Tumhar baghair chain ata nahi

by saif_Soz on January 25, 2010, 06:03:01 PM
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Tere bin ek pal sukun aata nahi
yaad ata hai tu, kuch yaad ata nahi

Mere lamhon mein ho shamil yun
ek tere siva kuch samaj ata nahi

Hasrate deedar mein aankhe bedar hain
Chain aat nahi aur dum bhi jata nahi
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«Reply #1 on: January 25, 2010, 06:16:49 PM »
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Wah Saif sahab kamaal ka kalaam hai. Teen sher mein hi bahut kuchh keh diya. Nice creation.
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saif_Soz
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«Reply #2 on: January 25, 2010, 06:23:35 PM »
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zahe nasheen! shukriya Ryaz sahab! I am glad you liked it.
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #3 on: January 25, 2010, 11:46:18 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Saif ji.very touching n lovely creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 26, 2010, 09:56:37 AM »
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to good.......
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saif_Soz
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«Reply #5 on: January 26, 2010, 07:04:51 PM »
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himmat afzai ka shukriya
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«Reply #6 on: January 26, 2010, 07:22:14 PM »
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Wah saifji..Gagar mein Sagar bhar diya... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Arz kiya hai....

Gham-ae-dil bahal jaye to achchha hai,
Tumhe ek vasl mil jaye to achchha hai,
Dua meri khuda se fakat itni si hai,
Agar isme asar aaye  to achchha hai.
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«Reply #7 on: January 26, 2010, 08:29:29 PM »
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lovely lines Pandey ji.aapne bhi bahut khoob likha. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: January 26, 2010, 08:35:46 PM »
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Wah Panday ji....bahut khoob

Na thi umeed jiski woh aaj hogaya
Yun tadapna dil ki faryad hogaya

Chuke dekhun yeah koi quaab to nahi
Yaaqin nahi ata tera deedar hogaya
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«Reply #9 on: January 26, 2010, 08:51:22 PM »
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Bahut khoob Saif ji.lovely lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: January 28, 2010, 02:29:47 PM »
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Bahut Khub Saif JI
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