-----/// Tum yahin kahin ho /// ------ Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on August 10, 2012, 03:07:47 PM
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kuch kuch haalat meri bhi tumhare jaisi hai
har chehre me tumhaaraa chehra
aisa lagta hai ki tum aas paas ho
yahin kahin ho, bas ek baar bulaaun main
aur tum chale aao
aake lag jaao mere seene se
aur kaho "jaanu, tum mere ho"

andhere kamre me roshni nahi karta
is dar se ki tum chali na jaao
roshni me mujhe sab kuch dikhta hai
par andhere me bas tumhaari tasveer hoti hai
wo tasveer jo mujhe kareeb bulaati hai
tum ho yahi kahin, aisa mehsoos karaati hai

main jab waqt milta hai so jaataa hoon
bas isi ummeed se ki tum aaoge
tum mere khwaabo ko aake sajaaoge
haqeeqat me tum nazar nahi aate ho
par khwaab me aake mujhe chhed jaate ho

ye ehsaas tumhaare hone kaa
aake mere khwaabon me mujhe bhigone ka
apni zulfon me mujhe chhipaane ka
aur chupke se mere gaalo ko chhoo jaane ka
wo ehsaas tumhaare naram hothon ka
wo ehsaas tumhaare garam saanson ka
mujhe tadpaa ke paagal banaa jaata hai
mujhe bataata hai tum yahi ho
mere kareeb yahin kahin ho

ab to bas ye intzaar hai ki
aake baahon me tumhe bhar loon
seene se lagaa loon tumhe
aur jee bhar ke pyaar kar loon
ye ghadiyaan intzaar ke kat_te nahi
aur ye baadal dooriyon ke hat_te nahi

kehta hoon in lamhon se ki guzar jaaye
ki wo waqt aajaaye kareeb ki tum milo
ho ghadi milan ki aur tum milo
tumse judaa hoke haal kuch ajeeb sa hai
dil to kehta hai ki tum kareeb ho
aur dimaag samjhaataa hai ki tum nahi ho
tum kahin nahi ho, tum kahin nahi ho....

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«Reply #1 on: August 10, 2012, 03:17:49 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 10, 2012, 04:06:26 PM »
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bhut khoob hriday ji  bahut hi sundar rachna............
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«Reply #3 on: August 10, 2012, 04:53:42 PM »
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Bahut khoob Hriday jee
aap itni jaldi likh dete hai...mere liye mushkil ho jaata hai..sahi shabdo ka chunaao karna..repeatition mujhe accha nahee lagta..
matlab..bahut badhiya likha hai aapne.
wah wah wah
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«Reply #4 on: August 11, 2012, 01:23:02 AM »
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bahut umda, dhero badhai
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«Reply #5 on: August 12, 2012, 09:28:04 AM »
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bahut bahut hee khoob mubarak ho
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«Reply #6 on: August 13, 2012, 02:53:34 PM »
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thanks a lot Shireen ji...!!!

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«Reply #7 on: August 14, 2012, 01:10:46 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Soudagar ji....!!!

bhut khoob hriday ji  bahut hi sundar rachna............
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«Reply #8 on: August 14, 2012, 01:14:54 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Mukesh ji... !!!

Bahut khoob Hriday jee
aap itni jaldi likh dete hai...mere liye mushkil ho jaata hai..sahi shabdo ka chunaao karna..repeatition mujhe accha nahee lagta..
matlab..bahut badhiya likha hai aapne.
wah wah wah
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«Reply #9 on: August 16, 2012, 12:48:53 PM »
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bahut abhut shukriyaa Nandbahu ji...!!!

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«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2012, 12:49:57 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji....!!!

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«Reply #12 on: August 21, 2012, 07:04:29 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Bansi ji....!!!

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