Tumhe chahe hum kis tarah

by Saba_Saba on December 26, 2005, 07:55:31 PM
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«Reply #60 on: January 21, 2006, 09:22:52 AM »
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Vikas ... kya kahu aap ko ...  :oops:

Yeh mere chaaro taraf kis liye ujala hai
Tera khayal hai ya din nikalne wala hai


Woooow very nice and well said.

khayalo mai meri aane wali
har pal mere sanso mai basne wali
jidhar bhi dekho tu hi tu hai
meri zindgi ki akhiri zustuju tu hai


Na lamho ka ehsaas raha
Na waado ka paas raha
Teri justuju me aise uljhe
Na koi dost ab raas raha


gudddy gudddy Saba

Har ek ka intezar nahi jarte
har kisi ke liye hum udaas nahi hote
har shaks se dil-e-ikrar nahi karte
har koi aapke tarh khaas nahi hote..


Sabaji nd vikas ji vryyy nice!!!!

Haar koi khaas nahi hota
Udki koi adha khaas hoti hai
Haar koi apna nahi hota
Apne dil mein apna maan leta hai!!!!


thanks and a nice one Anjani

zindgi mai aate ha bahut log
saath nibhata ha koi koi
nazre dekhti hai bahuton ko
nazaro mai basta hai koi koi


Thanks Anjani ji ...

Kuchh to tha us me khas mere dil me bas gaya
kaise yeh dil kisi anjane par khul kar baras gaya


Vikas Ji..... bilkul baja farmaya

Andaz uska sab se juda hota hai
woh jo ek shakhs khas hota hai
Dil me basta hai fir nikalta nahi
Jaane woh kaisa dard hota hai


nice wording Saba and great style.

Bijli ki chingari se ,
wo roshan ghar ko karte hain
pyaar mein jo jalte hain,
woh,pyaar ke naam pe marte hain......
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«Reply #61 on: January 22, 2006, 09:47:45 AM »
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Hey Vikas u write superb

Pyar me jo jalte hai
woh aag bujha nahi paate
Is sheher ke baadal bhi teri tarah hai
Yeh aaga lagate bujhane nahi aate
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«Reply #62 on: January 22, 2006, 04:33:04 PM »
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Hey Vikas you write superb

Pyar me jo jalte hai
woh aag bujha nahi paate
Is sheher ke baadal bhi teri tarah hai
Yeh aaga lagate bujhane nahi aate


Saba tumne mujhe lajawab kar diya. Great.

Phir bhi kishish kar ta hun........


Payar ki aag mai jalne ko man karta hai
aaj tujhse milne ko man karta hai
badal jo aa gaya to un bhi jal jaunga
ke barish mai tujhse milne ko man karta hai
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«Reply #63 on: January 22, 2006, 04:44:38 PM »
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Baarish mein aaj bheegne ko man karta hai,
khush itni hu aaj, ke usme dil khol ke jhumne ko man karta hai,
pyaar ki aag ko bujhana kaun chata hai,
isme tho jal ke raakh ho jaane ka man karta hai,
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«Reply #64 on: January 22, 2006, 05:57:55 PM »
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Very Nice Gesu Kapoor ji.... Anitha.... Badnam shayar ... Waheed

sab ne bohat achha likha

Is zindagi ki kab kis ko samajh aayi hai
Jaha dekho phaili huyi tanhayi hai
Kal tak they jo dil ke qareeb SABA
aaj unhi ke chehre par na koi shansayi hai
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«Reply #65 on: January 22, 2006, 05:59:54 PM »
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sorry woh HUM  hai typing mistake

Kaun samajh paaya hai kisi ko yahan,
Hum bhi yeh bann jaayenge pata tha kahaan,
Kaisi uljhan mein zindagi ne hamein daala hai,
Apna hi saaya begaana nazar aata hai...

GESU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #66 on: January 22, 2006, 06:18:32 PM »
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saba nd vikas ji-----excellent!!!!mind-blowing

NICE one:)

Akhoin ko tu aik bahana chahiya rona ke lia
Dil ko aik dildar chahiya pyar karne ke lia
Sansoon ko koi dhadkhan chiya samane ke lia
Aur humhe koi chahiye zindagi bethane ke lia
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«Reply #67 on: January 23, 2006, 04:27:41 AM »
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Baarish mein aaj bheegne ko man karta hai,
khush itni hu aaj, ke usme dil khol ke jhumne ko man karta hai,
pyaar ki aag ko bujhana kaun chata hai,
isme tho jal ke raakh ho jaane ka man karta hai,


woooow urs4everasomdev

man kay kaya hai
aankho ke samne hote to
seene se lagane ko chahata hai
aur agar ojhal ho annkho se to
ek baar phir dekhne ko karta hai
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«Reply #68 on: January 23, 2006, 06:00:27 AM »
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Good job Saba and Vikas bahoot hi khoobsoorat likha hai app dono ne!!!
urs4evasomadev kamal ki lines likhi hai apne....

barish ki agan tanhaai ko bara jaati hai
mitti ki khushbu, badan ko dahka jaati hai
sparsh tera, madhosh kiye jaata hai
kaabu mai nahi man, yah ajj kaya huye jaata hai!!!
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«Reply #69 on: January 23, 2006, 09:11:34 AM »
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wah  wah  Saba........Pooja.....Gesu.........Vikas.....   urs....  &  all........
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«Reply #70 on: January 23, 2006, 10:49:42 AM »
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ki gull hai sabne kamaal kar ditta atthey te!!!!!!!!!!!balle balle!!!!!!!!! :D
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«Reply #71 on: January 23, 2006, 03:53:36 PM »
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Hey Vikas you write superb

Pyar me jo jalte hai
woh aag bujha nahi paate
Is sheher ke baadal bhi teri tarah hai
Yeh aaga lagate bujhane nahi aate


Saba tumne mujhe lajawab kar diya. Great.

Phir bhi kishish kar ta hun........


Payar ki aag mai jalne ko man karta hai
aaj tujhse milne ko man karta hai
badal jo aa gaya to un bhi jal jaunga
ke barish mai tujhse milne ko man karta hai


Wah kya baat hai

Sholo.n ko hawa de raha hai mausam
Boonde hai ke baras rahi hai agan
Aise me na jaao mujhe chhor ke
Dil me gunj rahi hai ek anjani sargam
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«Reply #72 on: January 23, 2006, 06:56:26 PM »
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very  nice  Saba...............
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«Reply #73 on: January 24, 2006, 07:41:47 AM »
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thanks waheed pooja and gesu ji.

and pooja ji urs was very good.
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«Reply #74 on: January 24, 2006, 08:01:42 AM »
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tumhe chahe hum kis tarah ........

tumhe mange hum rub se kaise .....

tum huna na juda humse kabhi.........

jaise aalfaz juda ho jate hai labo se......
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