----- /// Tum mujhe bahut yaad aate ho /// ----

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kabhi tanhaayi me to kabhi bheed me yaad aate ho,
mere mehboob tum mujhe aaj bhi bahut yaad aate ho,

har din tumse shuru hoke tumpe hi khatam hota tha,
aaj bhi tum mujhe puraane dino ki yaad dilaate ho,

jin raahon pe hum tumhaara haath thaame chalte the,
aaj un sooni raahon pe tum apna chehra dikhaate ho,

aaj bhi mehsoos karta hoon tumhaare badan ki khushbu,
tum aaj hawaon me ghulke meri saanson ko mehkaate ho,

tumse juda hoke bhi ab tak tumse juda na ho saka,
mere dil me ummeed aur aankhon me khwaab sajaate ho,

aake khamoshi se mere kaano me kuch keh jaate ho,
mere mehboob tum mujhe aaj bhi bahut yaad aate ho...

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«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2010, 09:53:36 AM »
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minblowing klaskar ji.... Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause

har dhadkan or meri har saans ke sath yaad aate ho,
jo sath me bitaye the pal wo tanhaiyo me yaad aate ho....
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«Reply #2 on: August 31, 2010, 10:01:32 AM »
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kya kapil ji ek din jawab nahin diya aur aapne meri yaad me poem likh daali... NaNaNa NaNaNa

aree dedungi reply itni mastam poem hai ab reply to dena padega na.....  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #3 on: August 31, 2010, 10:13:03 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Devangi ji.... main aapka tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon.... aur bahut khoobsurat lines likhe hain aapne.... too good....!!!

Quote from: thinkhattk on August 31, 2010, 09:53:36 AM
minblowing klaskar ji.... Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause

har dhadkan or meri har saans ke sath yaad aate ho,
jo sath me bitaye the pal wo tanhaiyo me yaad aate ho....
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«Reply #4 on: August 31, 2010, 10:14:11 AM »
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Aap bhi....hume..
Quote from: klaskar on August 31, 2010, 09:38:17 AM


kabhi tanhaayi me to kabhi bheed me yaad aate ho,
mere mehboob tum mujhe aaj bhi bahut yaad aate ho,

har din tumse shuru hoke tumpe hi khatam hota tha,
aaj bhi tum mujhe puraane dino ki yaad dilaate ho,

jin raahon pe hum tumhaara haath thaame chalte the,
aaj un sooni raahon pe tum apna chehra dikhaate ho,

aaj bhi mehsoos karta hoon tumhaare badan ki khushbu,
tum aaj hawaon me ghulke meri saanson ko mehkaate ho,

tumse juda hoke bhi ab tak tumse juda na ho saka,
mere dil me ummeed aur aankhon me khwaab sajaate ho,

aake khamoshi se mere kaano me kuch keh jaate ho,
mere mehboob tum mujhe aaj bhi bahut yaad aate ho...

*****HRIDAY*****
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«Reply #5 on: August 31, 2010, 10:17:05 AM »
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heheheheheheeh.... ab kya karein aap hain hi aisi ki aapke replies ki aadat si pad gayi hai... aapka reply na mile to poem adhura sa lagta hai.... meri kai kavitaayein aapke comments ka wait kar rahi hain... ro rahi hai.. gidgida rahi hain ki kahaan hain hamaari pyari Kasak ji... koi to bulaao unhe... koi to jaake hasaao unhe... kyun aaj wo itna shaant hain... kya unko hamaari dosti pasand nahi ya hamari kavitaayein itni kharaab ho chuki hain ki ab bas dekh ke chale jaate hain..... hehehehehe... mazaak kar raha hoon ji.. dil pe mat lo.... Usual Smile

thank you so much meri poem ko itna pasand karne ke liye... mujhe intezaar rahega aapke mastam reply ka ... thanks again....!!!


Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 31, 2010, 10:01:32 AM
kya kapil ji ek din jawab nahin diya aur aapne meri yaad me poem likh daali... NaNaNa NaNaNa

aree dedungi reply itni mastam poem hai ab reply to dena padega na.....  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #6 on: August 31, 2010, 10:19:31 AM »
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"Aap bhi"... se kya matlab apka....
taaliyon ke liye bahut bahut shukriya Koyal ji...!!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 31, 2010, 10:14:11 AM
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Aap bhi....
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«Reply #7 on: August 31, 2010, 10:22:03 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 31, 2010, 10:17:05 AM
heheheheheheeh.... ab kya karein aap hain hi aisi ki aapke replies ki aadat si pad gayi hai... aapka reply na mile to poem adhura sa lagta hai.... meri kai kavitaayein aapke comments ka wait kar rahi hain... ro rahi hai.. gidgida rahi hain ki kahaan hain hamaari pyari Kasak ji... koi to bulaao unhe... koi to jaake hasaao unhe... kyun aaj wo itna shaant hain... kya unko hamaari dosti pasand nahi ya hamari kavitaayein itni kharaab ho chuki hain ki ab bas dekh ke chale jaate hain..... hehehehehe... mazaak kar raha hoon ji.. dil pe mat lo.... Usual Smile

thank you so much meri poem ko itna pasand karne ke liye... mujhe intezaar rahega aapke mastam reply ka ... thanks again....!!!



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«Reply #8 on: August 31, 2010, 12:16:56 PM »
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aap param gyaani hain...!!!

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Ye tou upaadhi puraani hai....
Ab Ye Guruvaani hai...
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«Reply #10 on: August 31, 2010, 12:39:54 PM »
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koi shaq nahi sarkaar...!!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 31, 2010, 12:37:16 PM
Ye tou upaadhi puraani hai....
Ab Ye Guruvaani hai...
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«Reply #11 on: August 31, 2010, 12:43:56 PM »
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Bahut khoob peshkash kapil ji...
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Chitthee se bhi dair se pahunche usse Taar kehte hain
Dhaakaa dekar bhi mushkil se chale usse car kehte hain....
Aur jo Dhaakaa dekar bhi na chale usse Sarkaar kehte hain....


Quote from: klaskar on August 31, 2010, 12:39:54 PM
koi shaq nahi sarkaar...!!!
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«Reply #13 on: August 31, 2010, 08:02:50 PM »
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kapil ji itni pyari post pe hamare reply ka wait karne ka thnxxxx ji...ab aap mera reply padhke taliyan bhi bajayenge ...lekin aap bht busy hain isly aapki traf se ye kam main hi kar deti hun...khud k liye main aapki taraf se taliyan bja deti hun lijiye... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Haan tum mujhe bht yaad aate ho

Andheri raat me chupke se tum chale aate ho
Haule se mere takiye pe sir rakh let jate ho
Main jab chhune  ko hath badhati hun tumhe
Tum jhat se gaayab ho jate ho han tum bht yaad ate ho

Lambi si khali gar pe jab chal rahi hun kale
Tum hath tham mere sath hi chal padte ho
Lekin jab ghar ki chaukhat pe dekhti hun main
Tum gayab ho jayte ho han tum bht yad ate ho

Saj sanwar kar jab khadi hoti hun aaine k samne
Tum mujhe dekh muskurake dheere se paas aate ho
Baahein daal gale me mere chum lete ho palkon ko
Jab kholti hun palkein tum gayab ho jate ho
Haan tum mujhe bht yaad aate ho

Khaali jeewan suna angna koi na saathi na sangi
Ek tere na hone se mujhe lagta koi bhi apna nahin
Sochun jab main ye tum mujhme main ban sama jate ho
Jaanu tab tum mujhe bht yaad ate ho…….
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«Reply #14 on: August 31, 2010, 10:05:44 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 31, 2010, 09:38:17 AM


kabhi tanhaayi me to kabhi bheed me yaad aate ho,
mere mehboob tum mujhe aaj bhi bahut yaad aate ho,

har din tumse shuru hoke tumpe hi khatam hota tha,
aaj bhi tum mujhe puraane dino ki yaad dilaate ho,

jin raahon pe hum tumhaara haath thaame chalte the,
aaj un sooni raahon pe tum apna chehra dikhaate ho,

aaj bhi mehsoos karta hoon tumhaare badan ki khushbu,
tum aaj hawaon me ghulke meri saanson ko mehkaate ho,

tumse juda hoke bhi ab tak tumse juda na ho saka,
mere dil me ummeed aur aankhon me khwaab sajaate ho,

aake khamoshi se mere kaano me kuch keh jaate ho,
mere mehboob tum mujhe aaj bhi bahut yaad aate ho...

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