-----/// Tum meri jaan ban jaao ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on March 26, 2013, 12:42:39 AM
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«Reply #15 on: July 08, 2013, 04:21:40 AM »
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«Reply #16 on: July 24, 2013, 03:13:05 AM »
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thanks a lot Saxena ji.....!!!

Nice and impressive lines.
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«Reply #17 on: August 03, 2013, 02:49:55 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Aqsh ji aur aapne bhi khoob likha hai....!!!

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Bahut pyaari kalaam. sabhi ashaar behad khoob. dil se mubarakbad qubool kijiye.Itni pyaari kalam par kuch likhne ko dil kar raha hai. ummeed hai bura nahi maanoge.

Tere honton se kheloon, teri muskaan ban jaaon
Tera dil banke dhadkoon, teri jaan ban jaaon
Tu jahan se guzre, tujhe mera kehkar hi pukaare
Teri zaat ke liye, mai teri pehchaan ban jaaon
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«Reply #18 on: August 05, 2013, 03:06:58 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Saini ji.....!!!

waahb waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #19 on: August 06, 2013, 03:08:55 AM »
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thank u hai ji....!!!

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1 of ur best creation dear.... Loved it...
Reply dena tha ... Par nahi dungi.... Aur tum jante ho wajah bhi... :p
but reallyy mastammmm masttt..... Fulltuuu fataakkk chumeshwari post
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«Reply #20 on: August 08, 2013, 02:52:11 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Anmol ji...!!!

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«Reply #21 on: August 10, 2013, 02:58:11 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Pooja ji...!!!

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lajwaab bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut khoobsurat likha hai hriday ji.......
apni mohabaat ko ye paigaam denge to wo roothi huyi bhi hogi toh bhi maan jaayegi...lovely creation
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«Reply #22 on: August 15, 2013, 02:52:31 AM »
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thanks a lot

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