Tum mujhe bahoot bhati ho

by bekarar on June 28, 2009, 07:17:30 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 29, 2009, 07:32:05 AM »
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bahoot shukriya rastogi ji....dhanywaad
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«Reply #16 on: June 29, 2009, 11:44:24 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on June 28, 2009, 07:17:30 PM
Meri narazagi ko bhi jab tum, hans kar taal jaati ho,

Chupke se aake jab mujhe tum, gudgudati ho,

Mai jab kheej kar chidh jaun, tum mujhe aur chidhati ho,

Mere gusse ki aag ko jaise chingari dikhati ho,

Takraar badhti hai, tum bas muskarati ho,

Mai jab khana na khaun mujhko manati ho,

Galat na hone par bhi apni galati man jaati ho,

Mai tab bhi na manu, fir kuch kasmasati ho,

kitchen me bahane se jaake, tum aansu bahati ho,

gar mai dekh lun tumko to ashqon ko chupati ho,

mai fir dar sa jaata hun, tum bhi sihar si jati ho,

gile shikwe hawa hote hai jab tum aanchal lahraati ho,

badbadaate hue fir tum, khana lagati ho,

khud na khnae ki jid karke mujhko khilati ho,

meri manuhaar ke aage lekin tum haar jaati ho,

mere haathon ke har nivale ko sweekar jaati ho,

sach kahata hun tumse, mera gussa dikhawa hai,

mai tumase pyaar karta hun, tum mujhko khoob bhati ho



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Mashallah Sanjeev Ji

Bohot hi pyari kavita, bohot hi khoobsurat jazbaat bohot hi apnapan aur mohabbat se bhari......Khuda aapke ghar-praivar ko humesha khush rakhe, jagmagata rakhe, ameen.
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«Reply #17 on: June 29, 2009, 12:52:38 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on June 28, 2009, 07:17:30 PM
Meri narazagi ko bhi jab tum, hans kar taal jaati ho,

Chupke se aake jab mujhe tum, gudgudati ho,

Mai jab kheej kar chidh jaun, tum mujhe aur chidhati ho,

Mere gusse ki aag ko jaise chingari dikhati ho,

Takraar badhti hai, tum bas muskarati ho,

Mai jab khana na khaun mujhko manati ho,

Galat na hone par bhi apni galati man jaati ho,

Mai tab bhi na manu, fir kuch kasmasati ho,

kitchen me bahane se jaake, tum aansu bahati ho,

gar mai dekh lun tumko to ashqon ko chupati ho,

mai fir dar sa jaata hun, tum bhi sihar si jati ho,

gile shikwe hawa hote hai jab tum aanchal lahraati ho,

badbadaate hue fir tum, khana lagati ho,

khud na khnae ki jid karke mujhko khilati ho,

meri manuhaar ke aage lekin tum haar jaati ho,

mere haathon ke har nivale ko sweekar jaati ho,

sach kahata hun tumse, mera gussa dikhawa hai,

mai tumase pyaar karta hun, tum mujhko khoob bhati ho




KYAA BAAT HAI BEKARAAR SAHAB ...VERII NAAAICE COMPOSITION HAI

 AUR AAP TO BADEY LUCKY HAIN ISS MAAMLEY MAI MAASHA ALLAH...!!
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«Reply #18 on: June 29, 2009, 02:00:02 PM »
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Mr. Bekarar,

It is a very nice poetry.

Shayara
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«Reply #19 on: June 29, 2009, 03:17:11 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 29, 2009, 11:44:24 AM
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Mashallah Sanjeev Ji

Bohot hi pyari kavita, bohot hi khoobsurat jazbaat bohot hi apnapan aur mohabbat se bhari......Khuda aapke ghar-praivar ko humesha khush rakhe, jagmagata rakhe, ameen.


aapke is pyaare se comment ke liye aapkao dher sara shukriya..Talat
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«Reply #20 on: June 29, 2009, 03:21:09 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on June 29, 2009, 12:52:38 PM

KYAA BAAT HAI BEKARAAR SAHAB ...VERII NAAAICE COMPOSITION HAI

 AUR AAP TO BADEY LUCKY HAIN ISS MAAMLEY MAI MAASHA ALLAH...!!

shukriya K A ji......han lucky to hun
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«Reply #21 on: June 29, 2009, 03:24:53 PM »
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Mr. Bekarar,

It is a very nice poetry.

Shayara

Miss Shayara,
thanks for appreciation.
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«Reply #22 on: June 29, 2009, 04:28:24 PM »
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So sweet.. bahoot hi pyara Kalam likha hai... Sach mea Dil ko chu gaya.. Bahoot hi khusurat alfaz hai.. bahoot Khoob Sajeev ji
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«Reply #23 on: June 29, 2009, 04:41:06 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on June 29, 2009, 03:41:46 PM
Behtreen Peshkas Hai Sanjeev Bhai
Bahut Hi Umda Kalaam Hai Maza Aa Gaya....

Shukriya shihaab bro...... Usual Smile
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«Reply #24 on: June 29, 2009, 04:42:54 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on June 29, 2009, 04:28:24 PM
So sweet.. bahoot hi pyara Kalam likha hai... Sach mea Dil ko chu gaya.. Bahoot hi khusurat alfaz hai.. bahoot Khoob Sajeev ji

Bahoot shukriya sophi ji.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: June 29, 2009, 05:48:21 PM »
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waah bekarar ji waah...aapse dosti mein mazaak karne ki gustaakhiyaan maine sada ki hai....usmey...ek baat aur....

samajh mein nahi aata is kavita ki badhai aapko du ya bhabhi ko..kyonki jub baagi raah pur vaapas aatey hai....to jinkey prayas is nek karya mein lage honge...woh nischit hi badhai ke pehle hakdaar hai.
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«Reply #26 on: June 29, 2009, 06:10:55 PM »
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prateek ji,
sukriya aapne padha ise......aur ....apki dee hui badhai....thik jagah pahunchane ki jimmedaari meri   Usual Smile
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«Reply #27 on: January 31, 2010, 05:05:44 AM »
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wah wah bahut bahut khoob. Beautifully created Sanjiv ji  Applause Applause
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«Reply #28 on: February 08, 2010, 11:11:04 AM »
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bahoot shukriya.....roja sis
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«Reply #29 on: February 22, 2010, 11:10:51 AM »
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Kamaa kar diya Bekarar ji aapne is kavita ke likhne mein. Bahut hi achhi lagi aur dil ko bhaa gai ye kavita. Nice creation.
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