Tumse itni hui hai mohabbat

by deepika_divya on January 31, 2009, 08:34:07 AM
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After a long Long time I m writing a poetry.. I dont know U like it or not Coz its seems I forget the technique of writing poetry which I learnt here. still M trying.

tumse itni hui hai mohabbat yaar
ki tumhare katir seh lungi duniya k vaar

Fir jaga di tumne mere man mea aash
chod kar jahan saara ji kare aa jaun tere pass

badne lagi ahi bechaniya madam se
chu kar hawaye bhi kuch keh jaati hai mujhse

beet kyun nahi jaata judai ka yea pal
laut kar aajao kar do mujhe fir se ujjwal
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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2009, 08:39:51 AM »
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acha likha sophi ji......keep it up.
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«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2009, 12:14:31 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on January 31, 2009, 08:34:07 AM
After a long Long time I m writing a poetry.. I dont know U like it or not Coz its seems I forget the technique of writing poetry which I learnt here. still M trying.

tumse itni hui hai mohabbat yaar
ki tumhare katir seh lungi duniya k vaar

Fir jaga di tumne mere man mea aash
chod kar jahan saara ji kare aa jaun tere pass

badne lagi ahi bechaniya madam se
chu kar hawaye bhi kuch keh jaati hai mujhse

beet kyun nahi jaata judai ka yea pal
laut kar aajao kar do mujhe fir se ujjwal









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Bahut pyara likha hai Sophi dear,

& dear ek baat kehna chahungi ki likhne ki koi technique nahi hoti, likhna ek Ibadatt hai jo kabhi marrti nahi hai,

& don't think ki tumne aacha nhi likha,

agar meri baatein aachi na lage to sorry.

Shally
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«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2009, 12:24:16 PM »
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Sophi, aapne bahut bahut accha likha hai..and Shally ne kaha likhne ke liye koyi Technique se jyada emotionals dil mein honi chahiye. aur jo dil keh raha hai usko utarna hai kalam mein ... bas.. Over all bahut umda likha hai  Clapping Smiley   
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«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2009, 01:06:03 PM »
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Nice One Sophi Ji,.
Likhte Rahoge To Seekhna Aasaan Rahega,.
Hum Sab Bhi Seekh Rahein Hain,.
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«Reply #5 on: January 31, 2009, 02:56:57 PM »
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Wah wah sophi bohat khoob likha hai dear... Applause
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«Reply #6 on: February 02, 2009, 06:07:01 AM »
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Thank u so much shally , roja , honey janasheen, & sameer, thank u so much
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«Reply #7 on: February 02, 2009, 07:21:31 AM »
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sophi good one.

Likh toh koibhi sakta hain, magar dill main ek yaad chahiye.
har pankti achhi ho jati bas ek vishvaas chahiye.

toh keep writing here magar vishvas aur yaad ke saath.
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«Reply #8 on: February 02, 2009, 12:09:35 PM »
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Thanks Buddy.
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«Reply #9 on: February 03, 2009, 07:51:15 AM »
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Tim timate taareo ki tarah
aksar tum kuch keh jaate ho

jabse tum mere Dil mein samaye
khwabo mein aksaar tum hi aaye ho

apni natkat shaitaniyon se
mere dil k aur kareeb aaye ho

ched kar mere man ka sangeet
phir kyun Fizao mea kho jaate ho
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«Reply #10 on: May 14, 2009, 12:30:05 AM »
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 Applause Clapping Smiley bahut khub sophi ji, ek bat aur aapne mujhe kal msg kiya tha uska ans main aapse ol bat kar k deana chahunga agar aap izazat do to aur main pankaj ka frnd hu hum humesh santh rehte hai aur maine yoindia abhi join kiya hai ise liye aapko msg nahi kar sakta hu aur main aapko bahut pahele se janta hu pankaj batata hai aapk bare me ok i am sorry agar aapko bura laga to par main aapse 2 mint ol bat karna chahunga ok....
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«Reply #11 on: May 14, 2009, 01:49:09 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on January 31, 2009, 08:34:07 AM
After a long Long time I m writing a poetry.. I dont know U like it or not Coz its seems I forget the technique of writing poetry which I learnt here. still M trying.

tumse itni hui hai mohabbat yaar
ki tumhare katir seh lungi duniya k vaar

Fir jaga di tumne mere man mea aash
chod kar jahan saara ji kare aa jaun tere pass

badne lagi ahi bechaniya madam se
chu kar hawaye bhi kuch keh jaati hai mujhse

beet kyun nahi jaata judai ka yea pal
laut kar aajao kar do mujhe fir se ujjwal









Wah Kya Baat hai Sophi.. Bahut Hi Umda aur PYaar Bhari Rachna Pesh Ki hai aapne..!! Aaj Bahut dino Baad Is thread par Nazar Padi.. aur Khud se Hi Yeh Shikayat ho gai ki Itni Pyaari Post Meri Nazar se Bach kaise gai..!! Hahahaha.. Bahut Bahut khooooooooooooooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #12 on: May 14, 2009, 02:27:37 PM »
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Very beautiful Divs..... Both of them  Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: May 15, 2009, 07:22:47 AM »
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Quote from: rahul28rjn on May 14, 2009, 12:30:05 AM
Applause Clapping Smiley bahut khub sophi ji, ek bat aur aapne mujhe kal msg kiya tha uska ans main aapse ol bat kar k deana chahunga agar aap izazat do to aur main pankaj ka frnd hu hum humesh santh rehte hai aur maine yoindia abhi join kiya hai ise liye aapko msg nahi kar sakta hu aur main aapko bahut pahele se janta hu pankaj batata hai aapk bare me ok i am sorry agar aapko bura laga to par main aapse 2 mint ol bat karna chahunga ok....

Thank U Rahul Ji... But who pankaj??
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«Reply #14 on: May 15, 2009, 07:24:10 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on May 14, 2009, 01:49:09 PM

Wah Kya Baat hai Sophi.. Bahut Hi Umda aur PYaar Bhari Rachna Pesh Ki hai aapne..!! Aaj Bahut dino Baad Is thread par Nazar Padi.. aur Khud se Hi Yeh Shikayat ho gai ki Itni Pyaari Post Meri Nazar se Bach kaise gai..!! Hahahaha.. Bahut Bahut khooooooooooooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**

Thank u so much Mann For the lovely Comments:)
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