----- /// Tum mujhe bahut yaad aate ho /// ---- -Panna 2:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

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«Reply #15 on: September 01, 2010, 08:29:38 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji....!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on August 31, 2010, 12:43:56 PM

Bahut khoob peshkash kapil ji...


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«Reply #16 on: September 01, 2010, 08:32:04 AM »

tab main apne shabd waapas leta hoon... aap sarkaar nahi hain...!!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 31, 2010, 12:58:47 PM

Chitthee se bhi dair se pahunche usse Taar kehte hain
Dhaakaa dekar bhi mushkil se chale usse car kehte hain....
Aur jo Dhaakaa dekar bhi na chale usse Sarkaar kehte hain....


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«Reply #17 on: September 01, 2010, 08:33:46 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji....!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 31, 2010, 10:05:44 PM

Bahut Khoob likha hai aap ne Kapil


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«Reply #18 on: September 01, 2010, 08:34:14 AM »

Kasak ji.... taaliyaan aapne bajaa di to main "thanks " hi keh deta hoon... taali to nahi bajaunga par kuch to taarif karna hi padega aapke is khoobsurat se pyaar bhare jawaab ke liye... ab kya taarif karun mera dimaag hi kaam nahi kar raha uffffffff hadd hai.... chaliye taarif fir kabhi sahi... abhi kuch jawaab hi likh dete hain... aur aapka jawaab hum jab jaagenge tab dekh lenge... likhna jarur aap... aur apne is reply k liye taaliya main khud nahi bajaa raha hoon.. ye kaam aapke liye chhod diya.... kuch taaliya aur ek pyaare se jawaab k intezaar me....

waiting....waiting....waiting....

har shaam aake tum mere ghar ko roshan kar jaate ho,
raaton ko jab tanha sota hoon to tum aa jaate ho,
aankhen is dar se nahi kholta ki sapna tut na jaaye,
chaandni raato me aake mere aankhon me bas jaate ho,

suraj ki har kiran ke saath tum mere ghar aa jaate ho,
behti hawaon me ghulke tum mere aangan ko mehkaate ho,
aankhen bichhaye baitha hoon raahon pe ki tum aaoge,
aate nahi haqeeqat me par khwaab banke aa jaate ho,

tum aake khwaabon me mere hothon ko chhoo jaate ho,
lagake aag mere tan mann me tum bas muskuraate ho,
koshish karta hoon agar baahon me tumhe bharne ki,
tum khwaabon ko chhod jaane kahaan chhup jaate ho,

ae sanam apni in adaaon se tum mujhe bahut tadpaate ho,
wo tum hi ho jo mujhe har saans ke saath yaad aate ho,

kabhi tanhaayi me to kabhi bheed me yaad aate ho,
mere mehboob tum mujhe aaj bhi bahut yaad aate ho...


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«Reply #19 on: September 04, 2010, 05:11:06 AM »

ye lijiye kapil ji.......bht sari taaliyan aapke bht pyare se reply k liye...

aur ye hamara jawab ....kahiye kaisa laga ji

Lamha lamha tum mujhme sama jate ho
Dhadkan me bas sangeet naye sajate ho
Main dhundh leti hun tumhe dil me hi
Iss tarah tum dil me mere chhup jate ho

Kabhi haule se mujhe gudgudate ho
Kahin uljhi hun kaam me main jab
Chupke se aa bahon me bhar lete ho
Sach mujhe bada hi tum satate ho

Meethe meethe se madhur geet sunate ho
Ruuth jaun kabhi to tum mujhe manate ho
Na reh paun main ek pal bhi udaas
Iss tarah tum mera har pal dil behlate ho

Kisi kore kaagaz pe likhi gazal ki tarah
Kisi bag me khilte gulab k phool ki tarah
Kanha ki madhur murli ki taan ki tarah
Tum mere jeewan ko apne pyaar se sajate ho

Haan tum mujhe bht bht bht yaad aate ho……

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«Reply #20 on: September 05, 2010, 06:36:18 PM »

Quote from: klaskar on August 31, 2010, 09:38:17 AM

kabhi tanhaayi me to kabhi bheed me yaad aate ho,
mere mehboob tum mujhe aaj bhi bahut yaad aate ho,

har din tumse shuru hoke tumpe hi khatam hota tha,
aaj bhi tum mujhe puraane dino ki yaad dilaate ho,

jin raahon pe hum tumhaara haath thaame chalte the,
aaj un sooni raahon pe tum apna chehra dikhaate ho,

aaj bhi mehsoos karta hoon tumhaare badan ki khushbu,
tum aaj hawaon me ghulke meri saanson ko mehkaate ho,

tumse juda hoke bhi ab tak tumse juda na ho saka,
mere dil me ummeed aur aankhon me khwaab sajaate ho,

aake khamoshi se mere kaano me kuch keh jaate ho,
mere mehboob tum mujhe aaj bhi bahut yaad aate ho...

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Simply Beautiful.... ek meethi se sisaki deta hua... magar Khumar - e-Ishaq ke sath udasi bhi de raghi hai yah kavita... kyun ki kisi ke jaane ke baad yeh ek yaad hai...
shabdo ko bahoot ache bandhaein hue... bahoot he pyar se bhari kavita hai.. good work!!


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«Reply #21 on: September 05, 2010, 06:38:43 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 31, 2010, 08:02:50 PM

Haan tum mujhe bht yaad aate ho

Andheri raat me chupke se tum chale aate ho
Haule se mere takiye pe sir rakh let jate ho
Main jab chhune ko hath badhati hun tumhe
Tum jhat se gaayab ho jate ho han tum bht yaad ate ho

Lambi si khali gar pe jab chal rahi hun kale
Tum hath tham mere sath hi chal padte ho
Lekin jab ghar ki chaukhat pe dekhti hun main
Tum gayab ho jayte ho han tum bht yad ate ho

Saj sanwar kar jab khadi hoti hun aaine k samne
Tum mujhe dekh muskurake dheere se paas aate ho
Baahein daal gale me mere chum lete ho palkon ko
Jab kholti hun palkein tum gayab ho jate ho
Haan tum mujhe bht yaad aate ho

Khaali jeewan suna angna koi na saathi na sangi
Ek tere na hone se mujhe lagta koi bhi apna nahin
Sochun jab main ye tum mujhme main ban sama jate ho
Jaanu tab tum mujhe bht yaad ate ho…….

bahoot5 he acha jawab diya hai app ne kasak ji... bahoot khoob!!! Good work!! ek jo udasi najar aai thi klaskar ji ki kavita mai apke jawab ne usko khumar-e-ishaq ka roop de diya... bahoot khoob!!!


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«Reply #22 on: September 06, 2010, 07:00:01 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya Pooja ji... main tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaaa karta hoon ki aapne apne kimti waqt me se thoda sa waqt nikaal ke mere is kavita ko diya, ise padha aur pasand kiya... bahut bahut shukriya Pooja ji.... ummeed karta hoon aage bhi aapka saath yunhi bana rahega.. ek baar fir se ..."SHUKRIYA"...!!!

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«Reply #23 on: September 06, 2010, 10:04:39 PM »

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... bahut hi pyaar bhara jawaab hai aapka Kasak ji,... yunhi saath dete rahiye tabhi meri kalam chalti rahegi... shukriya .. bahut bahut shukriya....!!!

phoolon ki bagiyaa ko main kya sajaunga,
chaandni kya hai chaand ko kya bataunga,
asar tera aisa hai mere dilo dimaag pe,
ki aaj fir tujhpe koi gazal likh jaunga,

khwaabon me aake tujhe kangan pehnaunga,
haathon ko tere apne hothon se lagaunga,
rajanigandha jaisi mehek tere saanso ki,
us mehek se main khud bhi mehek jaunga,

main tere pyar ke saagar me doob jaunga,
jab main tujhe apne seene se lagaunga,
tadap uthegi tu bhi meri mohabbat me,
kuch is tarha tujhe paagal kar jaunga,

pyaar apna ji bharke tujh pe lutaunga,
mai kaanha ban tujhe baansuri banaunga,
hothon se tujhe apne lagaake main,
apne dhun se main tera dil behlaunga,

main is jahaaan se tujhe dur le jaunga,
ek khoobsurat sa apna jahaan basaunga,
chhoot jaaye agar saath bich safar me,
main agle janam me tera ban ke aaunga...

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«Reply #24 on: August 11, 2011, 02:28:09 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on September 05, 2010, 06:38:43 PM

thnx pooja ji for this appreciation..and thnx alot k aapne itna pasand kiya hamare likhe ko


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«Reply #25 on: August 11, 2011, 02:38:44 AM »

kabse pending pada hai ye likhne k liye aaj fir jab ise padha to anayaas hi pehle ki tarah ungliyan keyboard pe chal nikli....aur fir ek bar likh diya humne aapke sath...
klaskar ji...bht khubsurat hai aapka reply khumaar me dooba asardaar reply....

ab lijiye hamara jawab....

Aaj bhi tum mujhe bht yaad aate ho

Jab kabhi padhti hun koi purani nazm teri
Mujhme bas tum hi tum tab gungunate ho
Reh reh k beete khushnuma lamhon me
Tum mujhe sang apne kheench le jate ho

Wo baatein wo raatein wo masti bhari shaam
Na jane un palon me kitni yaadein basa jate ho
Sunti hun jab teri mithi baatein aaj bhi jab kabhi
Tum mujhe fir usi tarah pyaar se gudgudate ho

Nahin lautenge wo pal janti hun main fir bhi
Aaj bhi unhi me kai raatein main doob jati hun
Kya kahun ae mere sanam main ab tumse
Tum mere har sher har khyaal me sama jate ho

Haan aaj bhi tum mujhe bht bht bht yaad aate ho


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«Reply #26 on: August 12, 2011, 03:36:52 PM »

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kasak ji..... meri to kalam band hai ajkal... jab chalegi tab jawaab dunga.... bahut ki khoob likha hai aapne.... keep writing....!!!


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