Tum mujhe bahoot bhati ho

by bekarar on June 28, 2009, 07:17:30 PM
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Meri narazagi ko bhi jab tum, hans kar taal jaati ho,

Chupke se aake jab mujhe tum, gudgudati ho,

Mai jab kheej kar chidh jaun, tum mujhe aur chidhati ho,

Mere gusse ki aag ko jaise chingari dikhati ho,

Takraar badhti hai, tum bas muskarati ho,

Mai jab khana na khaun mujhko manati ho,

Galat na hone par bhi apni galati man jaati ho,

Mai tab bhi na manu, fir kuch kasmasati ho,

kitchen me bahane se jaake, tum aansu bahati ho,

gar mai dekh lun tumko to ashqon ko chupati ho,

mai fir dar sa jaata hun, tum bhi sihar si jati ho,

gile shikwe hawa hote hai jab tum aanchal lahraati ho,

badbadaate hue fir tum, khana lagati ho,

khud na khnae ki jid karke mujhko khilati ho,

meri manuhaar ke aage lekin tum haar jaati ho,

mere haathon ke har nivale ko sweekar jaati ho,

sach kahata hun tumse, mera gussa dikhawa hai,

mai tumase pyaar karta hun, tum mujhko khoob bhati ho

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«Reply #1 on: June 28, 2009, 09:45:50 PM »
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Meri narazagi ko bhi jab tum, hans kar taal jaati ho,

Chupke se aake jab mujhe tum, gudgudati ho,

Mai jab kheej kar chidh jaun, tum mujhe aur chidhati ho,

Mere gusse ki aag ko jaise chingari dikhati ho,

Takraar badhti hai, tum bas muskarati ho,

Mai jab khana na khaun mujhko manati ho,

Galat na hone par bhi apni galati man jaati ho,

Mai tab bhi na manu, fir kuch kasmasati ho,

kitchen me bahane se jaake, tum aansu bahati ho,

gar mai dekh lun tumko to ashqon ko chupati ho,

mai fir dar sa jaata hun, tum bhi sihar si jati ho,

gile shikwe hawa hote hai jab tum aanchal lahraati ho,

badbadaate hue fir tum, khana lagati ho,

khud na khnae ki jid karke mujhko khilati ho,

meri manuhaar ke aage lekin tum haar jaati ho,

mere haathon ke har nivale ko sweekar jaati ho,

sach kahata hun tumse, mera gussa dikhawa hai,

mai tumase pyaar karta hun, tum mujhko khoob bhati ho



wahhhhhhhh bekarar ji
is roothne bhi kitna pyaar chalakta hai
aap dono ka pyaar yunhi bana rahi yeh hi dua hai.
nira
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«Reply #2 on: June 28, 2009, 09:56:21 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah bekarar ji waah....... Applause  Applause  Applause

Kya kehne jawaab nahi is ka, bohot hi umda bohot khoob dost Zabardast.
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«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2009, 10:03:08 PM »
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wahhhhhhhh bekarar ji
is roothne bhi kitna pyaar chalakta hai
aap dono ka pyaar yunhi bana rahi yeh hi dua hai.
nira

Ameen...
shukriya nira ji,
samay nikal kar aapne ise padha. bahoot shukriya
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2009, 10:06:09 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah bekarar ji waah....... Applause  Applause  Applause

Kya kehne jawaab nahi is ka, bohot hi umda bohot khoob dost Zabardast.


Shukriya Bhai Randeri ji...humesha ki tarah aapne housala badhane me koi kasar nahi rakhi....
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2009, 10:17:56 PM »
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Bahot bahot khoob aur dil se likha hai aapne Sanjeev ji,behad achi poem
bahoot shukriya kaash ji..
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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2009, 10:20:49 PM »
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Arrey Waah Bekraar Ji, Bahut he pyaara likha hai!  Bahut Khoob! Applause
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«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2009, 10:23:48 PM »
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Wah wah Bekarar ji,excellent,very beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:bahut hi acha likha aapne. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2009, 10:27:41 PM »
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Arrey Waah Bekraar Ji, Bahut he pyaara likha hai!  Bahut Khoob! Applause
bahoot shukriya deepati ji...kai dino baad aapko dekha aaj..


Wah wah Bekarar ji,excellent,very beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:bahut hi acha likha aapne. Thumbs UP

madhu ji bahoot bahoot shukriya apka....
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«Reply #9 on: June 28, 2009, 10:34:00 PM »
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bahoot shukriya deepati ji...kai dino baad aapko dekha aaj..




You are welcome, Bekraar Ji! Holidays par gayi thi! Nice to see you again! Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: June 29, 2009, 05:31:13 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Bahut khoob Sanjeev Bro..

Mazaa Aa Gaya..bahut Hi Pyaare Jazbaat Pesh kiye Hai Aapne..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: June 29, 2009, 06:09:52 AM »
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Bahut Hi Khubsoorat Ehasaas Likhe Hain Sanjeev Bhai.. Har Lafz se Pyaar Chalak raha hai.. Bahut Hi Pyaar bhari Rachna pesh Ki hai Bhai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #12 on: June 29, 2009, 06:20:20 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Bahut khoob Sanjeev Bro..

Mazaa Aa Gaya..bahut Hi Pyaare Jazbaat Pesh kiye Hai Aapne..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

shukriya khwaish bro....
aapke comment padh-kar mujhe bhi bahoot achcha laga..... Usual Smile
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Bahut Hi Khubsoorat Ehasaas Likhe Hain Sanjeev Bhai.. Har Lafz se Pyaar Chalak raha hai.. Bahut Hi Pyaar bhari Rachna pesh Ki hai Bhai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooooooob.. Applause Applause


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vicky bhai khushi hui ki aapne ise padha aur apne comment de-kar is panne ki shobha badhai.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: June 29, 2009, 06:57:29 AM »
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Wah wah Bekarar Ji
Very Nice
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