Tum mahaj aag ho!

by abdbundeli on May 19, 2008, 01:50:48 PM
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Tum mahaj aag ho; han, aur kuchh nahin ho tum!
Mein hawa hoon: tumhain chhoota hoon, dahak uthta hoon!
Par, ye kya baat hai: mujh ko abhi maloom nahin;
Khaak hotaa nahin, albatta, mahak uthta hoon?'
 
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«Reply #1 on: May 19, 2008, 02:11:24 PM »
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Bahut achha likha hai aapne.. Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2008, 02:12:45 PM »
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Bohot khoob Abad Ji !
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«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2008, 07:21:59 PM »
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bahut sundar avhivyakti.
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«Reply #4 on: October 09, 2008, 11:23:37 AM »
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Abd Babu.....
Abad Saab....
G.R.Prakash je...
Ramwatiya Jee....
MR. Garg Sir.......

Kon Se Naam Se Pukarun aap Ko ??

Jeee Bahut Badhaai aapko Ki Aap Moniter Ban Gaye Hai...

Kitna Safar Tay....Kiya Aapne Yoindia Pe !!

Kisi aur Ko Na Jaanu Main To Kuch Baat Nahi...aapko Main Bahut hi kareeb se jaanta hun...shayad aap ki shayri sub kuch bayan kar deti hai...

Aur Jyada Se Jyada Zagde Hamare aapk Thread Mein Hi Hote The...

Aur Mujhe Ye Pata Tha...Ki IS YOINDIA ME AGAR KOI MONITER BAN NE K KABIL HAI TO WO " ABD BABU " AUR " ANGEL JEE " HAIN.

Aur Aub Aap To Ban Gaye Moniter...Lekin Aub Intezar Hai Angel Jee Kab Bane Ge ??

Chalie Jo Aage Hoga Wo Dekha Jaayega.....

Suna Bhi Hai Ki Kuch Moniters apne aapko I M Something Samazte Hai...

Bahut Kuch Kehna Chaahta Hun....

Ik aaam Yoindian Member Ki Hasiyat se Par Kahin Fir Shole Na Uthe Is Darr Se Khamosi Taari Hai Zubaa Par !

aur Kisi se vaada bhi kiya hai ki kuch wabaal aaeenda khada na karooga..kuch riste ki Ahmeeyat Ka bhi To Takaza Hai...Kahirr

Chalta hun abd babu..

chaliye Fir Kabhi P.M.Karooga aapko...


 
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«Reply #5 on: October 09, 2008, 12:41:43 PM »
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Muhammed ji,
Aaj to 'danavtaa par maanavtaa ki jeet ka tyohaar' manaaiye. Dasahraa kaa paawan parva aap ko sapariwaar sukh, samruddhi aewam shaanti kaa uphaar pradaan karey! Aap sadeiv sapariwaar prasanna raheyn!!
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«Reply #6 on: October 10, 2008, 05:33:05 PM »
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Waha Abd sahib bahut khoob

Mahez aag se munasbat dhahakne ki ho sakti koi aur shai aag mein jalti hai fana hoti pighalti hai.




shukria


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abdbundeli
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«Reply #7 on: October 10, 2008, 06:23:49 PM »
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javedarshad ji,
Aap ney chaar-paanch maheeney pahiley post ki gayee is 'choupadi' ko padhhney ki takleef gawaarah ki! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

Peit ki aag, aag dil ki, aag jismoun kee,
Aatish-e-bahr, aag-e-sahraa, aatish-e-arshee:
Kitnee aagoun kaa naam loon? Kahaan naheen hai aag?
Ab to deykhee gayee hai aag, arsh sey barsee!!


Isliye, dost, zamaanah hi aag kaa hai yeh:
Woh bhi, gar aag na hongey, to bhalaa kyaa hongey?
Aag hee aag hain woh, chhoo key deykhiyegaa kabhee:
Pihgaltey mom-saa muttahidah anaasir hogaa!!

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Talat
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«Reply #8 on: October 10, 2008, 07:17:44 PM »
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Very well said Abd Ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 11, 2008, 03:31:33 AM »
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Shukriyaa Celmira ji!
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«Reply #10 on: April 16, 2009, 07:29:16 AM »
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Bahut achha likha hai aapne.. Applause
Bohot khoob Abad Ji !
bahut sundar avhivyakti.

Thanks a lot Shikha12 ji/Celmira ji/Prateek Mardia ji!
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