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soudagar
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Lab sile rahte hai aur dil hi dil mein ijhar karte hain
kaise kahein ae sanam tumse kitna pyar karte hain
dil to chahta hai main har waqt bs tera deedar karun
tujhe aakho mein basaun aur tere dil mein utarta chalun
par khawabon mein hi bas tumse aakhein char karte hain
kaise kahein ae sanam tumhe kitna pyar karte hain
mohabbat mein teri maine ek pyara sa arman pala hai
sab se dur khuli vadi me apna ek aashiyana bna dala hai
aashiyane ke dar drwaje tere hee aane ka intzar krte hain
kaise kahein ae sanam tumhe kitna pyar karte hain
teri ek muskan ki khatir sab kuch lutane ko taiyar hain
bas tumhe apna banane ke liye kab se beqarar hain
kar to dein khulke izhar par teri naa se meri srkar darte hain
kaise kahein ae sanam tumhe kitna pyar karte hain
5 saal gujar gaye par unse dil ki baat keh na paaye
har ROSE DAY par gulab bhi kitab mein pde pde murjhaye
is bar to dil ki baat keh denge bas hr pal yahi vichar karte hai
kaise kahein ae sanam tumhe kitna pyar karte hain
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«Reply #1 on: February 07, 2013, 11:30:53 AM » |
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waah janab boht khub
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«Reply #3 on: February 07, 2013, 11:55:00 AM » |
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baht khoob post Saudagar sahab.
aap lambe post par kuch kuch wajandaar shabdo ka use kia kijie aapki shayri aur bhi nikhar jaegi :
khus rahie
likhte rahie
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«Reply #5 on: February 07, 2013, 01:05:45 PM » |
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Bahut bahut khoobsurat
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«Reply #6 on: February 07, 2013, 01:18:16 PM » |
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Lab sile rahte hai aur dil hi dil mein ijhar karte hain
kaise kahein ae sanam tumse kitna pyar karte hain
dil to chahta hai main har waqt bs tera deedar karun
tujhe aakho mein basaun aur tere dil mein utarta chalun
par khawabon mein hi bas tumse aakhein char karte hain
kaise kahein ae sanam tumhe kitna pyar karte hain
mohabbat mein teri maine ek pyara sa arman pala hai
sab se dur khuli vadi me apna ek aashiyana bna dala hai
aashiyane ke dar drwaje tere hee aane ka intzar krte hain
kaise kahein ae sanam tumhe kitna pyar karte hain
teri ek muskan ki khatir sab kuch lutane ko taiyar hain
bas tumhe apna banane ke liye kab se beqarar hain
kar to dein khulke izhar par teri naa se meri srkar darte hain
kaise kahein ae sanam tumhe kitna pyar karte hain
5 saal gujar gaye par unse dil ki baat keh na paaye
har ROSE DAY par gulab bhi kitab mein pde pde murjhaye
is bar to dil ki baat keh denge bas hr pal yahi vichar karte hai
kaise kahein ae sanam tumhe kitna pyar karte hain
v.vry good beta. I loved the last four lines. good  |
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«Reply #7 on: February 07, 2013, 03:04:07 PM » |
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beautiful creation dheron daad
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«Reply #9 on: February 07, 2013, 04:49:31 PM » |
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Bahut badhiya saudagar jee
Aapko bhi Rose Day mubarak ho..
Kaash har din Rose day ho..aur aap apni kalam se ..bazm me apne umda kalaamo se..shirqat karen
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«Reply #11 on: February 08, 2013, 06:15:46 AM » |
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soudagarji bahoot bahoot khoob cha gaye ji aap wah wah dheron daad
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~Hriday~
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kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.
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«Reply #13 on: February 13, 2013, 05:21:39 PM » |
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Shukriya rajan ji
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«Reply #14 on: February 13, 2013, 06:14:25 PM » |
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bahut khoob saudagar ji , aap ki kavita marmsparshi hai , dheron badhaiyan...
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on eTI community..
