Tum kahaani jo meri bane......mann

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Tum kahaani jo meri bane,

Tum kahaani jo meri bane,
Gungunane ka pal aa gaya.
Raushni se saje raat din,
Jagmagane ka pal aa gaya.

Aaj jeebhar ke chakenge ham,
Thoda thoda sa bahkenge ham.
Kal ki ummid aisi jagi,
Mushkurane ka pal aa gaya.
Tum kahaani jo meri bane……

Wo nadi thi jo sukhi hui,
Usne payi hai sukh ki ghadi.
Uske pathrile jeevan main bhi,
Chhalchhalane ka pal aa gaya
Tum kahaani jo meri bane……

Sanjh ko fir subah mil gayi,
Daaliyon par kali khil gayi.
In darakhton pe yauvan khila,
Lahlahane ka pal aa gaya.
Tum kahaani jo meri bane……

Megh ki bund shabnam banin,
“Mann” ke ghawon ka marham banin.
Unki samvedna jab mili,
Dabdabane ka pal aa gaya.
Tum kahaani jo meri bane……

Mann
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बहुत प्यारा गीत है....ढेरों दाद....
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Yeh geet lagta hai aapke jeevan ke kafi kareeb hai isliye barso bad badal fat pada ....

Bhavnaon ki atisundar prastuti..bahut khoob  Mann ji..

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बहुत खूबसूरत गीत लिखा है आपने पढ़के मज़ा आ गया
कुछ यादें संजोई थी मैने पहले कभी उन सबका मेला लगा गया

दिल को छू लेने वाला कलाम ...
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ji armaanji... sach pahchana aapne... barson baad mann ka darwaze par dastak sunai di... to iss geet ka janam hua....

shukriya..... armaanji

sath rahiyega
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Tum kahaani jo meri bane,

Tum kahaani jo meri bane,
Gungunane ka pal aa gaya.
Raushni se saje raat din,
Jagmagane ka pal aa gaya.

Aaj jeebhar ke chakenge ham,
Thoda thoda sa bahkenge ham.
Kal ki ummid aisi jagi,
Mushkurane ka pal aa gaya.
Tum kahaani jo meri bane……

Wo nadi thi jo sukhi hui,
Usne payi hai sukh ki ghadi.
Uske pathrile jeevan main bhi,
Chhalchhalane ka pal aa gaya
Tum kahaani jo meri bane……

Sanjh ko fir subah mil gayi,
Daaliyon par kali khil gayi.
In darakhton pe yauvan khila,
Lahlahane ka pal aa gaya.
Tum kahaani jo meri bane……

Megh ki bund shabnam banin,
“Mann” ke ghawon ka marham banin.
Unki samvedna jab mili,
Dabdabane ka pal aa gaya.
Tum kahaani jo meri bane……

Mann


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bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji.....

sath rahiyega...
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