Tum Paas Aao ToH Ghazal Keh DooN..!!...Shireen Hakani

by Shireen Hakani on May 15, 2013, 06:25:43 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 15, 2013, 09:06:04 PM »
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bohat khoob shirin ji,......bohat c daad,...........
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«Reply #16 on: May 15, 2013, 09:06:51 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooooob Shireen jee....

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ghazal....


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«Reply #17 on: May 15, 2013, 10:03:09 PM »
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Quote from: Shireen Hakani on May 15, 2013, 07:55:39 PM
There's a difference between being Righteous and Vicious.I hope you understand the difference someday.

i am sorry for my comments and to hurt you feelings so i retrieved my word be happy.
 
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«Reply #18 on: May 15, 2013, 10:04:28 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on May 15, 2013, 08:54:47 PM
Wah,Wah,Wah Shireenji,
Very nice.You have completed ur promise to me.You have given a nice reply to my ghazal.Perheps,it is more influencial and emotional than that,I have posted some days ago.Please accept my good wishes.

One think more I have to clear to all users of yoindia,especially to Mr. Marhoomji ,That miss. Shireenji have taken my prior concent to use this radeef.
It is undoubtly a great pleasure to me that other user want to use my pattern.I have no objection for this concern.One think more I want to declare that Any Kafia or radeef,I use in my ghazal,is not my personal property.


mr sudhir i have conveyed you in PM

THANK YOU
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«Reply #19 on: May 15, 2013, 10:10:15 PM »
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Nice ghazal, nice gesture by Sudhir ji too...I will request all my
friends to  be cool  and cordial  as we are here not to assert our
supremacy but to share and appreciate poetry.
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«Reply #20 on: May 15, 2013, 11:40:44 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Nice Sirji.
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«Reply #21 on: May 16, 2013, 12:14:32 AM »
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BEHAD UMDAH.....GREAT GAZHAL...
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«Reply #22 on: May 16, 2013, 12:17:41 AM »
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Quote from: Shireen Hakani on May 15, 2013, 06:25:43 PM
Tum Paas Aao ToH Ghazal Keh DooN,
Zara Muskuraao ToH Ghazal Keh DooN..!!

Hai BarsoN Ki Tamanna Meri Aye Jaan,
Saath Gungunaao ToH Ghazal Keh DooN..!!

Chale Aao Meri Zindagi Ki Mehfil MeiN,
Dil Se Dil Milaao ToH Ghazal Keh DooN..!!

Chupaa Lo Mujh Ko Apni BaahoN MeiN,
Gale Se Lagaao ToH Ghazal Keh DooN..!!

Mujhe Chum Lene Do Peshaani Tumhari,
PalkeiN Jhukaao ToH Ghazal Keh DooN..!!

Taras RaheN HaiN Mere Khwaab Sabhi,
Inhe Tum Sajaao ToH Ghazal Keh DooN..!!

Thaam Lo Haath Mera Umar Bhar Ke Liye,
Apna Tum Banaao ToH Ghazal Keh DooN..!!

Shireen Hakani



waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause

             bahut udaas sa chehra nazar aata hai tera...,
             zara tum muskuraao to ghazal kah dein...,
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«Reply #23 on: May 16, 2013, 12:45:12 AM »
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Nice Ghazal
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«Reply #24 on: May 16, 2013, 12:49:09 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on May 15, 2013, 10:10:15 PM
Nice ghazal, nice gesture by Sudhir ji too...I will request all my
friends to  be cool  and cordial  as we are here not to assert our
supremacy but to share and appreciate poetry.
Thanks for your positive comment sir
it's our duty to intervene at the right time. There is no point in ignoring the situation like this.
Surely, it's a forum to enjoy the poetry.
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«Reply #25 on: May 16, 2013, 07:43:44 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause BAhut Khub
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