Tumhe chahe hum kis tarah

by Saba_Saba on December 26, 2005, 07:55:31 PM
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Tumhe chahe hum kis tarah
Phool aur bhanware ki tarah
Hawa aur khushbu ki tarah
dharti aur ambar ki tarah
Ya shama aur parwane ki tarah
ke teri aag me jale bhi to hanste hanste
Jaise mit.ta hai andhera roshni ki tarah
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«Reply #1 on: December 27, 2005, 10:03:36 AM »
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wow very nice saba
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«Reply #2 on: December 27, 2005, 10:05:01 AM »
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Buaht acha likha hai tum ne Saba...!! LOVely!!
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«Reply #3 on: December 28, 2005, 09:48:16 AM »
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Thanxxxxxxx Kapoor Ji & Neha


hume un se mohabbat hai
bhala kaise kahe un se
ke woh naraz ho jaate hai
be wajah hi hum se
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«Reply #4 on: December 28, 2005, 12:17:29 PM »
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unka  kehna hai  ke  hum unhe tadpaate hain,
bechaini humne di ilzaam sir lagatey hain,
unse puchhey koi ishq mein kisko karar aaya hai,
har ashiq-e-dil ko bekarar paya hai,
paas dibar ho to khushiyon ki mehfil hai,
door rehna pade unse to gum ka saaya hai,
ik din nahi jaata jab sanam se na hum milte hai
aaj fir bhi tadpaane ka ilzaam sir yeh aaya hai....
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«Reply #5 on: December 28, 2005, 03:31:15 PM »
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very  nice  Saba..........Kapoor  Bhai........

hum mit jaayenge  uski mohabbat  mein mitne do
waqt kam hai mere pass mujhe abhi uska naam likhne do
na karenge  gila hum apni  kismat  per kabhi  
bus ek  baar mujhe aur uski  tasveer  seena lagaye rakhne do.....
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«Reply #6 on: December 29, 2005, 03:46:06 AM »
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wow truely good and beautiful that u all have written...saba ji, gesu kapoor ji aur waheed ji
too good..much appreciated

hume paane ki hai duaa karte hain
par hai kyon mitne ki baat karte hain
jab hum maujood hai aapke paas
to kaise hai waqt pe nikhal gayi aas
kehte hain hum hai kismat aapki
to kaise hain bighad sakti, kismat aapki

bighad---spoils or worsens or gets bad


tried to reply....apologies if there is anything wrongly said by me...

anitha....
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«Reply #7 on: December 29, 2005, 08:14:01 AM »
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nice anitha ji and waheej ji bahut hi accha likhaa aap dono ne
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«Reply #8 on: December 29, 2005, 11:53:04 AM »
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very nice anitha,waheed bhai,gesu ji and saba ji bahut accha likha aap logon ne......... tongue3

Mujh Ko Samjhna hai to mujh mai Khoo jaoo
Maii aam Qissa nahi jo Youn Baiyaan ho jaon ........... Puzzled !
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«Reply #9 on: December 30, 2005, 07:19:16 AM »
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kaun samjha hai kisi ko yahaan,
Hu bhi yeh bann jaayenge pata tha kahaan,
kaisi uljhan mein zindagi ne hamein daala hai,,
apna hi saaya begaana nazar aata hai...
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«Reply #10 on: December 30, 2005, 07:27:17 AM »
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sorry woh HUM  hai typing mistake

Kaun samajh paaya hai kisi ko yahan,
Hum bhi yeh bann jaayenge pata tha kahaan,
Kaisi uljhan mein zindagi ne hamein daala hai,
Apna hi saaya begaana nazar aata hai...

GESU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: December 31, 2005, 09:12:40 PM »
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Very Nice Gesu Kapoor ji.... Anitha.... Badnam shayar ... Waheed

sab ne bohat achha likha

Is zindagi ki kab kis ko samajh aayi hai
Jaha dekho phaili huyi tanhayi hai
Kal tak they jo dil ke qareeb SABA
aaj unhi ke chehre par na koi shansayi hai
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«Reply #12 on: January 02, 2006, 09:38:23 AM »
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wowwwwwwwwww its gr8 saba!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #13 on: January 02, 2006, 12:01:24 PM »
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Thanxxxxxxx Kapoor Ji & Neha


hume un se mohabbat hai
bhala kaise kahe un se
ke woh naraz ho jaate hai
be wajah hi hum se


very nice saba

wo naraz hote rahe
hum unhe manate rahe
unhi ruthne manane mai
mohabbat ho gaye kis tarah
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«Reply #14 on: January 02, 2006, 01:32:24 PM »
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Thanxxxxxxx Kapoor Ji & Neha


hume un se mohabbat hai
bhala kaise kahe un se
ke woh naraz ho jaate hai
be wajah hi hum se


very nice saba

wo naraz hote rahe
hum unhe manate rahe
unhi ruthne manane mai
mohabbat ho gaye kis tarah


Hello Vikas .... Hw r u?? .... sorry i ddnt informed u abt......
well

This one is very cool .... as always .... tongue3

Mohabbat chupke se aajati hai dil me
Na jaane kab lut jata hai dil pal me
Tumhe maloom ho to hume bhi batana
Kab se bechain hai hum isi uljhan me
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