-----/// Tum meri jaan ban jaao ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on March 26, 2013, 12:42:39 AM
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sajaa  lun   tumhe  hothon pe, tum  meri  muskaan  ban jaao
ho  jaaun  gum  is   tarhaa  ki  tum  meri pehchaan  ban jaao

khwaabon   mein  tum  hi  aate  ho, aake  unhein sajaate ho
dhadkano  mein   ho  hi, mere  dil   ke  har  armaan ban jaao

khwaaish  hai  dil  ki   main   chhuu  loon  chaand  taaron ko
pankh  failaa  loon  udne  ko, tum  mere   aasmaan ban jaao

har lamhe mein  tumhaaraa saath ho, tum  bin ho kuch nahi
tum hi bano  ateet  mere, tum hi  mere  vartamaan ban jaao

rab  ko   kabhi   dekhaa   nahi, kaun  hai  woh  jaantaa  nahi
tum  bano  khudaa  mere, tum   hi mere bhagwaan ban jaao

saanson mein tum ho,  mere  khoon ki rawaani mein tum ho
ab  kehne ki  zarurat  hai   kyaa   ki  tum  meri jaan ban jaao

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«Reply #1 on: March 26, 2013, 03:02:03 AM »
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sajaa  lun   tumhe  hothon pe, tum  meri  muskaan  ban jaao
ho  jaaun  gum  is   tarhaa  ki  tum  meri pehchaan  ban jaao

khwaabon   mein  tum  hi  aate  ho, aake  unhein sajaate ho
dhadkano  mein   ho  hi,  mere  dil   ke  har  armaan ban jaao

khwaaish  hai  dil  ki   main   chhuu  loon  chaand  taaron ko
pankh  failaa  loon  udne  ko, tum  mere   aasmaan ban jaao

har lamhe mein  tumhaaraa saath ho, tum  bin ho kuch nahi
tum hi bano  ateet  mere, tum hi  mere  vartamaan ban jaao

rab  ko   kabhi   dekhaa   nahi, kaun  hai  woh  jaantaa  nahi
tum  bano  khudaa  mere, tum   hi mere bhagwaan ban jaao

saanson mein tum ho,  mere  khoon ki rawaani mein tum ho
ab  kehne ki  zarurat  hai   kyaa   ki  tum  meri jaan ban jaao

*****HRIDAY*****


bahut khoob...!
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«Reply #2 on: March 26, 2013, 03:27:33 AM »
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Hriday jee aadaab!


kia baat hai janab waaH badi hi khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai janab..
be3had pyaare aur umdaa ahasaas O khayaal nazar aaye... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashar khoob lage hume.. Usual Smile


humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... bazm meiaN aate rahiye...

Likhate rahiye.. Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: March 26, 2013, 05:47:40 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah
Kya baat hai dost..
Dil khush hogaya apki iss rachna ko padke..
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Likhte rahiye,
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: March 26, 2013, 09:50:49 AM »
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Bahut pyaari kalaam. sabhi ashaar behad khoob. dil se mubarakbad qubool kijiye.Itni pyaari kalam par kuch likhne ko dil kar raha hai. ummeed hai bura nahi maanoge.

Tere honton se kheloon, teri muskaan ban jaaon
Tera dil banke dhadkoon, teri jaan ban jaaon
Tu jahan se guzre, tujhe mera kehkar hi pukaare
Teri zaat ke liye, mai teri pehchaan ban jaaon
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«Reply #7 on: March 26, 2013, 02:45:32 PM »
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waahb waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: March 26, 2013, 03:45:01 PM »
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Reply dena tha ... Par nahi dungi.... Aur tum jante ho wajah bhi... :p
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lajwaab bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut khoobsurat likha hai hriday ji.......
apni mohabaat ko ye paigaam denge to wo roothi huyi bhi hogi toh bhi maan jaayegi...lovely creation
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«Reply #11 on: June 27, 2013, 01:59:31 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Sheba ji....!!!

Quote from: Sheba on March 26, 2013, 03:02:03 AM

bahut khoob...!
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Parwaaz ji....!!!

Quote from: ParwaaZ on March 26, 2013, 03:27:33 AM
Hriday jee aadaab!


kia baat hai janab waaH badi hi khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai janab..
be3had pyaare aur umdaa ahasaas O khayaal nazar aaye... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashar khoob lage hume.. Usual Smile


humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... bazm meiaN aate rahiye...

Likhate rahiye.. Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Rahim bhai....!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on March 26, 2013, 05:47:40 AM
Wah Wah Wah
Kya baat hai dost..
Dil khush hogaya apki iss rachna ko padke..
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Likhte rahiye,
Khush rahiye..!
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Miraj ji....!!!

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