-----/// Tumhe laajawaab kehne do ///----- Hriday

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naa   sambhaalo  mujhe  ab, meri  haalat  kharaab   rehne  do
naa roko  mujhe  ki  mere  haathon  mein  sharaab  rehne  do

dhadkane  bhi  tez  hain, seene  mein  kuch  toofaan   saa hai
naa  hone  do  raat  ki abhi  kuch  pal  aur  aaftaab  rehne do

dil   mein  hai  kuch  baat   magar  main kahun to kahun kaise
mere har sawaal  kaa  tum  khud ko ban ke  jawaab rehne do

nashaa  mohabbat  kaa  asar kar  rahaa  hai ab dheere dheere
jaadoo  iskaa  ab to mere dhadkano  mein  behisaab rehne do

band aankhon  mein  ek chehraa  tumhaaraa  nazar  aataa hai
naa  chhedo  ki khud ko ban ke khoobsurat khwaab rehne do

sochaa hai  ek  geet  likhun   tumhaari  taarif  mein   main  aaj
aankhon  ko saagar aur hothon ko  khiltaa  gulaab  kehne  do

kyaa  karun  taarif  tumhaari,  alfaaz   kahaan  se  laaun  main
husn ki  malikaa  ho tum, tumhe  to  bas laajawaab  kehne do


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«Reply #1 on: June 14, 2013, 09:47:18 PM »
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hayeeeeaallllllllaaaaaaaaaaa.......... kya baat hai bhtttttt mastttt kp......... kidhar gayab rehte ho tum aajkal ...
aate raha karo yaar man nahi lagta.......
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«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2013, 09:54:11 PM »
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naa   sambhaalo  mujhe  ab, meri  haalat  kharaab   rehne  do
naa roko  mujhe  ki  mere  haathon  mein  sharaab  rehne  do

dhadkane  bhi  tez  hain, seene  mein  kuch  toofaan   saa hai
naa  hone  do  raat  ki abhi  kuch  pal  aur  aaftaab  rehne do

dil   mein  hai  kuch  baat   magar  main kahun to kahun kaise
mere har sawaal  kaa  tum  khud ko ban ke  jawaab rehne do

nashaa  mohabbat  kaa  asar kar  rahaa  hai ab dheere dheere
jaadoo  iskaa  ab to mere dhadkano  mein  behisaab rehne do

band aankhon  mein  ek chehraa  tumhaaraa  nazar  aataa hai
naa  chhedo  ki khud ko ban ke khoobsurat khwaab rehne do

sochaa hai  ek  geet  likhun   tumhaari  taarif  mein   main  aaj
aankhon  ko saagar aur hothon ko  khiltaa  gulaab  kehne  do

kyaa  karun  taarif  tumhaari,  alfaaz   kahaan  se  laaun  main
husn ki  malikaa  ho tum, tumhe  to  bas laajawaab  kehne do


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Wah,Wah,Wah Hridayji,
Bahtreeeeeeeeeeeen ghazal kahi hai aapne janaab.Dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #3 on: June 14, 2013, 10:30:17 PM »
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excellent ek rau qubool karen
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«Reply #4 on: June 14, 2013, 10:47:41 PM »
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bahut khoob , Hriday ji.
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«Reply #5 on: June 14, 2013, 11:16:59 PM »
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Bahut Khoob.Nyc1 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 15, 2013, 12:10:02 AM »
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naa   sambhaalo  mujhe  ab, meri  haalat  kharaab   rehne  do
naa roko  mujhe  ki  mere  haathon  mein  sharaab  rehne  do

dhadkane  bhi  tez  hain, seene  mein  kuch  toofaan   saa hai
naa  hone  do  raat  ki abhi  kuch  pal  aur  aaftaab  rehne do

dil   mein  hai  kuch  baat   magar  main kahun to kahun kaise
mere har sawaal  kaa  tum  khud ko ban ke  jawaab rehne do

nashaa  mohabbat  kaa  asar kar  rahaa  hai ab dheere dheere
jaadoo  iskaa  ab to mere dhadkano  mein  behisaab rehne do

band aankhon  mein  ek chehraa  tumhaaraa  nazar  aataa hai
naa  chhedo  ki khud ko ban ke khoobsurat khwaab rehne do

sochaa hai  ek  geet  likhun   tumhaari  taarif  mein   main  aaj
aankhon  ko saagar aur hothon ko  khiltaa  gulaab  kehne  do

kyaa  karun  taarif  tumhaari,  alfaaz   kahaan  se  laaun  main
husn ki  malikaa  ho tum, tumhe  to  bas laajawaab  kehne do


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«Reply #7 on: June 15, 2013, 12:35:21 AM »
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mai RAU ke mamle m bht kanjoos hoon mgr
aaj aapko ek de hi deta agr..

last ke dono aashaaron ka end bhi REHNE DO par khatam krte aap :/

Hriday saahab bht hi gajabb ki khumari pesh ki h aapne
daad daad daad
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khush rhie
muakurate rhie
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«Reply #8 on: June 15, 2013, 01:30:21 AM »
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Bahut khoob Hriday jee

pahle ki tarah rangeen peshkash.
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behad khoobsurat ghazal hriday jee..padh ke bahut achha laga..ehsaas bade hi gahre hain..daad daad dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #10 on: June 15, 2013, 10:38:43 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB JI..!!
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«Reply #11 on: June 15, 2013, 12:10:00 PM »
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naa   sambhaalo  mujhe  ab, meri  haalat  kharaab   rehne  do
naa roko  mujhe  ki  mere  haathon  mein  sharaab  rehne  do

dhadkane  bhi  tez  hain, seene  mein  kuch  toofaan   saa hai
naa  hone  do  raat  ki abhi  kuch  pal  aur  aaftaab  rehne do

dil   mein  hai  kuch  baat   magar  main kahun to kahun kaise
mere har sawaal  kaa  tum  khud ko ban ke  jawaab rehne do

nashaa  mohabbat  kaa  asar kar  rahaa  hai ab dheere dheere
jaadoo  iskaa  ab to mere dhadkano  mein  behisaab rehne do

band aankhon  mein  ek chehraa  tumhaaraa  nazar  aataa hai
naa  chhedo  ki khud ko ban ke khoobsurat khwaab rehne do

sochaa hai  ek  geet  likhun   tumhaari  taarif  mein   main  aaj
aankhon  ko saagar aur hothon ko  khiltaa  gulaab  kehne  do

kyaa  karun  taarif  tumhaari,  alfaaz   kahaan  se  laaun  main
husn ki  malikaa  ho tum, tumhe  to  bas laajawaab  kehne do


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«Reply #12 on: June 15, 2013, 12:23:50 PM »
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bahut khoob

bahut khoob

bahut khoob..

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«Reply #13 on: June 15, 2013, 04:57:35 PM »
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«Reply #14 on: June 16, 2013, 12:21:40 PM »
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waah waah hridayji. bahut hi achche aur khoobsurat khayalon se saji khoobsurat si ghazal par hazaron dili daad qubool kare.
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