Tum mere Lab ki dua ho jaao !

by seraj325 on April 07, 2009, 04:25:15 PM
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Dil ki dhadkan bano phir dil ki sada ho jaao
Walla, ek baar mere Lab ki dua ho jaao

Sahra-e dil ke liye baade Saba ho jaao
Banke ghazle.n meri, khud mera pata ho jaao

Naza k waqt me.n aao meri khwaahish ban kar
Harf-e aakhir ki tarah Lab se adaa ho jaao

Meri be-faiz zamee.n par bhi baras jaao kabhi
Dosh par abr liye taaza hawa ho jaao

Mal ke ghaza rukhe roshan pe, laga kar khushbu
Berq si chamko, kahin Hashr bapaa ho jaao

Mil lo ek baar mujhe phir wahi.n saahil k qareeb
Phir teri marzi hai, jab chaho juda ho jaao

Roshni dete raho Dil ko jala kar k Seraj
Shab-e taareek me.n ek jalta Diya ho jaao !!

By me -- Seraj
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«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2009, 04:28:14 PM »
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Waah Waah Bahut khoob... Really a beautiful work ... Clapping Smiley
keep writing..
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«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2009, 04:31:52 PM »
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Bahut khoob Seraj ji  Applause
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«Reply #3 on: April 07, 2009, 04:36:00 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Seraj Ji.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 07, 2009, 04:41:16 PM »
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Bahoot khoob Seraj ji
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«Reply #5 on: April 07, 2009, 04:46:07 PM »
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Bohot ache Seraj ji..keep writing!
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«Reply #6 on: April 07, 2009, 04:51:43 PM »
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Dil ki dhadkan bano phir dil ki sada ho jaao
Walla, ek baar mere Lab ki dua ho jaao

Sahra-e dil ke liye baade Saba ho jaao
Banke ghazle.n meri, khud mera pata ho jaao

Naza k waqt me.n aao meri khwaahish ban kar
Harf-e aakhir ki tarah Lab se adaa ho jaao

Meri be-faiz zamee.n par bhi baras jaao kabhi
Dosh par abr liye taaza hawa ho jaao

Mal ke ghaza rukhe roshan pe, laga kar khushbu
Berq si chamko, kahin Hashr bapaa ho jaao

Mil lo ek baar mujhe phir wahi.n saahil k qareeb
Phir teri marzi hai, jab chaho juda ho jaao

Roshni dete raho Dil ko jala kar k Seraj
Shab-e taareek me.n ek jalta Diya ho jaao !!

By me -- Seraj

Very beautiful creation...humesha ki tarah bohot khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne, Seraj Ji
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«Reply #7 on: April 07, 2009, 08:04:19 PM »
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bhot omda likha hay app nay seraj ji ,isi treh likhtay rahiyay ga
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«Reply #8 on: April 07, 2009, 08:13:50 PM »
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Seraj jee Wah Wah yaar...kya likha hai...shuruwat se lekar ant tak apne lavzon main bande rakha hume... Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: April 08, 2009, 02:56:51 AM »
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Aap sab ka tahe dil se shukriya

Rab aap logo.n ko khush rakhe
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«Reply #10 on: April 08, 2009, 05:23:52 AM »
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Very Nice Seraj Ji
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«Reply #11 on: April 08, 2009, 05:54:00 AM »
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Dil ki dhadkan bano phir dil ki sada ho jaao
Walla, ek baar mere Lab ki dua ho jaao

Sahra-e dil ke liye baade Saba ho jaao
Banke ghazle.n meri, khud mera pata ho jaao

Naza k waqt me.n aao meri khwaahish ban kar
Harf-e aakhir ki tarah Lab se adaa ho jaao

Meri be-faiz zamee.n par bhi baras jaao kabhi
Dosh par abr liye taaza hawa ho jaao

Mal ke ghaza rukhe roshan pe, laga kar khushbu
Berq si chamko, kahin Hashr bapaa ho jaao

Mil lo ek baar mujhe phir wahi.n saahil k qareeb
Phir teri marzi hai, jab chaho juda ho jaao

Roshni dete raho Dil ko jala kar k Seraj
Shab-e taareek me.n ek jalta Diya ho jaao !!

By me -- Seraj

very nice seraj sahab..........bhut hi achi ghazal kahi hai aapne daad hazir hai janab.........saare hi shair mashallah achay hain......sehara e dil ke liyn baad e saba ho jao...banke ghazlain meri, khud mera pata ho jao..bhut khoob................
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«Reply #12 on: April 08, 2009, 06:56:16 AM »
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Very very nice !
Yun hi likhte rahiye !
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«Reply #13 on: April 08, 2009, 07:59:31 AM »
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Barq si chamko.............Subhan_allah Seraj karodo dad kabool ho, Maza aa gaya.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: April 08, 2009, 08:04:09 AM »
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Subhan Allah, Seraj Bhai, Kya khoob Likha Hai Aapne, har Baar Ki tarah,.
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