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Suno Baad e saba bhi ithlaati hai
Jab tumhari yaad mujhko aati hai
Ik sargoshi si mere kaano mai
Aake mujhko bhut sataati hai
Dil ka haal ajab sa hota hai jab
Khamoshi mujhme gungunati hai
Tere pairahan ki mehkti khushbu
Mere hosh o hawaas udaati hai
Ba khuda kuch yaad nhi rhta phir
jab tu chilman se muskuraati hai
Shaakh e gul mai lachak kahan aisi
Kamar jistarhan teri balkhaati hai
Mout ko chaahne lagta hu.n bhut
Banke tu jab bhi meri qaza aati hai |
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«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2009, 03:33:57 PM » |
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2009, 03:50:39 PM » |
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WAH AAINA JI WAH... KYA BAAT HAI ... WAH
JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2009, 04:09:14 PM » |
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Suno Baad e saba bhi ithlaati hai
Jab tumhari yaad mujhko aati hai
Ik sargoshi si mere kaano mai
Aake mujhko bhut sataati hai
Dil ka haal ajab sa hota hai jab
Khamoshi mujhme gungunati hai
Tere pairahan ki mehkti khushbu
Mere hosh o hawaas udaati hai
Ba khuda kuch yaad nhi rhta phir
jab tu chilman se muskuraati hai
Shaakh e gul mai lachak kahan aisi
Kamar jistarhan teri balkhaati hai
Mout ko chaahne lagta hu.n bhut
Banke tu jab bhi meri qaza aati hai Bohot hi Khoob Aslam Ji..humesha ki tarah...lajawab  |
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«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2009, 04:23:51 PM » |
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bahut hi aacha likha hai aapnae..bahut gehrae hai aapki baaton main....
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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2009, 02:32:33 AM » |
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huh? Kya baat hai Aslam ji.. SubaanAllah bahoot Khoob Likha hai
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«Reply #6 on: August 17, 2009, 02:51:31 AM » |
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bahut khoob aaina ji....
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«Reply #7 on: August 17, 2009, 02:56:05 AM » |
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wow too good aaina!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 17, 2009, 11:26:49 PM » |
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«Reply #9 on: August 17, 2009, 11:27:46 PM » |
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WAH AAINA JI WAH... KYA BAAT HAI ... WAH
JASBIR SINGH
bhut shukriya jasbir sahab youn hi hosla badhaate rahiye |
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«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2009, 11:29:32 PM » |
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bahut hi aacha likha hai aapnae..bahut gehrae hai aapki baaton main....
bhut shukriya zarra nawaazi hai aapki komalpreet ji, aapne ehsaas ko mehsoos kya thnxx so much |
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«Reply #11 on: August 17, 2009, 11:30:30 PM » |
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huh? Kya baat hai Aslam ji.. SubaanAllah bahoot Khoob Likha hai
thnxxx alot sophi ke aapko itni pasnd aayi |
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«Reply #12 on: August 17, 2009, 11:31:34 PM » |
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bahut khoob aaina ji....
thnxxx so much brokenbyluv |
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«Reply #13 on: August 17, 2009, 11:32:32 PM » |
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wow too good aaina!!!!
shukriya pooja ji |
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«Reply #14 on: August 17, 2009, 11:33:23 PM » |
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Bohot hi Khoob Aslam Ji..humesha ki tarah...lajawab thnxxx so much talat is hosla afzaaii ka........... |
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