-----/// Tum mujhe paagal kar jaate ho /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on June 07, 2012, 11:38:05 AM
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main deewaanaa hoon, kyun meri deewaangi ko aazmaate ho,
nasheelee adaaon se kyun meri dhadkano ko badhaate ho,
chhu jaate ho mujhe aake mere khwaabon me kuch is tarha,
tadap uth_ta hoon main, aur tum dekh mujhe muskuraate ho,

jangal me kisi mor ki tarha, tum naachti ho, kabhi gaati ho,
chaahun tumhe chhuna agar main, tum chhui mui si ban jaati ho,
pyaasaa hoon tumhaare pyaar ka main, chain mujhe ek pal nahi,
dikhaake jheel si aankhen apni meri pyaas ko badhaa jaati ho,

geelee si baarishon me jab kabhi bheeg jaataa hoon main,
sharaabi hothon se tum mujhe chhu ke paagal kar jaate ho,
aag si lag jaatee hai paani me tab, jal jaata hoon main,
aur tum jalte huye mere tan badan ko aur jalaa jaate ho,

tum raho aankhon ke saamne to geet koi adhuri rehti nahi,
jazbaat behte rehte hain aur tum khud ghazal ban jaate ho,
log kehte hai ki mohabbat me sirf dard hi mil paataa hai,
sach to ye hai ki tum mere har dard ki dawaa ban jaate ho...


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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2012, 11:44:56 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB HRIDAY JEE.
KHOOBSOORAT JAZBAAT KHOOBSOORTI KE SATH.
DAAD KUBOOL KIJIYE
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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2012, 11:47:42 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2012, 12:17:59 PM »
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waahhhhhhhh wahhhhhhh wahhhhhh kapil waahhhhhhhhhhhh aaj to tum fultuuuuuuu romantic mood me ho.... kya baat hai ..... kisi nasheeli aankhon wali ka saamna ho gaya kyaaaaaaa....... ya fir koi bhuli hui daastaan yaad aagai...... bolo bolo telll telllll
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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2012, 12:48:59 PM »
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boht khub bhai very romantic
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«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2012, 01:39:32 PM »
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bahut khoob Hriday ji
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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2012, 04:56:42 PM »
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Bahut khoob Hriday jee
Kuch to hai..jaroor...varna sabhi log yun hi na kahte..
khush rahiye...
hame to khoob lulf aata hai aapki har kalaam padhkar..sach me aap dil se likhte hai.
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«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2012, 06:57:32 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: June 08, 2012, 12:22:07 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Anahita ji....!!!


BAHUT KHOOB HRIDAY JEE.
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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2012, 08:31:52 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Roy ji....!!!

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«Reply #10 on: June 15, 2012, 01:04:11 PM »
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Aapke rehte koi nashili aaankhon ke baare me soch sakta hoon kya main???/
Naa ji ab kisi nashili aankhon wali ko dekh ke paagal ya deewaanaa nahi hotaa... aur naa hi koi bhuli hui daastaan yaad aayi hai.. bas ek bahaaw thaa.. likh liyaa... kabhi kabhi yunhi ho jaataa hoon "fultuuuuuuu romantic mood me"....heheheheh... thnk u sooooooooooo much for the sweet comments... !!!




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waahhhhhhhh wahhhhhhh wahhhhhh kapil waahhhhhhhhhhhh aaj to tum fultuuuuuuu romantic mood me ho.... kya baat hai ..... kisi nasheeli aankhon wali ka saamna ho gaya kyaaaaaaa....... ya fir koi bhuli hui daastaan yaad aagai...... bolo bolo telll telllll
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«Reply #11 on: June 18, 2012, 07:56:31 PM »
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Thank you sooo much Saahill ji....!!!

boht khub bhai very romantic
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«Reply #12 on: June 18, 2012, 10:44:38 PM »
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acha likha hai hriday jee
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«Reply #13 on: June 20, 2012, 03:38:03 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji,.....!!!

bahut khoob Hriday ji
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«Reply #14 on: June 21, 2012, 04:48:12 PM »
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Thank you sooooooooooo much Mukesh ji... ji bilkul hai.. kyun nahi hoga ... main aur meri imagination.... aapko hamaari poems pasand aaye isse zyaadaa khushi ki baat hamaare liye bhalaa aur kya ho sakti hain.... thanks again.....!!!

Bahut khoob Hriday jee
Kuch to hai..jaroor...varna sabhi log yun hi na kahte..
khush rahiye...
hame to khoob lulf aata hai aapki har kalaam padhkar..sach me aap dil se likhte hai.
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