"TUM"...

by vimmi singh on January 30, 2013, 10:45:35 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 30, 2013, 05:26:35 PM »
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Quote from: vimmi singh on January 30, 2013, 10:45:35 AM
tum chahat
tum pyaar
dil ki dhadkan
tumhi mera sansaar
geet bhi
sangeet bhi
tu hi zindagi
tu hai bandagi
meri khushi
meri preet bhi

tu subah ka os hai
sham ki laali hai tu
din ki khadi dhup me
taruwar ka chhaaya hai tu
sukh-dukh ka saathi
kan kan me samaaya hai tu

tum raahat
tum jajbaat
baarish ki thirkan
tumhi hothon ki muskaan
gadya bhi
padya bhi
tu hi khubsoorat alankaar
meri prerna
meri jeet bhi
tum chahat
tum pyaar
dil ki dhadkan
tumhi mera sansaar


achchchi nazm hai vimmi ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #16 on: January 30, 2013, 05:39:00 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on January 30, 2013, 10:50:43 AM
bahut khoob vimmi ji

bahut bahut shukriya nandbahu ji.....  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: January 31, 2013, 03:59:52 AM »
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Quote from: vimmi singh on January 30, 2013, 10:45:35 AM
tum chahat
tum pyaar
dil ki dhadkan
tumhi mera sansaar
geet bhi
sangeet bhi
tu hi zindagi
tu hai bandagi
meri khushi
meri preet bhi

tu subah ka os hai
sham ki laali hai tu
din ki khadi dhup me
taruwar ka chhaaya hai tu
sukh-dukh ka saathi
kan kan me samaaya hai tu

tum raahat
tum jajbaat
baarish ki thirkan
tumhi hothon ki muskaan
gadya bhi
padya bhi
tu hi khubsoorat alankaar
meri prerna
meri jeet bhi
tum chahat
tum pyaar
dil ki dhadkan
tumhi mera sansaar

nice
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«Reply #18 on: January 31, 2013, 06:50:23 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on January 30, 2013, 11:54:07 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob likha hai aapne vimmi jee. dheron daad

aapka tahe dil se bahut bahut shukriya aqsh ji.....  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: January 31, 2013, 11:48:32 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on January 30, 2013, 12:38:55 PM
nice poem !
thank you Siddiqui ji.......
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«Reply #20 on: February 04, 2013, 02:53:17 PM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on January 30, 2013, 01:22:29 PM
बहुत खूब

dhanywaad Rishi ji.......  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: February 05, 2013, 05:07:53 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on January 30, 2013, 02:35:22 PM
bht khoob Vimmi ji
daad daad
sarfira ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya....  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: February 10, 2013, 01:15:11 PM »
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Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on January 30, 2013, 03:02:04 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause nice g
thank you very much Rajan ji.......  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: February 10, 2013, 01:18:00 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on January 30, 2013, 03:49:50 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Vimmi ji.....!!!

thank you very much Hriday ji...... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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