<~Tum..~> (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on May 01, 2007, 09:22:12 AM
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2007, 01:04:11 PM »
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Very nice Shikha !
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: May 01, 2007, 01:33:25 PM »
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wah bahoot khoob Shikha!! Bahoot hi acha likha hai!!
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Rajbir
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«Reply #3 on: May 01, 2007, 04:11:32 PM »
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Shikha ji

Bahut khoob ! =D> =D> =D>
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nilesh dave
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«Reply #4 on: May 01, 2007, 04:16:32 PM »
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shararat na hoti shikayat na hoti
nayano me kisi ke nazakat na hoti
na hoti bekarari na hote hum tanha
jo jahan me kambakht ye muhobat na hoti
na hote ye sapne ye khwabo ki duniya
kisi ko chahat ki tamanna na hoti
na julfo ki chhaya na phoolo ki khusbu
yaado me uski ye rate na katati
jo na hoti muhobat ye anshu na hote
dil bhi na khota aaj tanha na rota
majanu si apani ye halat na hoti
jo jahan me kambakht ye muhobat na hoti

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Rajbir
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«Reply #5 on: May 01, 2007, 04:20:48 PM »
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Nilesh

Wah ! wah ! Bahut khoob !
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natural
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«Reply #6 on: May 01, 2007, 06:12:27 PM »
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Wonderful Shikha....

Nitesh Please Put Not Mine if the creation is not yours.... Nice sharing though..


Aankh khulte hi ojhal ho jaate ho tum,
Khwaab ban ke aise kyon sataate ho tum…

Jab bhi mehsoos huyi mujhe meri tanhayi
geet koyi madhur gunguna jaate ho tum...
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2007, 05:23:31 AM »
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WOW...!!!!! SHIKHA... bahut Bahut khoooooob.. Behad Khubsoorat Rachna
pesh Ki hai Aapne.. Last Line me To aapne Kamaal hi kar diya...!!!

Khubsoorat Ehasaason se Bhara Kalaam hai Aapka.. Great Work.. Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: May 02, 2007, 07:22:31 PM »
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Thanks a lot Talat and Pooja di... Usual Smile

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Shikha ji

Bahut khoob ! =D> =D> =D>


Puzzled !

Thanks a lot... Usual Smile
India aate raha kariye, Aur bhi jyaada Adab se pesh aana seekh jaayenge... tongue3 Rajbir JI
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«Reply #9 on: May 02, 2007, 07:25:50 PM »
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shararat na hoti shikayat na hoti
nayano me kisi ke nazakat na hoti
na hoti bekarari na hote hum tanha
jo jahan me kambakht ye muhobat na hoti
na hote ye sapne ye khwabo ki duniya
kisi ko chahat ki tamanna na hoti
na julfo ki chhaya na phoolo ki khusbu
yaado me uski ye rate na katati
jo na hoti muhobat ye anshu na hote
dil bhi na khota aaj tanha na rota
majanu si apani ye halat na hoti
jo jahan me kambakht ye muhobat na hoti


You are Most Welcome to our Beautiful World or YOINDIA Nilesh... Usual Smile

That is really Beautiful Piece of Work... Thanks a lot for sharing with us.
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«Reply #10 on: May 02, 2007, 08:00:22 PM »
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Wonderful Shikha....

Nitesh Please Put Not Mine if the creation is not yours.... Nice sharing though..


Aankh khulte hi ojhal ho jaate ho tum,
Khwaab ban ke aise kyon sataate ho tum…

Jab bhi mehsoos huyi mujhe meri tanhayi
geet koyi madhur gunguna jaate ho tum...



Thanks a lot Jagdish.... Aaj pehli baar padha aap ka likha hua... Usual Smile
And its really Amazing.... =D> Very Good Work...


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«Reply #11 on: May 02, 2007, 08:03:13 PM »
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WOW...!!!!! SHIKHA... bahut Bahut khoooooob.. Behad Khubsoorat Rachna
pesh Ki hai Aapne.. Last Line me To aapne Kamaal hi kar diya...!!!

Khubsoorat Ehasaason se Bhara Kalaam hai Aapka.. Great Work.. Usual Smile Usual Smile


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Vicky.... Usual Smile
Mujhe to apne kalaam se jyaada aapka Tareef karne ka andaaz achha laga... :D
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«Reply #12 on: May 03, 2007, 02:58:32 AM »
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Quote from: "natural"
Wonderful Shikha....

Nitesh Please Put Not Mine if the creation is not yours.... Nice sharing though..


Aankh khulte hi ojhal ho jaate ho tum,
Khwaab ban ke aise kyon sataate ho tum…

Jab bhi mehsoos huyi mujhe meri tanhayi
geet koyi madhur gunguna jaate ho tum...



Thanks a lot Jagdish.... Aaj pehli baar padha aap ka likha hua... Usual Smile
And its really Amazing.... =D> Very Good Work...


POETRY DELETED BY SHIKHA..


Achha pehli baar parha kya....  Puzzled !  par gaming mein to main likhta rehta hoon.... like guess who's nxt, say na somethin....etc.. :D

Nicely written again.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: May 07, 2007, 11:33:02 AM »
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Waah Waaah.....Yeh kon aa gaya aaj ISHQ me Shocked  Shocked  Shocked .....waise bahut hee accha likha hai Shikha....Really u and ur poem is Bootifull :wink:  :wink:


Yeh Faaslein tumhari Baaton ke.....
Kabhi kam na kar sake hum......

Tum jab aayi Kareeb hamare.....
Toh Khud se hee Door chale gaye hum......!!!
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«Reply #14 on: May 08, 2007, 05:51:48 AM »
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itne pyaar se maine ek ek ki line padhi ...wah yahan sabne bahut achha likha hai ....jagdish ji bahut acche .... :D
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