-----/// Tumhe thoda yaad kar loon /// ----- Hriday

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aaj tumhaari yaad me leke kaagaz kalam baitha hoon,
socha tumhe yaad kar thoda jee loon, thoda mar loon,

bhulne ki koshish bahut ki hai tumko par na huwa,
to tasveer seene se lagaake thoda pyaar kar loon,

kitaab me rakhe sukhe gulaab ko chhoo ke aaj main,
tumhaari moujudgi ka thoda thoda sa ehsaas kar loon,

baarish ke har boond me tumhaaraa hi to ehsaas hai,
chhooke boondon ko main tumhe aaj mehsoos kar loon,

lagaayaa tha maine tumhe seene se kabhi barson pehle,
aaj tum nahi, takiye ko hi zaraa baahon me bhar loon,

banke haseen khwaab bas jaao meri aankhon me aaj tum,
tumhe khwaab me dekh ke thoda jee loon, thoda mar loon,

jaana, kabse kuch likha nahi hai maine tumhaari yaad me,
aaj tumhe yaad kar ke likhne ki thodi si koshish kar loon...


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«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2012, 03:43:27 AM »
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bahut achhaa nibhaayaa hai Hriday ji dil kee gahraaiyon se daad qubool karen
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«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2012, 06:08:15 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob hridayji.....
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«Reply #3 on: April 11, 2012, 09:00:51 AM »
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waah waah Hriday ji--
dil ki lagi ko ek fir kaagaz pe utaraa hai
thoda jeene marne ki baat nhi
ye to aapke il ka sahaara hai tongue3
bahot hi sweet si poetry kar di aapne
inn lafzon ke aage kya chaand aur kya sitaaraa hai tongue3
ab btaie janaab ki daad dene ka
kaisa ye style humaaraa hai Usual Smile

daad daaad daad
khus rahie
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«Reply #4 on: April 11, 2012, 10:07:21 AM »
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Bhut khoobsurat brother par etna kosis kise bhulane ki ho rahi h.
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«Reply #5 on: April 16, 2012, 05:34:55 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji...!!!

Quote from: sksaini4 on April 11, 2012, 03:43:27 AM
bahut achhaa nibhaayaa hai Hriday ji dil kee gahraaiyon se daad qubool karen
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«Reply #6 on: April 20, 2012, 06:41:02 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Shihab ji...!!!

Quote from: Shihab on April 11, 2012, 04:45:13 AM
bahut bahut khub Hriday ji...

Shad o aabaad rahiye...

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«Reply #7 on: April 20, 2012, 07:52:12 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Dolly ji....!!!

Quote from: dolly on April 11, 2012, 06:08:15 AM
bahut bahut khoob hridayji.....
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«Reply #8 on: April 20, 2012, 07:54:15 PM »
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sabse pehle to main aapka tahe dil se shukriyaa adaa karta hoon jo aapne meri is koshish ko waqt diya aur pasand kiyaaa.... ab rahi baat aapke daad dene ke tarike ki... bahut khoobsurat andaaz hai aapka ... bahut bahut pasand aaya humko....bahut bahut shukriyaa....!!!

Quote from: sarfira on April 11, 2012, 09:00:51 AM
waah waah Hriday ji--
dil ki lagi ko ek fir kaagaz pe utaraa hai
thoda jeene marne ki baat nhi
ye to aapke il ka sahaara hai tongue3
bahot hi sweet si poetry kar di aapne
inn lafzon ke aage kya chaand aur kya sitaaraa hai tongue3
ab btaie janaab ki daad dene ka
kaisa ye style humaaraa hai Usual Smile

daad daaad daad
khus rahie
muskurate rahie
Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: April 20, 2012, 07:54:59 PM »
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thank you soooooooooo much bhai.... koi nahi dost ... bas ek ehsaas hai .... ek soch hai... aur kuch nahi....!!!

Quote from: masoom shahjada on April 11, 2012, 10:07:21 AM
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