Tumhari mhbt...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on July 28, 2011, 07:15:14 PM
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Koi bhi shakhs muqammal nhi hota,
kisiki mhbt use poora banati hai,

merre hatho mein basi adhuri lakiro ko,
tumhari chahat poora banati hai,

kabhi thak jati hu bhag daud bhari zindgi mein,
tou tumhari muskaan mujhe chalna sikhati hai,

adhura hai nasib merra tumhare sath k bina,
tumhari kami ka ehsas mujhe har khushi karwati hai,

merra aaina mujhse khafa sa rehta hai,
ankhe bhi bus tumhari hi tasvir dikhati hai,

tumhara khayal na ho tou din bhi viran lagta hai,
tumhare ehsas mein tou merri raat bhi jagmagati hai,

tum bin har arzu har ehsas adhura lagta hai mujhe,
tumhare sath har rut rangeen nazar aati hai,

jine k liye bhale sanso ki zarurat hoti hai,
per merre liye tou tumhari har ada zindgi ban jati hai,

merre dil mein merri har ek sans mein sirrf tum ho,
ye baat merri har dhdkan dohrati hai,

ye sach hai ki koi shakhs muqammal nhi hota..
per merre ajnabi mujhe tumhari mhbt poora banati hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: July 29, 2011, 03:00:30 AM »
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Very Nice BBL JI Khyaal Bahut Aache hain.
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«Reply #2 on: July 29, 2011, 03:30:19 AM »
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hmm aapki post achi hai--
ek sawaal hai
ye mohabbt kya kisi ek khas saks ke lie hai sirf-!!?
kya jiske sang jindgi bitani h uske lie hi hai ye mohabbt!!?

humara manna to kuch alag tha --aaj badal gayi soch Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: July 29, 2011, 04:18:42 AM »
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mahobbat tumse karke aaj hum zindagi k maane jaan gaye
hum kya hain tumhare bina ye kuch din me hi pehchaan gaye...!!1

mastam mast poem geet.......ehsason ko shabd de diye hain tumne......
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«Reply #4 on: July 29, 2011, 10:21:31 AM »
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Koi bhi shakhs muqammal nhi hota,
kisiki mhbt use poora banati hai,

merre hatho mein basi adhuri lakiro ko,
tumhari chahat poora banati hai,

kabhi thak jati hu bhag daud bhari zindgi mein,
tou tumhari muskaan mujhe chalna sikhati hai,

adhura hai nasib merra tumhare sath k bina,
tumhari kami ka ehsas mujhe har khushi karwati hai,

merra aaina mujhse khafa sa rehta hai,
ankhe bhi bus tumhari hi tasvir dikhati hai,

tumhara khayal na ho tou din bhi viran lagta hai,
tumhare ehsas mein tou merri raat bhi jagmagati hai,

tum bin har arzu har ehsas adhura lagta hai mujhe,
tumhare sath har rut rangeen nazar aati hai,

jine k liye bhale sanso ki zarurat hoti hai,
per merre liye tou tumhari har ada zindgi ban jati hai,

merre dil mein merri har ek sans mein sirrf tum ho,
ye baat merri har dhdkan dohrati hai,

ye sach hai ki koi shakhs muqammal nhi hota..
per merre ajnabi mujhe tumhari mhbt poora banati hai.........

Bahut Khoob Ji
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«Reply #5 on: July 31, 2011, 04:41:16 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaah Kya Baat hai Geet Ji.. Waqai Mohabbat Ke Bina Insaan Adhoora Hota hai... Lajawab.. Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause




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«Reply #6 on: July 31, 2011, 07:26:50 PM »
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Very Nice BBL JI Khyaal Bahut Aache hain.

bahut shukriya sanjeev ji..
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«Reply #7 on: July 31, 2011, 07:29:12 PM »
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hmm aapki post achi hai--
ek sawaal hai
ye mohabbt kya kisi ek khas saks ke lie hai sirf-!!?
kya jiske sang jindgi bitani h uske lie hi hai ye mohabbt!!?

humara manna to kuch alag tha --aaj badal gayi soch Usual Smile

Ji haan sarfira ji ye mhbt bus ek hi shakhs k liye hi hai jiske sang apni zindgi bitane ka khuab dekha hai maine...mujhe behad khushi hai ki merri is rachna se apki soch mein tabdiliya aayi..bahut shukriya ji..
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«Reply #8 on: July 31, 2011, 07:30:10 PM »
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mahobbat tumse karke aaj hum zindagi k maane jaan gaye
hum kya hain tumhare bina ye kuch din me hi pehchaan gaye...!!1

mastam mast poem geet.......ehsason ko shabd de diye hain tumne......

Bahut khoob kahi bahut shukriya kasak ji..
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«Reply #9 on: July 31, 2011, 07:30:36 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Ji

shukriya khwaish ji..
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«Reply #10 on: July 31, 2011, 07:31:18 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaah Kya Baat hai Geet Ji.. Waqai Mohabbat Ke Bina Insaan Adhoora Hota hai... Lajawab.. Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause




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Bahut sach kaha mann ji bahut shukriya ji..
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«Reply #11 on: July 31, 2011, 07:33:35 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Itni khubsurat ghazal ke liye..
aapko bahut bahut mubarak..

Har baar wo ek naye andaz me aati hai.. Usual Smile
Shayari uski yoindia ko lajawab banati hai.. Usual Smile

bahut khoob.. yu hi likhte rahiye..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: July 31, 2011, 07:34:58 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Itni khubsurat ghazal ke liye..
aapko bahut bahut mubarak..

Har baar wo ek naye andaz me aati hai.. Usual Smile
Shayari uski yoindia ko lajawab banati hai.. Usual Smile

bahut khoob.. yu hi likhte rahiye..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Bahut khubsurat andaz mein tarif k liye apka tahe dil se shukriya mhmd ji...
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«Reply #13 on: July 31, 2011, 07:39:33 PM »
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Ek gustakhi karne jaa raha hu.. bbl ji..
agar kuchh galat puchha ho to plz maaf kar dijiyega..

aapne jul 2009 me join kiya aur aapko yoindia ke taraf se aug 09 me hi award mila..
kiya apna ye experience hamare sath share karengi.. plz
aur haan.. apne asli naam ke sath..
hum bhi to jane ki aakhir hamare bich itni umda shayar ka naam kya hai,,.

its a cute request plz..
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«Reply #14 on: July 31, 2011, 07:50:05 PM »
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Ek gustakhi karne jaa raha hu.. bbl ji..
agar kuchh galat puchha ho to plz maaf kar dijiyega..

aapne jul 2009 me join kiya aur aapko yoindia ke taraf se aug 09 me hi award mila..
kiya apna ye experience hamare sath share karengi.. plz
aur haan.. apne asli naam ke sath..
hum bhi to jane ki aakhir hamare bich itni umda shayar ka naam kya hai,,.

its a cute request plz..


Merra asli naam GEETANJALI hai aur mujhe behad khushi hui ki apne mujhse ye sawal kiya mhmd ji,main bus itna hi kahungi ki yoindia per merra experience behad khubsurat raha hai aur yahan merri likhi har shayari,ghazal,nazm ko bahut acha response milta hai merre sathi members bahut sath dete hai merra jo har baar mujhe kuch likhne k hausal deta hai yoindia merri zindgi ka khubsurat hissa hai aur inshaallah hamesha rahega bhi...yahan bahut se umda shayar hai jinse kaafi kuch sikhne ko bhi mila mujhe...bus itna h kahungi yoindia mein waqai nayab shayar/shayara hai aur unki kadar bhi bahut ki jati hai yahan...yoindia k har member ka admin ka main tahe dil se shukriya ada karti hu...
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