-----/// Tum muskuraa rahe hoge ///----- Hriday

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kal shaam yunhi chhat par baithe baithe
taaron ko dekhte huye ye khayaal aayaa...

shaayad kahin duur, apne chhat pe baithe
un taaron me tum mujhe dekh rahe hoge
dekh meraa chehraa tumhe dekhtaa huwaa
shayad tum wahaan sharmaa rahe hoge...

kabhi chhipaa rahe hoge apnaa chehraa, aur
kabhi chupke se mujhse nazar milaa rahe hoge
hogi tadap mujhe seene se lagaane ki, par
tadapte huye bhi tum muskuraa rahe hoge...

ye kaisi deewaangi hai, kaisaa nashaa hai
ki duur hoke bhi duur nahi hain ek pal
main tumhe mehsoos kar rahaa hoon yahaan
tum bhi mujhe wahaan mehsoos kar rahe hoge...

aisaa pehle nahi hotaa thaa kabhi mujhe
main paagal tha magar itnaa nahi thaa kabhi
jaantaa hoon tumhaari haalat bhi mujh jaisi hai
tum bhi kuch mujh jaise kaam kar rahe hoge...

kabhi baatein karte hoge apne ghar ki deewaaron se
kabhi yunhi akele baithe baithe kho jaate hoge
kabhi to khud ko sochte hoge baadalon ke bich tum
kabhi apne ki khwaab me aasmaan me udd rahe hoge...

kyaa ye asar mohabbat kaa hai, yaa kuch aur hai
aajkal, tum bhi kuch kuch meri tarhaa sochte hoge
jaantaa hoon ki ye paagalpan hai meraa, ye sochnaa
ki padh ke ise is pal tum muskuraa rahe hoge...


*****HRIDAY*****



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«Reply #1 on: January 30, 2013, 11:50:46 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #2 on: January 30, 2013, 12:13:29 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Har baar ki tarah bahut khoobsurat kalam hriday jee. hamari dili mubarakbad qubool kare
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«Reply #3 on: January 30, 2013, 12:23:34 PM »
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 love9 this poem..
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«Reply #4 on: January 30, 2013, 12:43:24 PM »
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 Applause
bahut khoob.
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«Reply #5 on: January 30, 2013, 01:18:52 PM »
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bahut hee khoobsoorat nazm kapil mubarak ho
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«Reply #6 on: January 30, 2013, 02:16:29 PM »
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wah wwaahhh
bohot khoobsorat
behad lubhavni shayri thi hriday sir

dheroon daad
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«Reply #7 on: January 30, 2013, 02:53:34 PM »
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wha ji Wha
So nice lines
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«Reply #8 on: January 30, 2013, 03:52:38 PM »
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Behatreen peshkash..
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: January 30, 2013, 07:02:06 PM »
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Kapil Jee Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab, kia ishqiyaaN rog lag gaya hai aapko..
Khuda khair kare.. tongue3

Behad khoobsurat ahsaas O khayaal kahe hai aapne...
Sabhi khayaal kafi achche rahe.. Humari dheroN daad O
mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2013, 03:45:12 AM »
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All beautiful feelings & nice work! Clapping Smiley....Hriday ji mubaarak ho!!
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«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2013, 04:17:08 AM »
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wah wah wah wah
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kyaa ye asar mohabbat kaa hai, yaa kuch aur hai aajkal, tum bhi kuch kuch meri tarhaa sochte hoge jaantaa hoon ki ye paagalpan hai meraa, ye sochnaa ki padh ke ise is pal tum muskuraa rahe hoge...


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: January 31, 2013, 07:35:44 AM »
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वाह क्या बात है ह्रदय जी बहुत खूब दिली मुबारकबाद और ढेरों दाद
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kal shaam yunhi chhat par baithe baithe
taaron ko dekhte huye ye khayaal aayaa...

shaayad kahin duur, apne chhat pe baithe
un taaron me tum mujhe dekh rahe hoge
dekh meraa chehraa tumhe dekhtaa huwaa
shayad tum wahaan sharmaa rahe hoge...

kabhi chhipaa rahe hoge apnaa chehraa, aur
kabhi chupke se mujhse nazar milaa rahe hoge
hogi tadap mujhe seene se lagaane ki, par
tadapte huye bhi tum muskuraa rahe hoge...

ye kaisi deewaangi hai, kaisaa nashaa hai
ki duur hoke bhi duur nahi hain ek pal
main tumhe mehsoos kar rahaa hoon yahaan
tum bhi mujhe wahaan mehsoos kar rahe hoge...

aisaa pehle nahi hotaa thaa kabhi mujhe
main paagal tha magar itnaa nahi thaa kabhi
jaantaa hoon tumhaari haalat bhi mujh jaisi hai
tum bhi kuch mujh jaise kaam kar rahe hoge...

kabhi baatein karte hoge apne ghar ki deewaaron se
kabhi yunhi akele baithe baithe kho jaate hoge
kabhi to khud ko sochte hoge baadalon ke bich tum
kabhi apne ki khwaab me aasmaan me udd rahe hoge...

kyaa ye asar mohabbat kaa hai, yaa kuch aur hai
aajkal, tum bhi kuch kuch meri tarhaa sochte hoge
jaantaa hoon ki ye paagalpan hai meraa, ye sochnaa
ki padh ke ise is pal tum muskuraa rahe hoge...


*****HRIDAY*****






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