Tum.. Sirf Tum..

by sangy on June 07, 2006, 06:46:56 AM
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Har Sapne mein Tum..
har saans mein Tum..
har dhadkan mein Tum..
har baat mein Tum..
Sirf Tum...

Pyaarke uss kashish mein Tum..
gusse ki meeti chuban mein Tum..
Rootne ki wazah mein Tum..
Manaane ki koshish mein Tum..
Haan Tum...

Subah ki tandi hawa mein Tum..
suraj ki chubthi kirnon mein Tum..
raat ko doobthi hui shaam mein Tum..
sitaron ki chamak mein Tum...
Bas Tum......
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Anushka
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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2006, 08:08:11 AM »
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Welcome sagyji,

Acha likha... good one. :D
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sangy
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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2006, 08:18:26 AM »
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Welcome sagyji,

Acha likha... good one. :D


Thanks so much anush Usual Smile
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redwhitegang
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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2006, 07:01:06 PM »
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very nice sangy ji!
aap ki is likhayi paar hume bohot pyar aaya hain aur aap ka sher ka wo "tum" aagar main hota to main aap se yahi kehta...

Badalna aata nahi HUM ko mausamo ki tarha,
Her ek roop main TUM-hara intezaar karte hain,
Na TUM samait sakoge jisse qayamat tak,
Qasam se HUM tumhain itna Pyaar karte hain. Usual Smile [/b]
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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2006, 09:15:40 PM »
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good one sangy...

us sapnon ki aankh ho tum
us saanson ki awaaz ho tum
us dhadkanon ki dhadkan ho tum
un baaton ki lafz ho tum
sirf tum...

un kashish ke khayal ho tum
us chuban ki ehsas ho tum
us wajah ki wajood ho tum
us koshish ki jaan ho tum
sirf tum...

us thand hawa ki kamp ho tum
un kirnon ki chalan ho tum
us sham ki mastani ho tum
us chamak ki nazaakat ho tum
bas tum....

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Har Sapne mein Tum..
har saans mein Tum..
har dhadkan mein Tum..
har baat mein Tum..
Sirf Tum...

Pyaarke uss kashish mein Tum..
gusse ki meeti chuban mein Tum..
Rootne ki wazah mein Tum..
Manaane ki koshish mein Tum..
Haan Tum...

Subah ki tandi hawa mein Tum..
suraj ki chubthi kirnon mein Tum..
raat ko doobthi hui shaam mein Tum..
sitaron ki chamak mein Tum...
Bas Tum......
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sangy
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«Reply #5 on: June 08, 2006, 05:33:58 AM »
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very nice sangy ji!
aap ki is likhayi paar hume bohot pyar aaya hain aur aap ka sher ka wo "tum" aagar main hota to main aap se yahi kehta...

Badalna aata nahi HUM ko mausamo ki tarha,
Her ek roop main TUM-hara intezaar karte hain,
Na TUM samait sakoge jisse qayamat tak,
Qasam se HUM tumhain itna Pyaar karte hain. Usual Smile [/b]



RWG...shukriya ki aapko hamara likha acha laga... waise aapki kuch kam nahi thi...
now take this...

kasam ki kasam
hain tujhe meri kasam..
na kar pyaar ithna mujhe
dhadkane rukjayengi meri ye sanam..
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«Reply #6 on: June 08, 2006, 09:05:30 AM »
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wonderful Sangy... RWG Ji... Manju ji... bahut khoob... yeo hi likhtey rahow dostu
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sangy
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«Reply #7 on: June 08, 2006, 09:06:20 AM »
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wonderful Sangy... RWG Ji... Manju ji... bahut khoob... yeo hi likhtey rahow dostu


Thanks Sonuji Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: June 08, 2006, 09:24:03 AM »
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wah wah kya baat hai.. SANGY JI aur MK JI..

Tumko dil diya hai humne bade naaz se,
mil gaye nayan mere harjaai dagabaaz se....
din-raat jagi aankhen meri, teri yaad se,
dil tadpe mera sanam, sunke teri aawaz se....
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«Reply #9 on: June 08, 2006, 10:44:06 AM »
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wah wah kya baat hai.. SANGY JI aur MK JI..

Tumko dil diya hai humne bade naaz se,
mil gaye nayan mere harjaai dagabaaz se....
din-raat jagi aankhen meri, teri yaad se,
dil tadpe mera sanam, sunke teri aawaz se....


yeh tadap hi hain meri jaan..
tere be-intehaan pyaar ki nishaani..
bina iss shikayat-e-mohabbat ka
hogi adhuri apni kahani...

Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: June 08, 2006, 12:36:16 PM »
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bahut khoob SANGY JI....

Roz kahata hoon main is baag ke phoolo se,
kahin jal na jana, mere mehboob-e-husn se........
yaad aati ho tum, us waqt bahut e-haseen,
jab geet gunjte hain saawanke in jhoolo se.....
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Sonu
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«Reply #11 on: June 09, 2006, 06:21:43 AM »
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bahut khoob vicky ji or sangy ji... wonderful yeo hi likhtey rahow...

Yaaden teri rakh di hain sambhaalkar...
Dur kanhi iss dil se nikaalkar...
Sab kuchh to vaapas le liya hain aapne dur jaakar...
Inn yaadon ko bhi le jaana kisi roz aakar..!!!
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«Reply #12 on: June 09, 2006, 08:39:39 AM »
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bahut khoob SANGY JI....

Roz kahata hoon main is baag ke phoolo se,
kahin jal na jana, mere mehboob-e-husn se........
yaad aati ho tum, us waqt bahut e-haseen,
jab geet gunjte hain saawanke in jhoolo se.....


jala tho khud gaye ho
apne pyaar ki aag mein..
phool bhi dekho murzagaye hain
mere saath tere intezaar mein..
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«Reply #13 on: June 09, 2006, 08:59:46 AM »
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bahut khoob SONU JI aur SANGY JI

yeh kaisa khumaar tere dil par chhaya hai,
mohabbat-e-aag me is kadar humen jalaya hai....
kaisa yeh intzaar, mudh kar to dekho sanam,
parwana khud jalne shama ke paas chala aaya hai...
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«Reply #14 on: June 09, 2006, 09:19:00 AM »
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bahut hi sundar likha hai Vicky,Sangy aur Sonu dear........... :D
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