~~"TUM MUSKURAYA KARO"~~

by k.shael on January 21, 2009, 06:41:24 AM
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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2009, 07:10:37 AM »
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kya baat hai shallyji.....

har din phoolon ki tarha muskhuraya karo,
jab jee chahe nazron se nazren milaya karo.
har waqat, mae tere,tu mere dil mein samaya karo,
kal ka kya barosa,hum na ho yan tum na ho,
jab tak hai,har samaa,rangeen banaya karo.
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«Reply #2 on: January 21, 2009, 07:35:28 AM »
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wah shally, very beautifully said

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«Reply #3 on: January 21, 2009, 07:36:18 AM »
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wah cara, u too said so beautifully

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«Reply #4 on: January 21, 2009, 12:51:10 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Likha Shallyji Applause Applause Applause
Bahoot Khoob Caraji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: January 21, 2009, 03:51:26 PM »
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bahoot achcha likha hai shally kya hi khoob jajba hai
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«Reply #6 on: January 21, 2009, 07:05:05 PM »
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Really wonderful Shally Ji
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«Reply #7 on: January 21, 2009, 07:25:38 PM »
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Bahut khoob...Shallyji aur caraji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Bus aap essi tarah likha karo
Hum ko essi tarah hasaya karo
Kuchh shabdo ka eysa jadoo karo
Humse talli roj bajwaya karo

Surendra Mardia

kya baat hai shallyji.....

har din phoolon ki tarha muskhuraya karo,
jab jee chahe nazron se nazren milaya karo.
har waqat, mae tere,tu mere dil mein samaya karo,
kal ka kya barosa,hum na ho yan tum na ho,
jab tak hai,har samaa,rangeen banaya karo.

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«Reply #8 on: January 21, 2009, 08:09:30 PM »
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good work shally and cara.
smardia ji apne khob sath diya!! Good work all
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«Reply #9 on: January 22, 2009, 05:02:12 AM »
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Bahut PYara likha aapne shally ji.... Applause U R So Sweet.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2009, 08:01:58 AM »
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Bohat Achche Bohat ACHCHE Shally Partner,.
Yunhi Likhte Raho,.

And Nice One Cara Ji
And Smardia Ji,.
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«Reply #11 on: February 25, 2009, 04:55:57 PM »
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DOSTI KARNEY KA ANDAAZ AANA CHAHIYEH
YAAD KARNEY KA NA KOI BAHANA CHAHIYEH
HUM ROZ INTEZAAR KARTEY HAI AAP KA
KABHI TOH HAMAREY NAAM KOI PAIGAAM AANA CHAHIYEH



JASBIR SINGH

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«Reply #12 on: February 25, 2009, 05:01:12 PM »
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Nice image shally.. and bahut mushkil se pad payee dear. shayad white color leti toh aur clear hota...

Bahut accha likha hai aapne shally dear ... keep up. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #13 on: February 26, 2009, 09:13:12 AM »
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Very beautiful work Shally but as Roja said bohat mushkil hui padhne me...Bohat khoob
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