~Tumse Muhabbat Toh Nahin (Shikha)~

by Shikha12 on November 17, 2008, 12:18:04 PM
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«Reply #15 on: November 18, 2008, 06:07:04 AM »
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Wah!! Wah!!! Wah!! kaya baat hai Mahiya, hamesha ki tarah kamal@dhamal.burra likha hai. bahoot he pyari kavita likhi hai apne.. bahoot acha laga... aise he likhati raho aor hume padne ka moka deti raho Usual Smile
SG and Bekarar( Prateek) acha sath diya hai apne Mahiya ka.


Bahut bahut shukriya Pooja di...

Aap aise hi padhte raho, saath dete raho, likhte raho... hausla-afzaai karte raho... Bus aise hi janchte ho muskuraate hue, humesha aise hi muskuraate raho.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: November 18, 2008, 06:19:33 AM »
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Shikha

Kya baat hai Big Boss Applause Applause Applause

Bahut dino ke baad tumhara kalam padha jise padh kar mann ati prasan hua Usual Smile Thumbs UP

@Sanjeev and @Sajid
Bahut acha saath diya aap  logon ne Shikha ka Thumbs UP Applause

Keep going --> Tumse Muhabbat Toh Nahi Winking Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: November 18, 2008, 06:47:00 AM »
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 Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Mahiya ji!
Congrats! It's a lovely high class creation!
                     - abd bundeli
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«Reply #18 on: November 18, 2008, 07:27:17 AM »
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It's a beautiful and well written creation indeed, well done MahiyaApplause Applause Applause
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«Reply #19 on: November 18, 2008, 01:22:06 PM »
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its beautiful mahi  Clapping Smiley


zakhm koi mera na nazar aaye tumko
jism nahi dil main apna ghayel karti hoo
aur jo aaker chala bhi gaya mahi mera
bevajah phir q uska intezaar karti hoon


Bahot Badhiya sajid Ji,.
Waise Hum Ispar Reply Dene Waale The Comments ke saath,.
Aur System DC Hogaya Tha,.

Sorry Yaar,.
Tum Bohat Achch Likhte Ho,.

Intezaar Karna Teri Kismat Mein Likha Hai "Sajid",.
Shikwa Phir Kyun Karta Hai Tu Zindagi Se Apni,.

Bujh Gaye Charaag Mehfilon Mein To Kya Hua "Dost",.
Roshan Karde Jahaan Ko Tu, Ghazlon Ki Roshni Se Apni,.

______________________________-Jaanasheen-

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«Reply #20 on: November 18, 2008, 03:32:00 PM »
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Bahot Badhiya sajid Ji,.
Waise Hum Ispar Reply Dene Waale The Comments ke saath,.
Aur System DC Hogaya Tha,.

Sorry Yaar,.
Tum Bohat Achch Likhte Ho,.

Intezaar Karna Teri Kismat Mein Likha Hai "Sajid",.
Shikwa Phir Kyun Karta Hai Tu Zindagi Se Apni,.

Bujh Gaye Charaag Mehfilon Mein To Kya Hua "Dost",.
Roshan Karde Jahaan Ko Tu, Ghazlon Ki Roshni Se Apni,.

______________________________-Jaanasheen-


har jawab se behtar jawab hain tera azeem
bas yahi soch kar bevajah tujse sawal karte hain

                                        -sg-
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«Reply #21 on: November 18, 2008, 04:47:46 PM »
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har jawab se behtar jawab hain tera azeem
bas yahi soch kar bevajah tujse sawal karte hain

                                        -sg-


mujhe khabar hai bulaye bhi na aayega sajid,
fir kyun tere naa ane ka malal karte hain
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«Reply #22 on: November 18, 2008, 04:52:46 PM »
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mujhe khabar hai bulaye bhi na aayega sajid,
fir kyun tere naa ane ka malal karte hain
Yu to koi ehsan nahi tera mere sar par
Bekarar phir q bevajah hum tera ehtaram karte hain
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«Reply #23 on: November 18, 2008, 05:07:21 PM »
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nice work Lil bro, Bekarar ji and SG!!
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«Reply #24 on: November 19, 2008, 09:04:49 AM »
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Shikha

Kya baat hai Big Boss Applause Applause Applause

Bahut dino ke baad tumhara kalam padha jise padh kar mann ati prasan hua Usual Smile Thumbs UP

@Sanjeev and @Sajid
Bahut acha saath diya aap  logon ne Shikha ka Thumbs UP Applause

Keep going --> Tumse Muhabbat Toh Nahi Winking Usual Smile

Haye Oye.. Aapki Shudh Hindi.. Laughing hard

Aur yeh Big Boss Kaun??

Neways.. Tanks of Thanks for visiting my Post.. Usual Smile and giving your comments..
Take Care, and Keep Smiling Always.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: November 19, 2008, 09:06:20 AM »
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Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Mahiya ji!
Congrats! It's a lovely high class creation!
                     - abd bundeli


Abd Ji.. Its great honor for me to have your visit to my post..
Thanks a lot for this much honor.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: November 19, 2008, 09:07:15 AM »
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It's a beautiful and well written creation indeed, well done MahiyaApplause Applause Applause

Thanks a Lot.. Celmira..
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«Reply #27 on: November 19, 2008, 09:10:20 AM »
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Azeem, Sajid Ji, Sanjeev Ji.. Bahut Khoob.. Usual Smile
Giley Shikwe bhi ho toh zara shayarana mizaaz mein ho... Hai Naa..??  icon_geek
 

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«Reply #28 on: November 20, 2008, 02:31:58 PM »
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Ha ha ha...
Ladd nahin rahey Anjaan ji.. Haan ek doosre ki tareef jaroor kar rahe hai... Aur phir woh tareef hi kya, jisey soch samajh kar aur control kar ke karna padey.. Usual Smile

Thanks Anjaan Ji.. for your valuable visit and comments.. Usual Smile
sahee baat hai! hahaha! keep it goin... and mear visit aur valuable? hum hto aap sub k agaay bahot chohtay hain! lol! (literally)
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«Reply #29 on: November 20, 2008, 02:47:43 PM »
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'MAHIYA' WELLDONE AND NICE WORK

ZINDAGI MEIN AISE LAMHE BHI AATEIN HAI
KI HUME HO TOH JATI HAI LEKIN MIL NAHI PAATI HAI
KHUSHIYAN TOH KAREEB LAGNE LAGTI HAI
MAGAR NASEEB DHOKA DE JATA HAI
OR ZINDAGI KO MAYOOS KAR JATA HAI
AGAR HOTI BHI NAHI TOH DIL SOCHTA
KI KYU NAHI HUI HUMKO MOHABBAT ,KYA HUM
SAMJH NAHI PAAYE AAPKI NAJAKAT
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AREY DIL MEIN YE HULCHUL HOTI HI HAI
KISI KO HOTA TOH KISI KI RAHE JATI HAI
JISKO HOTA WOH TOH USKO MILTA NAHI
JISKI RAHE JATI WOH INTEZAAR MEIN HI DOOB JATA HAI
KISI KO KISI SE SHIKWA TOH KISI KO KISI SE GILA
KISI KO KUCH NAHI MILA JISKO MILA USKE NASEEB NE USKE SATH KHELA
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**************************************MUSKAN*********************
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