Tumse Khafa hai Hum ...!!!

by deepika_divya on January 08, 2010, 02:56:46 PM
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«Reply #30 on: January 14, 2010, 10:39:18 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on January 11, 2010, 04:38:32 PM
Thank you so so so so Much Sweetheart :0

Kiske liye likha hai ... pata nahii..aise hi khayal aaya aur likh diya Usual Smile

Such-Such Kaha Do, Kis Ke Liye Dil Dharakta Hai,
Kis Se Khafa Ho Kar Yeh Qalaam Tumne Likha Hai....

Yunhi To Khayalon Me Mohabbat Nahi Hoti "Sophi",
Lagta hai Such Me Tumhe Kisi Se Ishq Ho Gaya Hai....!!!



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #31 on: January 14, 2010, 11:02:15 AM »
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Bahoot Khoob Vikas !

Mohabbat ? hai bhi ki nahi hai
Kese tumko Apne Dil ka Haal Batayein

Jiss ko Hum Chahte hai Bepanaah
Usko hum Kaise Yea baat samjaayein

Karte hai Woh tho dil.lagi sabse
Darte hai kahi unse door na hojayein

Unka Intzaar ab meri Majburi "Vikas"
Kahin aise mea hum hosh na kho jayein

Divya

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«Reply #32 on: January 14, 2010, 12:01:21 PM »
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Darr darr k mohabbat nahi hoti Divya-di
Haale-dil kardo bayaan unse,mat jhijko

Jaante nahi kitna pyarr karti ho tum unse
Eseeliye he woh dil.lagi karte hain sabse

Na hosh khoyega naa majboori he rahegi jab tu
Ijahaare-mohabbat kar degi khulke unse gar tu


Quote from: Sophi on January 14, 2010, 11:02:15 AM
Bahoot Khoob Vikas !

Mohabbat ? hai bhi ki nahi hai
Kese tumko Apne Dil ka Haal Batayein

Jiss ko Hum Chahte hai Bepanaah
Usko hum Kaise Yea baat samjaayein

Karte hai Woh tho dil.lagi sabse
Darte hai kahi unse door na hojayein

Unka Intzaar ab meri Majburi "Vikas"
Kahin aise mea hum hosh na kho jayein

Divya


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«Reply #33 on: January 14, 2010, 12:04:32 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on January 14, 2010, 12:01:21 PM
Darr darr k mohabbat nahi hoti Divya-di
Haale-dil kardo bayaan unse,mat jhijko

Jaante nahi kitna pyarr karti ho tum unse
Eseeliye he woh dil.lagi karte hain sabse

Na hosh khoyega naa majboori he rahegi jab tu
Ijahaare-mohabbat kar degi khulke unse gar tu



Hahahahaahaa.. I cant stop laughing...

but too Good koyal. u made me laugh ...

Woh hamko bata satate hai
Par aate par milne nahi aate hai

Kaise kaise pal guzaar rahe hai
Woh jante hue hame Rulate hai

Kehte hai chahte hai tumko "Divya"
Par Hamse hi woh Nazre chupate hai

Divya
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«Reply #34 on: January 14, 2010, 01:43:33 PM »
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Thanks DIVYA-di aapko hanssi tou aayee.......
mera likha safal.....

Ishq sakhi khel he hai aysa
Log ruthte hain manaate hain

Intzaar karvaate hain woh
Jaan kar sataate hain woh

Kashish unko bhi hoti hai humse milne kee
Par hamaare sabra ka imtihaan lete hain woh




Quote from: Sophi on January 14, 2010, 12:04:32 PM
Hahahahaahaa.. I cant stop laughing...

but too Good koyal. u made me laugh ...

Woh hamko bada satate hai
Aate hain par milne nahi aate hai

Kaise kaise pal guzaar jaate hai
Woh jante hue bhi hame Rulate hai

Kehte hai chahte hai tumko "Divya"
Par Hamse hi woh Nazre churate hain

Divya
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«Reply #35 on: January 14, 2010, 04:51:43 PM »
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Thanx Divya... Usual Smile Usual Smile


Divya & Koyal aapne Bahut hi Lajawab Likha hai.. Bahut khoooob.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #36 on: January 14, 2010, 06:17:46 PM »
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Badi hi sadgi se ruthe ho aap sophi ji bahut khoob alfaaz likhe hai apne.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

koyal n mann ji aapne bhi bahut acha likha hai... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #37 on: January 14, 2010, 06:27:48 PM »
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Ruthne manane k iss khel mein main bhi kuch likhna chahti hu...

Arz hai...

Tu ruhte agar mujhse tou main apne pyar se tujhe manau,
tu udaas ho tou main apni muskaan tujhpe lutau,
terri nigaho se main har roz jiti hu hazaro pal..
bus terre hi ehsas mein jina hai mujhe apna aane wala kal......
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«Reply #38 on: January 15, 2010, 11:26:54 AM »
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Thanks Maan bhai....

Quote from: Mann on January 14, 2010, 04:51:43 PM
Thanx Divya... Usual Smile Usual Smile


Divya & Koyal aapne Bahut hi Lajawab Likha hai.. Bahut khoooob.. Applause Applause



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #39 on: January 15, 2010, 11:30:45 AM »
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Dhanyawaad Geet-di....
Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 14, 2010, 06:17:46 PM
Badi hi sadgi se ruthe ho aap sophi ji bahut khoob alfaaz likhe hai apne.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

koyal n mann ji aapne bhi bahut acha likha hai... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #40 on: January 15, 2010, 11:39:35 AM »
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WAH kya baat hai...Geet-di bahoot achha likha hai aapne.... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 14, 2010, 06:27:48 PM
Ruthne manane k iss khel mein main bhi kuch likhna chahti hu...

Arz hai...

Tu ruhte agar mujhse tou main apne pyar se tujhe manau,
tu udaas ho tou main apni muskaan tujhpe lutau,
terri nigaho se main har roz jiti hu hazaro pal..
bus terre hi ehsas mein jina hai mujhe apna aane wala kal......
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«Reply #41 on: January 15, 2010, 12:27:46 PM »
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wah!!Yahan to khoob ruthne manane ka mausam chala hai..... hamein bhi apni ek poem yaad aa gayi jo humne apne mehboob ko manane ke liye likhi thi....

Thodey se khafa thodey se chup chup Mehboob ko manati “GESU”
 Aap sab dua kijiye ke woh maan jaaye!!!!!

Aankhon se aansoon nikale to sakoon-e-dil mill gaya,
Aapki tamannao ka khoon karne ka sila jaise hamein mill gaya,
Is dil ne bhi in ghabrayi hui dhadkano se gila kar diya ,
Haya-e-aadatt se pareshaan ho gaye jo mehboob mere
Lijiye aaj iss aadatt se bhi hamne mooh pher liya,
Raaton ko jaag kar ho gayi hai jo bhaari palkein
Lo aaj unhe choomne ka wada bhi aapse kar liya,

Bikhrey huey Gesu jo bhaate hain dilbar ko mere
Zulfein na sawaarne ka iraada bhi hamne kar liya,
Khudd mein simatt ke jo reh jaate hain hum ae humdum
Simtenge ab aapki bahon mein lo aaj yeh zahir humne kar diya,
Dabey se lavz jo rukk jaate hain labon tak aake
Jazba-e-ehsaas bayaan karne ka faisla hamne kar liya,
Ae chand tu na aana aaj raat ko zalim,
Tu hamein dekha karta hai yeh kehkar bahut bahana humne kar liya,

Bahut ho gaya yeh chupna chupana,Yeh aapko satana
Lijiye iss bachpane ko alvida hamne kar diya,
Hui hai bahut gustakhiyan aapko tarsaane ki humse,
De dijiye kuch bhi saza aaj kuch bhi kar guzarne ka iraada humne kar liya,
Izaazatt hai aapko gale lagane ki hamein
Yeh jism-o-jaan hawale aapke humne kar diya,
Jannat-e-ehsaas, rooh-e-sakoon,aapka chain-o-karaar
Dekhiye aapke haathon ki lakeeron mein qaid humne kar diya…

Iltijaa hai Kaan pakadh kar Mere Huzoor
Maan jaayiye abb to mehboob mere
Dekhiye to zara aapki jaan ne
Ashqon ki barsaat se yeh rukh-e-roshan saara bhigo diya….

Gesu's Iltijaa!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #42 on: January 15, 2010, 12:39:45 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 14, 2010, 06:17:46 PM
Badi hi sadgi se ruthe ho aap sophi ji bahut khoob alfaaz likhe hai apne.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

koyal n mann ji aapne bhi bahut acha likha hai... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thank you so much Geet ...:)and nice addition by you too..
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«Reply #43 on: January 15, 2010, 12:40:49 PM »
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Quote from: Gesu on January 15, 2010, 12:27:46 PM
wah!!Yahan to khoob ruthne manane ka mausam chala hai..... hamein bhi apni ek poem yaad aa gayi jo humne apne mehboob ko manane ke liye likhi thi....

Thodey se khafa thodey se chup chup Mehboob ko manati “GESU”
 Aap sab dua kijiye ke woh maan jaaye!!!!!

Aankhon se aansoon nikale to sakoon-e-dil mill gaya,
Aapki tamannao ka khoon karne ka sila jaise hamein mill gaya,
Is dil ne bhi in ghabrayi hui dhadkano se gila kar diya ,
Haya-e-aadatt se pareshaan ho gaye jo mehboob mere
Lijiye aaj iss aadatt se bhi hamne mooh pher liya,
Raaton ko jaag kar ho gayi hai jo bhaari palkein
Lo aaj unhe choomne ka wada bhi aapse kar liya,

Bikhrey huey Gesu jo bhaate hain dilbar ko mere
Zulfein na sawaarne ka iraada bhi hamne kar liya,
Khudd mein simatt ke jo reh jaate hain hum ae humdum
Simtenge ab aapki bahon mein lo aaj yeh zahir humne kar diya,
Dabey se lavz jo rukk jaate hain labon tak aake
Jazba-e-ehsaas bayaan karne ka faisla hamne kar liya,
Ae chand tu na aana aaj raat ko zalim,
Tu hamein dekha karta hai yeh kehkar bahut bahana humne kar liya,

Bahut ho gaya yeh chupna chupana,Yeh aapko satana
Lijiye iss bachpane ko alvida hamne kar diya,
Hui hai bahut gustakhiyan aapko tarsaane ki humse,
De dijiye kuch bhi saza aaj kuch bhi kar guzarne ka iraada humne kar liya,
Izaazatt hai aapko gale lagane ki hamein
Yeh jism-o-jaan hawale aapke humne kar diya,
Jannat-e-ehsaas, rooh-e-sakoon,aapka chain-o-karaar
Dekhiye aapke haathon ki lakeeron mein qaid humne kar diya…

Iltijaa hai Kaan pakadh kar Mere Huzoor
Maan jaayiye abb to mehboob mere
Dekhiye to zara aapki jaan ne
Ashqon ki barsaat se yeh rukh-e-roshan saara bhigo diya….

Gesu's Iltijaa!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you so so so much !

Waaah waah Waah Kya bahoot Bahoot umda likha hai ... Awesome creation..
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«Reply #44 on: January 15, 2010, 12:47:57 PM »
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Gesuji badi sunder rachna hai aapki....
Shabdo ka chayan aur upyog kabile tariff hai.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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