Tum par ghazal likhu......(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on January 04, 2009, 07:38:37 AM
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Tum par ghazal likhu ya tumhe ghazal likhu
Jiski har ada ho shayri, us nazneen ko kya likhu

Tumhe aasman likhu tumhe chandni likhu
Jo khud noor-e-jahan lage, us roshni ko kya likhu

Tumhe aarzoo likhu tumhe justujoo likhu
Jo duao me farishto ki shamil ho, us dua ko kya likhu

Tumhe dibar likhu apna, ya dost main likhu
Jo ajnabi hoker lage apna sa, us rishte ko kya likhu

Tumhe haseen likhu sabse ya mehjabeen likhu
Haseen huro se jinhe kehte hain, woh lafz kya likhu

Tumhe apna main likhu ya paraya main likhu
Akayla nam hain Ghayel sath iske, kya naam tera likhu

                                              -Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #1 on: January 04, 2009, 07:50:34 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 04, 2009, 07:38:37 AM
Tum par ghazal likhu ya tumhe ghazal likhu
Jiski har ada ho shayri, us nazneen ko kya likhu

Tumhe aasman likhu tumhe chandni likhu
Jo khud noor-e-jahan lage, us roshni ko kya likhu

Tumhe aarzoo likhu tumhe justujoo likhu
Jo duao me farishto ki shamil ho, us dua ko kya likhu

Tumhe dibar likhu apna, ya dost main likhu
Jo ajnabi hoker lage apna sa, us rishte ko kya likhu

Tumhe haseen likhu sabse ya mehjabeen likhu
Haseen huro se jinhe kehte hain, woh lafz kya likhu

Tumhe apna main likhu ya paraya main likhu
Akayla nam hain Ghayel sath iske, kya naam tera likhu

                                              -Sajid Ghayel-


Kya Baath hai Ghayal Sahab Kissi ko Ghayal Karne ke rodath Nazar Ate hain Apke Bahoth Badiya Likha hai Janab Jiske Liye bhi Likha Allah Kare Wo apko Samajh payen !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #2 on: January 04, 2009, 07:51:27 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: January 04, 2009, 08:14:01 AM »
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Very nice, Sajid Ji Applause
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cara
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«Reply #4 on: January 04, 2009, 08:23:25 AM »
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kya gayelji, bahut hi bahetreen likh dala hai.....


tuje ghazal kahoon ,tuje geet kahoon,
sab ke hothon pe tu hai,tuje preet kahoon.
tu asmaan se yai hai ,ya zameen se hai neekli,
tuj sa kohi nahin hai jahan mein,apne aap mein tu hai akelee.
tuje apna kahoon ya tuje ,paraya kahoon,
muje gayel kahete hain ,tuje gayel karnewali kahoon.
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«Reply #5 on: January 04, 2009, 08:24:21 AM »
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Kya Baat Hai Ghyal Sahab
Bahoot Khoob  Applause Applause Applause
Bahoot Khoob  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: January 04, 2009, 02:50:27 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 04, 2009, 07:50:34 AM
Kya Baath hai Ghayal Sahab Kissi ko Ghayal Karne ke rodath Nazar Ate hain Apke Bahoth Badiya Likha hai Janab Jiske Liye bhi Likha Allah Kare Wo apko Samajh payen !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Yaar ek dam dukhti pe hatk rakh dete ho and thanks for the dua.

Quote from: angel4u on January 04, 2009, 07:51:27 AM
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Sirf muskaraogi

Quote from: Deepati on January 04, 2009, 08:14:01 AM
Very nice, Sajid Ji Applause

Thank u deepati kash tumne bhi kuch likha hota mauka dekhke chauka mar diya karo

Quote from: cara on January 04, 2009, 08:23:25 AM
kya gayelji, bahut hi bahetreen likh dala hai.....


tuje ghazal kahoon ,tuje geet kahoon,
sab ke hothon pe tu hai,tuje preet kahoon.
tu asmaan se yai hai ,ya zameen se hai neekli,
tuj sa kohi nahin hai jahan mein,apne aap mein tu hai akelee.
tuje apna kahoon ya tuje ,paraya kahoon,
muje gayel kahete hain ,tuje gayel karnewali kahoon.

As always bohat khoobsurat jawab aur oye Behtareen likh dala se kya matlab aisa kabhi kabhi karta hu kya main  DOH

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Kya Baat Hai Ghyal Sahab
Bahoot Khoob  Applause Applause Applause
Bahoot Khoob  Applause Applause Applause

Bohat shukriyaan pank jee aapne pada kya yeh kam hain tareef to bonus hain
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«Reply #7 on: January 04, 2009, 04:29:43 PM »
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Ghayal Sahab Aapne Jo Izzat Bakshi hai
Uske liye Nachiz Tahedil se Shukrgujar hai
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«Reply #8 on: January 05, 2009, 02:56:09 AM »
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Muskurana matlab tarif karna hota hai,
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samjha karo thoda... itne nasamajh banna achhi baat nahi
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«Reply #9 on: January 05, 2009, 04:13:09 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 04, 2009, 07:38:37 AM
Tum par ghazal likhu ya tumhe ghazal likhu
Jiski har ada ho shayri, us nazneen ko kya likhu

Tumhe aasman likhu tumhe chandni likhu
Jo khud noor-e-jahan lage, us roshni ko kya likhu

Tumhe aarzoo likhu tumhe justujoo likhu
Jo duao me farishto ki shamil ho, us dua ko kya likhu

Tumhe dibar likhu apna, ya dost main likhu
Jo ajnabi hoker lage apna sa, us rishte ko kya likhu

Tumhe haseen likhu sabse ya mehjabeen likhu
Haseen huro se jinhe kehte hain, woh lafz kya likhu

Tumhe apna main likhu ya paraya main likhu
Akayla nam hain Ghayel sath iske, kya naam tera likhu

                                              -Sajid Ghayel-



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wah samjh nahi atta ki ab apki parshnsa main kaya likhein... kamaal@dhamaal.shandaar!!

bahoot he pyari kavita likhi hai apne... bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #10 on: January 05, 2009, 04:46:01 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 04, 2009, 07:38:37 AM
Tum par ghazal likhu ya tumhe ghazal likhu
Jiski har ada ho shayri, us nazneen ko kya likhu

Tumhe aasman likhu tumhe chandni likhu
Jo khud noor-e-jahan lage, us roshni ko kya likhu

Tumhe aarzoo likhu tumhe justujoo likhu
Jo duao me farishto ki shamil ho, us dua ko kya likhu

Tumhe dibar likhu apna, ya dost main likhu
Jo ajnabi hoker lage apna sa, us rishte ko kya likhu

Tumhe haseen likhu sabse ya mehjabeen likhu
Haseen huro se jinhe kehte hain, woh lafz kya likhu

Tumhe apna main likhu ya paraya main likhu
Akayla nam hain Ghayel sath iske, kya naam tera likhu

                                              -Sajid Ghayel-



wah kya baat hai Ghayel.



Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #11 on: January 05, 2009, 07:43:56 AM »
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Quote from: angel4u on January 05, 2009, 02:56:09 AM
Muskurana matlab tarif karna hota hai,
hidden taarif Usual Smile
samjha karo thoda... itne nasamajh banna achhi baat nahi

Arey madam itni akal aur samaj hoti to GHAYEL thodi hota.  DOH

Quote from: Pooja on January 05, 2009, 04:13:09 AM

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wah samjh nahi atta ki ab apki parshnsa main kaya likhein... kamaal@dhamaal.shandaar!!

bahoot he pyari kavita likhi hai apne... bahoot khoob!!

Pooja tumne ek wah keh diya bas yahi kafi hain mere liye thanking for reading my work.

Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 05, 2009, 04:46:01 AM

wah kya baat hai Ghayel.

Jasbir Singh


Yaar yu to bada kudiyo ke shero pe sher pe sher marte ho  Giggle kabhi kabhi apne is yaar ko do line dan me de diya karo  DOH
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«Reply #12 on: January 06, 2009, 02:51:48 AM »
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«Reply #13 on: January 06, 2009, 02:52:29 AM »
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Tera Yun Sanwar Ke Aana Mere Dil,
Aur DheeMe Se Muskurana Mere Dil,

Mere JisM Se Rooh Ko Khich Leta Hai,
Tera Madhoo Aankhonse Mujhe Dekhna Mere Dil,

Main Un Aankhon Ki Tareef Kaise Likhun,
Muddaton Sochna Padega Mujhe Mere Dil,

Ek Hasrat Thi Uska Hath ChuMne Ki,
Kar Dala Us Butt Ko Bhi Usne Nishana Mere Dil,

Main Kahin Bhi Chala Jaun Agar,
Mere Mehboob Ke Paas Rahega Mera Dil...

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«Reply #14 on: July 08, 2011, 09:51:17 AM »
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dil ke paar gayi sajid bhai..
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