tum saraapaa jamaal mein lipte

by zarra on October 31, 2010, 11:05:26 AM

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zarra

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tum saraapaa jamaal mein lipte
par museebat sawaal mein lipte

tum gham-e-zindagi mein uljhe ho
ham hain lutf-e-wisaal mein lipte

jaao mat ahal-e-duniya par ye sab
jaane hain kis wabaal mein lipte

kaise aayenge teri baahon mein
ham hain gard-o-sifaal mein lipte

tum jo ik morh alag murh jaate
jeete marte malaal mein lipte

tum na kucchh baat meri sunte ho
tum ho mere khayaal mein lipte


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Re: tum saraapaa jamaal mein lipte

«Reply #1 on: October 31, 2010, 12:38:13 PM »

zarra sahab bahut achcha kaha hai aapne magar pahla sher or us ka mafum kuch samajh nahin saka main ,baqi bahut achcha laga ....rehan mubarak "tanhaa"


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Re: tum saraapaa jamaal mein lipte

«Reply #2 on: October 31, 2010, 01:17:51 PM »

urdu words kuch samjh nahin aaye par jitna samjha achcha laga ji


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Re: tum saraapaa jamaal mein lipte

«Reply #3 on: October 31, 2010, 02:12:41 PM »

daad ke liye shukriya.

ji haan, pehle sher mein ka kucchh implied meaning hai jo doosare sher mein aur clear hota hai.

pehle sher mein jo kehne ki koshish ki hai woh kucchh is tarah hai ..... while you fill my heart with your beauty, but the problem is that you on the other hand are too preoccupied with the questions and wories of life.

yeh theme doosare sher mein aage jaati hai jismein yeh poori tarah clear hoti hai.


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yasmeen khan

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Re: tum saraapaa jamaal mein lipte

«Reply #4 on: October 31, 2010, 02:51:35 PM »

zara ji bahoot achha likha aapne isi tarah likhti rahiye


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mamta bajpai

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Re: tum saraapaa jamaal mein lipte

«Reply #5 on: November 01, 2010, 09:24:48 AM »

Badi khoobsurati se aap ne lafzoN ko gazal ka jama pahnaayaa hai Zarra jee...aap ko pahlee baar yo par paRhaa.behad umdah or ma'anikhaiz likhtee haiN aap.bahut bahut badhaai.......