kisi ko to Sairaab dekhte!

Baarish ka lutf band makaanon mein kuchh nahin,
Bahar Nikalte Ghar se  Sailaab dekhte!

(NM)
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«Reply #14 on: November 21, 2004, 12:20:16 PM »
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wah!!!!! arun bhai ....excellent.....bahot khoob......shukriya arun bhai.....
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