Tum jo aa jate ik baar

by mistufer on June 08, 2009, 01:59:15 PM
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Vyakul mun ko milta chain
Neer na barsate yeh nain
hoti KhushiyoN ki bauchhaar
tum jo aa jate ik baar

Khankte haathoN meN kaNgan
Har mausam banta sawan
Kartee main bhi khoob siNghaar
Tum jo aa jate ik baar

Dilmein uThti nayee umaNg
DhaRkan gati madhur taraNg
Man mera gaata malhar
Tum jo aa jate ik baar

Dil ka Haal sunati main
Seene se lag jati main
Mujh pe ho jata upkaar
Tum jo aa jate ik baar

kitni baar bulaya tha
Ghar sau baar sajaya tha
Bun jata ghar sukh sansaar
Tum jo aa jate ik baar

Apni sham sajaa letee
Ik dukhiya sukh paa letee
Tum pe kartee jaan nisaar
Tum jo aa jate ik baar

Kitne sapne TooT gaye
Dil se armaN rooTh gaye
KyuuN asuwan ki bahtee dhaar ?
Tum jo aa jate ik baar

Nira
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«Reply #1 on: June 08, 2009, 02:01:19 PM »
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Vyakul mun ko milta chain
Neer na barsate yeh nain
hoti KhushiyoN ki bauchhaar
tum jo aa jate ik baar

Khankte haathoN meN kaNgan
Har mausam banta sawan
Kartee main bhi khoob siNghaar
Tum jo aa jate ik baar

Dilmein uThti nayee umaNg
DhaRkan gati madhur taraNg
Man mera gaata malhar
Tum jo aa jate ik baar

Dil ka Haal sunati main
Seene se lag jati main
Mujh pe ho jata upkaar
Tum jo aa jate ik baar

kitni baar bulaya tha
Ghar sau baar sajaya tha
Bun jata ghar sukh sansaar
Tum jo aa jate ik baar

Apni sham sajaa letee
Ik dukhiya sukh paa letee
Tum pe kartee jaan nisaar
Tum jo aa jate ik baar

Kitne sapne TooT gaye
Dil se armaN rooTh gaye
KyuuN asuwan ki bahtee dhaar ?
Tum jo aa jate ik baar

Nira

Bahut accha likha hai aapne Nira sis... Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 08, 2009, 03:12:21 PM »
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Bohat bohat khoob Nira Ati Sundar rachna...
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«Reply #3 on: June 08, 2009, 03:16:10 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai Nira didi.. Behad Khubsoorat Aur Pyaar Bhari Rachna Pesh ki hai aapne.. Lafzon ko Humesha ki tarah Sunderta se Sajaaya hai Didi.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #4 on: June 08, 2009, 08:53:37 PM »
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Waah Nira Ji..bohot khoob... bohot achcha likha hai aapne.....!!
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«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2009, 12:49:25 AM »
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Beautiful creation Nira ji bahut acha likhti ho aap. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2009, 01:16:43 AM »
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 Applause Applause


Marvelous. Very Beautiful Hindi Poem.
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«Reply #7 on: June 10, 2009, 04:58:46 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoooob Nira Ji...

Itni Pyaari Aur Khoobsurat Rachna Hai ke Insaan Padhte Hi Gungunana Shuroo Karde..

Bahut Ache Nira Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: June 10, 2009, 05:01:26 PM »
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Waah Bohat Achche Nira Ji Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #9 on: June 10, 2009, 05:02:45 PM »
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So beautiful wriiten Nira ji.. kya baat hai.. superb. Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: June 10, 2009, 05:08:12 PM »
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Wah wah Nira Ji bahut khoob
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«Reply #11 on: June 10, 2009, 05:18:30 PM »
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Bahut accha likha hai aapne Nira sis... Applause Applause


roja sis
aapka bahut bahut shukriya adaa karti hoon
nira di
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«Reply #12 on: June 10, 2009, 05:19:46 PM »
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Bohat bohat khoob Nira Ati Sundar rachna...

sajid sahab
hausla afzaayi ka bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #13 on: June 10, 2009, 05:21:37 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai Nira didi.. Behad Khubsoorat Aur Pyaar Bhari Rachna Pesh ki hai aapne.. Lafzon ko Humesha ki tarah Sunderta se Sajaaya hai Didi.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**

vickyyyyyyyy
thanks tumhe pasand aayi rachna
kabhi kabhi change acha lagta hai
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«Reply #14 on: June 10, 2009, 05:31:15 PM »
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Waah Nira Ji..bohot khoob... bohot achcha likha hai aapne.....!!

celmira ji

bahut bahut shukriya aapko
nira
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