Tum jo aa jate ik baar -Panna 2:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

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«Reply #15 on: June 10, 2009, 05:39:50 PM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on June 09, 2009, 12:49:25 AM

Beautiful creation Nira ji bahut acha likhti ho aap. Clapping Smiley

madhwesh ji
thanks for ur kind words
they mean a lot to me
nira


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Re: Tum jo aa jate ik baar

«Reply #16 on: June 10, 2009, 05:42:00 PM »

Quote from: sanjaytiwari on June 09, 2009, 01:16:43 AM

Marvelous. Very Beautiful Hindi Poem.

sanjay ji namaste
aapko pasand aayi kavita
bahut bahut shukriya


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Re: Tum jo aa jate ik baar

«Reply #17 on: June 10, 2009, 05:44:03 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on June 10, 2009, 04:58:46 PM

Bahut Bahut Khoooob Nira Ji...

Itni Pyaari Aur Khoobsurat Rachna Hai ke Insaan Padhte Hi Gungunana Shuroo Karde..

khwaish ji
hausla afzaayi ka dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon
nira

Bahut Ache Nira Ji..


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Re: Tum jo aa jate ik baar

«Reply #18 on: June 10, 2009, 05:46:24 PM »

Quote from: Azeem on June 10, 2009, 05:01:26 PM

Waah Bohat Achche Nira Ji Bohat Achche,.

azeem
thank u aapko pasand aayi rachna


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Re: Tum jo aa jate ik baar

«Reply #19 on: June 10, 2009, 05:48:37 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on June 10, 2009, 05:02:45 PM

So beautiful wriiten Nira ji.. kya baat hai.. superb. Usual Smile

sophi ji
thank u so much for liking my poem


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Re: Tum jo aa jate ik baar

«Reply #20 on: June 10, 2009, 05:50:22 PM »

Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on June 10, 2009, 05:08:12 PM

Wah wah Nira Ji bahut khoob
SARVESH RASTOGI

sarvesh ji
saharne ka dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon


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Re: Tum jo aa jate ik baar

«Reply #21 on: June 10, 2009, 05:54:17 PM »

Quote from: Nira on June 08, 2009, 01:59:15 PM

Vyakul mun ko milta chain
Neer na barsate yeh nain
hoti KhushiyoN ki bauchhaar
tum jo aa jate ik baar

Khankte haathoN meN kaNgan
Har mausam banta sawan
Kartee main bhi khoob siNghaar
Tum jo aa jate ik baar

Dilmein uThti nayee umaNg
DhaRkan gati madhur taraNg
Man mera gaata malhar
Tum jo aa jate ik baar

Dil ka Haal sunati main
Seene se lag jati main
Mujh pe ho jata upkaar
Tum jo aa jate ik baar

kitni baar bulaya tha
Ghar sau baar sajaya tha
Bun jata ghar sukh sansaar
Tum jo aa jate ik baar

Apni sham sajaa letee
Ik dukhiya sukh paa letee
Tum pe kartee jaan nisaar
Tum jo aa jate ik baar

Kitne sapne TooT gaye
Dil se armaN rooTh gaye
KyuuN asuwan ki bahtee dhaar ?
Tum jo aa jate ik baar

Nira

Nira,

Very beautiful ! Fantastic ! Applause

Tum jo aa jaate ik baar...

Keep going ! Usual Smile


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Re: Tum jo aa jate ik baar

«Reply #22 on: June 10, 2009, 07:23:51 PM »

Quote from: Rajbir on June 10, 2009, 05:54:17 PM

Nira,

Very beautiful ! Fantastic ! Applause

Tum jo aa jaate ik baar...

Keep going ! Usual Smile

rajbirrrrrrrrr

thank u sir ji aapko pasand aai poem
nira


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Re: Tum jo aa jate ik baar

«Reply #23 on: June 10, 2009, 07:25:41 PM »

Quote from: @kaash on June 10, 2009, 06:20:41 PM

Waah waah Bahot khoob likha hai aapne Nira ji,behad achi kavita likhi hai aapne,awesome poem

kaash ji adaab
aapko yahan dekhkar bahut acha lagta hai
aapko geet pasand aaya dilse abhari hoon
bahut bahut shukriya
nira


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