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«Reply #105 on: February 06, 2006, 05:00:16 AM » |
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thnks saba and vikas ji
pyar mein aise hum kho gaye
isse duniya se beghane hogaye
isse aag mein jalkar rakh hogaye
Thats nice Anjani Jale bhi is tarah ke raakh na huye Ek chingari pyar ki har pal sulagti rahi Kabhi tand hawa ke jhakkar me Meri wafa shole ban kar jhulasti rahi thanks anjani and very nice SABA shabnam ki jalan abhi gai nahi chandni bhi hume jala gai shole dhandak phunchate rahe sharab bhi ab kisi kaam ki na rahi Thanks Vikas Sharab se aag bujhti nahi badhti hai Jaise tujhe bhoolu to yaad badhti hai Sukoon milega nahi ab mujhe kabhi Ke tera pyar ki chingari jo mujh me jalti hai Nice one Saba Ishq ki aag ko chingari ka naam na do tum meri maut ko neend ka naam na do jisko zamana keta hai sharaab har paimane mai peeta hun apne aansuon ko |
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«Reply #106 on: February 07, 2006, 07:49:12 PM » |
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thnks saba and vikas ji
pyar mein aise hum kho gaye
isse duniya se beghane hogaye
isse aag mein jalkar rakh hogaye
Thats nice Anjani Jale bhi is tarah ke raakh na huye Ek chingari pyar ki har pal sulagti rahi Kabhi tand hawa ke jhakkar me Meri wafa shole ban kar jhulasti rahi thanks anjani and very nice SABA shabnam ki jalan abhi gai nahi chandni bhi hume jala gai shole dhandak phunchate rahe sharab bhi ab kisi kaam ki na rahi Thanks Vikas Sharab se aag bujhti nahi badhti hai Jaise tujhe bhoolu to yaad badhti hai Sukoon milega nahi ab mujhe kabhi Ke tera pyar ki chingari jo mujh me jalti hai Nice one Saba Ishq ki aag ko chingari ka naam na do tum meri maut ko neend ka naam na do jisko zamana keta hai sharaab har paimane mai peeta hun apne aansuon ko Bohat KhuuB.... Vikas Aankho ki nami ko dil me utar liya Hum ne tere firaq me kya kya dildar kiya Dava tha kiya tumne kabhi duur na jaaoge ... Fir kyu tere intezar me taaro ko shumar kiya |
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«Reply #107 on: February 07, 2006, 11:34:20 PM » |
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thnks saba and vikas ji
pyar mein aise hum kho gaye
isse duniya se beghane hogaye
isse aag mein jalkar rakh hogaye
Thats nice Anjani Jale bhi is tarah ke raakh na huye Ek chingari pyar ki har pal sulagti rahi Kabhi tand hawa ke jhakkar me Meri wafa shole ban kar jhulasti rahi thanks anjani and very nice SABA shabnam ki jalan abhi gai nahi chandni bhi hume jala gai shole dhandak phunchate rahe sharab bhi ab kisi kaam ki na rahi Thanks Vikas Sharab se aag bujhti nahi badhti hai Jaise tujhe bhoolu to yaad badhti hai Sukoon milega nahi ab mujhe kabhi Ke tera pyar ki chingari jo mujh me jalti hai Nice one Saba Ishq ki aag ko chingari ka naam na do tum meri maut ko neend ka naam na do jisko zamana keta hai sharaab har paimane mai peeta hun apne aansuon ko Bohat KhuuB.... Vikas Aankho ki nami ko dil me utar liya Hum ne tere firaq me kya kya dildar kiya Dava tha kiya tumne kabhi duur na jaaoge ... Fir kyu tere intezar me taaro ko shumar kiya nice vikas and sabaji dil ki khamoshi chupa lia uska dard apna banalia pyar usse kar lia hasil usse na kia!!! |
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vikas2210
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«Reply #108 on: February 08, 2006, 04:06:05 AM » |
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[quote: anjani_si wrote]
nice vikas and sabaji
dil ki khamoshi chupa lia
uska dard apna banalia
pyar usse kar lia
hasil usse na kia!!![/quote]
Thanks Anjani and very nicely written
Chupaye baithe hai tera payar
aankho mai chupaye hai tera chehra
nazar na lag jaye zamane ki isilye
tumko nazro mai chupaye baithe hai
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«Reply #109 on: February 08, 2006, 04:08:53 AM » |
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Saba :
Bohat KhuuB.... Vikas
Aankho ki nami ko dil me utar liya
Hum ne tere firaq me kya kya dildar kiya
Dava tha kiya tumne kabhi duur na jaaoge ...
Fir kyu tere intezar me taaro ko shumar kiya
[/b] wooooww Saba maza aagaya aapko padh ke chand ki chandni mai taaron ke chawan mai in mast fizaoon mai baithe hai tere intezaar mai...... |
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«Reply #110 on: February 08, 2006, 06:28:04 PM » |
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Bohat KhuuB.... Vikas
Aankho ki nami ko dil me utar liya
Hum ne tere firaq me kya kya dildar kiya
Dava tha kiya tumne kabhi duur na jaaoge ...
Fir kyu tere intezar me taaro ko shumar kiya
wooooww Saba maza aagaya aapko padh ke chand ki chandni mai taaron ke chawan mai in mast fizaoon mai baithe hai tere intezaar mai...... Thanks Vikas..... reply me dam hai :oops: Aye dil e naada na kar us ka intezar Jo tere dil me hai usey na kar aashkaar Zamana dega tujh ko ilzaam sambhal ja Na kar us ke saamne yu jazbo ka izhaar :oops: |
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«Reply #111 on: February 09, 2006, 05:40:28 AM » |
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Bohat KhuuB.... Vikas
Aankho ki nami ko dil me utar liya
Hum ne tere firaq me kya kya dildar kiya
Dava tha kiya tumne kabhi duur na jaaoge ...
Fir kyu tere intezar me taaro ko shumar kiya
wooooww Saba maza aagaya aapko padh ke chand ki chandni mai taaron ke chawan mai in mast fizaoon mai baithe hai tere intezaar mai...... Thanks Vikas..... reply me dam hai :oops: Aye dil e naada na kar us ka intezar Jo tere dil me hai usey na kar aashkaar Zamana dega tujh ko ilzaam sambhal ja Na kar us ke saamne yu jazbo ka izhaar :oops: aba great reply hum to bas ab kaya kahen........ :wink: :wink: Dil ke jazabaat ab chupa nahi sakte tere bina ab hum reh nahi sakte bahut hui duri ab to sanam Aa jaao ab hum aur intezaar kar nahi sakte.. :oops: :oops: |
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«Reply #112 on: February 09, 2006, 06:37:37 PM » |
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Hi, Im Mehwish and Im brand new to this site. in fact i just signed up today. You are all very experienced poets in your own rights....maybe i can learn too........shayari ho magar dil ki gheyrai se ho
janay kab shaam dhalay
subah tak kaun jalay
daur par daur chalay
aao lag jao galay
aao lag jao galay
thamo seenay ki jalan..........
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«Reply #113 on: February 09, 2006, 07:35:02 PM » |
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Bohat KhuuB.... Vikas
Aankho ki nami ko dil me utar liya
Hum ne tere firaq me kya kya dildar kiya
Dava tha kiya tumne kabhi duur na jaaoge ...
Fir kyu tere intezar me taaro ko shumar kiya
wooooww Saba maza aagaya aapko padh ke chand ki chandni mai taaron ke chawan mai in mast fizaoon mai baithe hai tere intezaar mai...... Thanks Vikas..... reply me dam hai :oops: Aye dil e naada na kar us ka intezar Jo tere dil me hai usey na kar aashkaar Zamana dega tujh ko ilzaam sambhal ja Na kar us ke saamne yu jazbo ka izhaar :oops: aba great reply hum to bas ab kaya kahen........ :wink: :wink: Dil ke jazabaat ab chupa nahi sakte tere bina ab hum reh nahi sakte bahut hui duri ab to sanam Aa jaao ab hum aur intezaar kar nahi sakte.. :oops: :oops: shhhhhh kuchh na kaho :oops: :oops: Na jaane kyu yeh dil is kadar mutmain hai Jaise koi mil gaya ho khazana is ko Zeest ko sanwara us ki yaado se Us se mil kar yeh sab batana hai usko Kitne kathin safar me hai zindagi meri Na khone ka hausla, na paana usko Abhi to zindagi har lamha us naam pe royegi Itna aasa nahi yu dil se bhulana usko..nm |
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«Reply #114 on: February 09, 2006, 07:37:58 PM » |
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Hi, Im Mehwish and Im brand new to this site. in fact i just signed up today. You are all very experienced poets in your own rights....maybe i can learn too........shayari ho magar dil ki gheyrai se ho
janay kab shaam dhalay
subah tak kaun jalay
daur par daur chalay
aao lag jao galay
aao lag jao galay
thamo seenay ki jalan.......... Very Nice Mehwish Welcome to Yoindia keep writing  |
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«Reply #115 on: February 09, 2006, 08:29:27 PM » |
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tujhse pyar karte hain...tumhe kahain kaise
tera bin raat nahi khat thi, tumhe kehain kaise
tum bin jeena mushkil hai,,,ye raaz chupayen kaise
tumse pyar karte hain....ye baat baateyein kaise!!!
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«Reply #116 on: February 10, 2006, 03:44:51 AM » |
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Bohat KhuuB.... Vikas
Aankho ki nami ko dil me utar liya
Hum ne tere firaq me kya kya dildar kiya
Dava tha kiya tumne kabhi duur na jaaoge ...
Fir kyu tere intezar me taaro ko shumar kiya
wooooww Saba maza aagaya aapko padh ke chand ki chandni mai taaron ke chawan mai in mast fizaoon mai baithe hai tere intezaar mai...... Thanks Vikas..... reply me dam hai :oops: Aye dil e naada na kar us ka intezar Jo tere dil me hai usey na kar aashkaar Zamana dega tujh ko ilzaam sambhal ja Na kar us ke saamne yu jazbo ka izhaar :oops: aba great reply hum to bas ab kaya kahen........ :wink: :wink: Dil ke jazabaat ab chupa nahi sakte tere bina ab hum reh nahi sakte bahut hui duri ab to sanam Aa jaao ab hum aur intezaar kar nahi sakte.. :oops: :oops: shhhhhh kuchh na kaho :oops: :oops: Na jaane kyu yeh dil is kadar mutmain hai Jaise koi mil gaya ho khazana is ko Zeest ko sanwara us ki yaado se Us se mil kar yeh sab batana hai usko Kitne kathin safar me hai zindagi meri Na khone ka hausla, na paana usko Abhi to zindagi har lamha us naam pe royegi Itna aasa nahi yu dil se bhulana usko..nm aba kyon hai itna dard Nahi bhulti woh pehli mulakaat chahe kitne bhi hansi pal uske baad pehla payar aur uski bewafai woh bahar woh intezaar saare jeewan ki ruswai |
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«Reply #117 on: February 10, 2006, 03:48:02 AM » |
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Mehwish welcome to YOINDIA
and nice thoughts.......
keep writing dear[/quote]
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«Reply #118 on: February 10, 2006, 03:50:00 AM » |
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tujhse pyar karte hain...tumhe kahain kaise
tera bin raat nahi khat thi, tumhe kehain kaise
tum bin jeena mushkil hai,,,ye raaz chupayen kaise
tumse pyar karte hain....ye baat baateyein kaise!!! very nice anjani_si. by the way what is your goooood name it may help in addressing you correctly. na kaho kuch labo se aankhe keh deti hai sab labon pe jo bhi aaye baat zikar uska aankhe kar deti hai |
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«Reply #119 on: February 10, 2006, 05:13:12 AM » |
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tujhse pyar karte hain...tumhe kahain kaise
tera bin raat nahi khat thi, tumhe kehain kaise
tum bin jeena mushkil hai,,,ye raaz chupayen kaise
tumse pyar karte hain....ye baat baateyein kaise!!! very nice anjani_si. by the way what is your goooood name it may help in addressing you correctly. na kaho kuch labo se aankhe keh deti hai sab labon pe jo bhi aaye baat zikar uska aankhe kar deti hai Zikar ki fikar to aankhien kar leti hai Jeene sa safar saansein taye kar leti hai Khusnasibion se bhara gulaab ho jaati hai zindagi Jabb sakhi balkhati aadaon se char baatein kar leti hai!!!! |
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